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By The Sea
By The Sea
By
Omar Mack
Based on:
“Annabel Lee” and other works
by Edgar Allan Poe
2010
Cast of Characters
Allan: mid 20s; a writer; In love
with Annabel; HIV positive
from a blood transfusion but
he doesn’t know it yet
Scene
Time
1987-1988
ACT I
Scene 1
Lights up on a beach on the Ionian Sea. Enter a
small group of children, maybe 2-3, of about 8
years. They frolic about the sand
freely. Eventually, they find their own area to
sit and play in the sand. The audience’s
attention is then directed to a young man of about
mid 20’s sitting on the dunes, Allan. He has a
small notebook with him in which he writes. He
wonders aloud as he writes...
ALLAN
“Romance, who loves to nod and sing, with drowsy head
and folded wing. Among the green leaves as they shake
far down within some shadowy lake...”
The nearby congregation of youth laugh heartily as
they begin to build sandcastles amongst
them. Enter Annabel who smiles watching
them. She sees Allan but doesn’t approach him
yet, seeing he’s in mid thought. She listens as
he speaks aloud but looks at the children instead
of him. He notices her and is somehow filled with
inspiration.
ALLAN
ANNABEL
Finally approaching
That’s very beautiful.
ALLAN
Coolly. Attractive.
Thank you. It’s very dear to me. I’ve been meaning to
find the significance behind these words for some
time...and I think I just did.
Smiles
ANNABEL
Smiles brightly
Well then. My name’s Annabel.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 2.
Chuckles
ANNABEL
Chuckles
Well what about this?
She reaches out for the notebook which he gives
her. She flips through it, skimming.
ALLAN
That’s just something that I’ve had on my mind for a
while but haven’t really formed into words yet.
Looks at her
But it seems like we were meant to meet because now I’m
full of words, of feelings.
ANNABEL
And that’s because of me?
ALLAN
Well, not to be frank or anything, but you’re
absolutely beautiful.
ANNABEL
Blushing, laughs softly
Well thank you. That’s nice to hear.
ALLAN
May I?...
He puts his hand out for the notebook and she
gives it to him with a smile. He opens back to
the page he was on before, looks at her
thoughtfully, as if her were about to draw her,
and writes:
“While in the wild wood I did lie...a child with a most
knowing eye.”
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 3.
ALLAN
Well we’re all good with something. What do you do
here in Catania?
ANNABEL
Well my dad’s stationed at Sigonella a little up the
way and I’m just here enjoying Europe. I work at a day
care on the base but that’s about it.
ALLAN
Well then you have an enhanced maternal instinct.
Smiles
ANNABEL
Laughs
Sure
They both laugh as the sound of the children
return with a loud shout and playful laughter.
ANNABEL
Sighs
Oh how I envy little children. They don’t have a care
in the world and all they ever do is play and enjoy
life.
He points
For example, those children know about the idea of
architecture and conceptual imagination; in short,
creation.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 4.
ANNABEL
(Repeats)
“...Waves on the ocean.” Hm. I never thought of it
that way.
Rising
Should we meet again sometime?
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 5.
ANNABEL
Yeah, sure, I’d love that. Do you have a piece of--
ALLAN
He hands here a piece of paper from his notebook.
Don’t worry about it. Here’s my number. Call anytime.
He smiles and leaves. Annabel smiles. She laughs
softly.
ANNABEL
Admiring the paper. Sighs
Allan...
She pockets the paper and exits.
BLACKOUT
Scene 2
The stage is split and shows to two homes of the
lovers’ parents. SL is Juliah’s, Allan’s
mother’s, house. It’s quaint and comfortable, not
too big. SR is the home of Jonah and Annabel. It
is standard Naval housing, nice and organized,
perfectly sized for the two of them. All action
outside of just the two talking can be pantomimed
or actually performed depending on stage
size. The following action happens
simultaneously.
Jonah is sitting on a recliner, reading a book.
Enter Annabel SR
ANNABEL ALLAN
Hi, Daddy! (Enters SL
(She kisses him behind Juliah
on the cheek who is in
and crosses to the kitchen
the kitchen.) preparing
dinner.)
Hey, Mom.
(He kisses her
on the cheek.)
Smells good.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 6.
JONAH JULIAH
(Surprised.) (Smiles. Still
You’re awfully chipper preparing the
tonight. I take it food.)
you had fun at the I’m making roast
beach today?... chicken. What’d you
do today?
ANNABEL ALLAN
(As she gets (Sitting at a
something to small dinner
drink from the table.)
kitchen.) Oh, I just went to the
Yeah. You know, I beach to write, get
just walked around and some thoughts down. I
took in the salty air was gonna see if the
and I met someone- beautiful Ionian could
inspire me.
(They both
chuckle.)
JONAH JULIAH
(Looking up Well did it?
from his book)
A boy?
ANNABEL ALLAN
(Like it’s Not exactly. I was
nothing. Still inspired by beauty
tending to her but it wasn’t from the
business to sea. It was a girl.
try and act
cool about the
situation.)
Yeah. A boy. His
name’s Allan. He’s a
writer. A really good
one too.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 7.
JONAH JULIAH
(Starting to (She
rise. A little immediately
stern) stops. She
Now, Annabel- looks at him
quickly. The
tone of her
voice isn’t
panic, but
a pleasant
shock that is
confusing to
Allan.)
A GIRL?!
ANNABEL ALLAN
(Crossing to (Looking at her
Jonah before almost as if
he approaches she’s crazy.)
her.) ...Yes. Her name’s
Oh, come on, Dad. I’m Annabel. Are you all
22 now. I know how right?
to handle and protect
myself when it comes
to boys. And besides,
Allan isn’t like every
other boy.
(Crossing,
she sits on
a chair. Jonah
remains
standing.)
He’s sweet and
charming. He wonders
about life and has
a beautiful view of
it. His writing is
so beautiful, and of
course so is he.
(Looking up
at Jonah, who
is smiling
softly.)
I think I may love
him, Daddy.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 8.
JONAH JULIAH
(Crosses to (Beaming. She
her) seems really
Well, Annabel. You’re happy about
right. You’re not something but
my little Bella Bear at the same
anymore. You’re a time extremely
smart woman, just like worried.)
your mother was, and I ...Uh, yes. Yes. I’m
trust your judgment, fine. You said her
especially if you feel name is Annabel,
this strongly about right?
him. (She returns to
cooking)
ANNABEL ALLAN
(Rising) (Shaking off
Thanks, Daddy. the awkward
(They hug and feeling that
Jonah kissing was just
her on the present from
forehead.) his mother’s
actions.)
Yeah. She’s real
pretty and her
father’s stationed
at Sigonella, like Dad
was.
JONAH JULIAH
Well, I better turn (Pauses.
in for the night. I Searching for
have to be back at some sort of
the base by 0700 explanation
tomorrow. Good night. for her odd
(He exits.) behavior.)
He’s in the Navy?
ANNABEL
’Night, Daddy.
(She sits,
smiling, and
continues
to think of
Allan.)
FADE TO BLACK SR
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 9.
ALLAN
Yes. And I think I
love her.
JULIAH
Rising
Mom. Seriously? That’s not gonna happen. I mean sure
it happens to military families but really, what are
the odds? Let’s just see how things play out, ok?
He hugs her.
JULIAH
Oh, alright. Well, I’m glad you found a girl...
Quickly
...Because you seemed like you were all alone in that
apartment of yours. Are you sure you don’t want to
live here with me?
ALLAN
Well, right now, I’m pretty damn sure, Mom,
considering.
They laugh.
JULIAH
Alright. But do be safe though, ok.
ALLAN
Quizzical but ignoring the feeling.
Alright, Mom. I will be.
Interlude
The sounds of two telephones ringing can be heard
followed by overlapping conversation and laughter,
which goes on for a while. Finally, it dies out
ALLAN V.O.
So how does this Saturday sound? Same spot on the
beach?
ANNABEL V.O.
Sounds good.
Scene 3
Lights up on the same beach scene. Allan is
seated on the sand with a bag, two pails and
shovels next to him. The group of kids is there
as well, except for the bully, but they’re in the
background and aren’t as loud. If anything they
can whisper and the noise will carry fine, but
they can just mouth their conversation
(*Director’s discretion*). Allan is looking out
at the water, admiring it, when Annabel enters.
ANNABEL
Playfully. Smiling.
Hey, stranger.
ALLAN
Quickly rising to greet her. Smiling brightly.
Hi.
ANNABEL
Noticing he’s empty handed
Not writing today?
ALLAN
ANNABEL
Unsure but still smiling in a sort of romantic
excitement.
What?
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 11.
ALLAN
Reaches behind him and shows her the pails and
shovels.
We’re gonna build sandcastles.
ANNABEL
Laughing.
Sandcastles?
ALLAN
Laughing.
Yes, sandcastles. We’re going to build our own little
kingdom by the sea. And maybe, for just this moment,
we can remember what it was like to be a kid again.
Remember the freedom and the fun.
ANNABEL
She pauses, looking at him admiringly. She laughs
softly, and with a smile:
Sure.
The children exit as the beach slowly fades,
however the scene between the lovers still plays
out silently. The following action shows the
passage of time from the day at the beach to the
announcement of Annabel’s pregnancy. However, the
action takes place on each side of the stage at
the parents’ homes while each of the lovers tell
their parents while the other continues to build
the sandcastle kingdom.
ANNABEL (cont’d)
the money for the new apartment too. It’s really going
to help...
JONAH
ANNABEL
With our new family. Daddy...I’m pregnant.
Jonah drops his glasses. He slowly rises, looking
from Annabel’s stomach to her face, a face full of
surprise and slight worry.
JONAH
Oh, Annabel.
ANNABEL
Dr. Frances said I’m about 6 weeks along.
Smiling soothingly.
Daddy, it’s ok. He said that it’s good that we know
early on so that the proper steps can be taken to
ensure I still receive treatment without hurting the
baby. And transmission is rare so the baby should be
perfectly healthy.
JONAH
Tears in his eyes, he hugs her tightly.
Oh, Annabel. I’m so happy for you.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 13.
ALLAN
Hey, Mom.
JULIAH
Chuckles
It’s great actually. The new apartment is really
great.
JULIAH
Back to reading.
I just don’t understand why you decided on two
bedrooms.
Half-joking, half-stern. Looking over her
glasses.
I thought you loved Annabel.
ALLAN
Sarcastically
Ha ha, Mom.
Crossing and sitting next to her.
Actually, Mom, it’s a little something we’ve been
working on, and we just found out that we were
apparently doing something right...
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 14.
JULIAH
Snapping back to "reality," but still in a daze
I’m said I’m really happy for you. Yes, it’s great.
It’s wonderful.
JULIAH
How far along is she?
ALLAN
Letting go to look her in the face.
The doctor said about 6 weeks.
Checking his watch.
Well, I’d better go. We’re going to look for some
colors for the baby’s room. I’ll keep you updated,
alright?
JULIAH
Okay. Yes, please do.
ALLAN
Alright. Bye, Mom.
Allan exits the "house" and returns to the
"beach." The couple is still building their
sandcastles while talking and laughing (silently
however.)
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 15.
JULIAH
Oh my God. What have I done? I was trying to protect
my son but instead I’ve now put another life at risk-
She stops and looks toward where Allan left.
Two more lives. Goddammit! How could I have thought
that what I was doing was right? He’s bound to find
out sooner or later once the symptoms start...but that
may be too late for the baby. So what do I do now?...
The lights fade SL and come back up on the beach
scene, where Allan and Annabel are putting the
final touches on their creation.
ALLAN
See? You’re good at creating things.
ANNABEL
Smiling.
Yeah, I guess so.
ALLAN
ALLAN
Wait a second.
He reaches into his bag and pulls out a small box.
He opens it and puts it on top of the sandcastle.
Okay. Go ahead.
Annabel takes the picture. She slowly lowers the
camera, looking at the box, inside of which is a
ring.
ANNABEL
Smiling
What is that?
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 16.
ALLAN
Let’s call it a crown for my princess.
He pick up the box and takes the ring out. He
kneels in front of Annabel.
Annabel, will you marry me?
BLACKOUT
Interlude
Sirens sound loudly and the sound of Annabel
coughing violently can be heard offstage.
ALLAN OFFSTAGE:
Annabel? Annabel?! Annabel! Oh my god!
Scene 4
Lights up on a hospital waiting room. Allan is
sitting in a chair, his head down, sobbing.
Juliah hurriedly enters and runs to Allan.
JULIAH
Oh, Allan!
She hugs him and sits next to him
ALLAN
Mom!
He hugs her tightly and weeps harder into her
shoulder.
JULIAH
What happened?
ALLAN
Composing himself enough to tell her.
She said she was cold so I made sure to give her some
extra blankets and she said she’d be fine. And then in
the middle of the night, she woke up coughing really
hard and throwing up. I took her temperature and it
was 106 so I drove her here.
JULIAH
Scared.
...Oh God.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 17.
ALLAN
Mom. The doctor said something else-
Jonah rushes in.
JONAH
How is she?
Dr. Frances enters looking deeply saddened.
JONAH
Dr. Frances, how is she. Is Annabel alright?
DR. FRANCES
I’m sorry to say she’s not, actually.
JONAH
Approaching him.
What do you mean?
They converse quitely off to the side.
JULIAH
What else happened?
ALLAN
During this, Dr. Frances silently tells Jonah all
of the information about Annabel. Slowly but
surely, the worry on Jonah’s face turns to rage.
Well, Annabel has this thing called Common Variable
Immunodeficiency. She’s had it for a long time now.
But somehow, they said she aquired HIV and the mix of
the two in her body caused a horrible reaction and now
she’s dying.
Dr. Frances exits, leaving Jonah standing, a
volcano about to erupt.
It was weird because she never told me that she was HIV
positive. But it got really weird when they checked my
blood-
Jonah turns and rushes toward Allan. He punches
him across the face, knocking Allan to the floor.
Juliah screams in terror.
JONAH
YOU SON OF A BITCH! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO MY
DAUGHTER? YOU KNEW! YOU KNEW AND YOU DIDN’T TELL HER!
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 18.
JULIAH
Stop! Please, stop!
JONAH
No! He knew he was sick and he went and gave it to
Annabel.
To Allan
I trusted you! I trusted her judgment! She said you
weren’t just another guy that would use her, but you
were and still are.
He kicks him and prepares to punch again but
Juliah blocks the blow and throws him to the
ground.
JULIAH
HE DIDN’T KNOW ANYTHIHNG BECAUSE I DIDN’T TELL HIM THAT
HE HAD HIV!
The waiting room falls silent. Jonah is frozen
with shock. Allan looks at his mother with
surprise and confusion.
ALLAN
...Mom?
JULIAH
Turning to face her son.
Yes, Allan, you have HIV. You’ve had it for five years
now.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 19.
ALLAN
Rising slowly. He crosses slowly to her, full of
rage. Jonah rises also, watching intently.
Are you serious right now? You’re telling me that I’ve
had HIV for five years and you didn’t tell me because
you thought I was GAY?! Are you fucking crazy? First
of all, I’m obviously not gay. I LOVED ANNABEL AND WE
WERE GOING TO HAVE A BABY GIRL!
This catches the attention of both parents.
Juliah looks up, gasping. Jonah is taken aback.
That’s right, Mom. You’re precious little secret is in
that room killing my wife and my daughter! Because of
you, none of us will ever get to see her, and my little
Eulalie will never know anything of this world.
JULIAH
Quietly.
A daughter...I was going to have a granddaughter.
JONAH
JONAH (cont’d)
woman. I hope you know that your hands can never be
washed of this. They will be stained forever with the
blood of Annabel and Eulalie. How will you be able to
live with yourself now?
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 21.
ALLAN
It was many and many a year ago,
In a kingdom by the sea,
That a maiden there lived whom you may know
By the name of Annabel Lee;
And this maiden she lived with no other thought
Than to love and be loved by me.
I was a child and she was a child,
In this kingdom by the sea;
But we loved with a love that was more than love-
I and my Annabel Lee;
With a love that the winged seraphs of heaven
Coveted her and me.
And this was the reason that, long ago,
In this kingdom by the sea,
A wind blew out of a cloud, chilling
My beautiful Annabel Lee;
So that her highborn kinsman came
And bore her away from me,
To shut her up in a sepulchre
In this kingdom by the sea.