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    The document discusses changes that have occurred in modern families compared to the past. It notes that families now often have more than one breadwinner, with both parents providing financial support, due to fewer jobs providing stability for single-earner families. It also says parental roles are more likely to be exchanged, with mothers now having equal opportunities for education and work, allowing the other parent to take on childcare and housework duties. The document argues these changes lead to more stable family finances by sharing the breadwinning role and allowing people to pursue their dreams or talents. In conclusion, it asserts that changes in family hierarchy and responsibilities are a positive step toward a better world.

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    The document discusses changes that have occurred in modern families compared to the past. It notes that families now often have more than one breadwinner, with both parents providing financial support, due to fewer jobs providing stability for single-earner families. It also says parental roles are more likely to be exchanged, with mothers now having equal opportunities for education and work, allowing the other parent to take on childcare and housework duties. The document argues these changes lead to more stable family finances by sharing the breadwinning role and allowing people to pursue their dreams or talents. In conclusion, it asserts that changes in family hierarchy and responsibilities are a positive step toward a better world.

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    Bài mẫu 8.

    0++ thầy Toàn ZIM

    (1) In the past few decades, the patterns of a family have greatly diversified. (2) There are
    some changes regarding its organization and members’ role; and in my opinion, these
    changes can be seen as a progress.

    (3)Families at present have undergone two main differences compared to the past. (4)First,
    the structure of a nuclear family now can have more than one breadwinner, who
    normally is the father. (5)This is because in the modern world, only a few jobs could secure
    the stability of single-earner families, which forces both parents to be the financial
    supporters. (6) Second, the trend that parents exchange their roles has become more
    common. (7) As the result of women’s protest for their rights, mothers now have equal
    opportunities for education and work, which allows the other spouse to assume
    responsibility as a stay-at-home parent to take care of the children and the housework.

    (8) From my perspective, those changes in the family’s structure and parental roles are positive
    for a number of reasons. (9) That both parents can become the breadwinners would ensure
    the stable finance of a family, which not only directly eases the burden that the father
    have to bear in order to support the whole family but also enables the mother to pursue
    her dream job. (10) From another angle, it is an upward step that people are at liberty
    to do what they like and what they are good at. (11)Women can follow their dream
    and stabilize her family financial status if they are better at work than their husbands.

    (12) In conclusion, I think the changes occurring to a family’s hierarchy and members’
    responsibilities are a positive step toward a better world.

    (276 words)

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