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Timed Writing Prose Passage 1
Timed Writing Prose Passage 1
Timed Writing
In this excerpt, it can be inferred that Estrella is portrayed as a young girl who is angry
towards different people for different reasons. It starts with a “red tool chest like a suitcase near
the door”. Estrella sees no purpose for this tool chest to be in front of her door as if it were to be
there to guard. It “seemed as confusing and foreign as the alphabet she could not decipher”,
this sentence used as figurative language made Estrella confused and silent with rage. It is
written in this excerpt that Estrella’s mother believes that her daughter is “a victim of the evil
eye.”
One of Estrella’s teacher’s Mrs. Horn was curious of the fact that why her mother didn’t
give Estrella a bath. Estrella never thought of herself as being dirty since she wiped her face
every morning and had her mother do her hair neatly. However, all of that didn’t seem enough
for Mrs. Horn. She describes Mrs. Horn as the woman “who had the face of a crumpled Kleenex
and a nose like a hook.” This quote seems quite coincidental since it relates back to the shapes
of different tools.
Overall, this tool chest still seems to be the main thing on Estrella’s mind. She brings up
the man who is the owner of this tool chest which is, Perfecto Flores. Perfecto also seems to be
a migrant who doesn’t really have a record of his birth but only a date that appears in his
dreams, 1917. “No one remembered knowing him before his arrival, but everyone used his
name to describe a job well done.” From this quote I got to understand that even though
Perfecto didn’t really have a record of who he was, the tool box was an object that
demonstrated that to those around him.
Estrella was able to acknowledge Perfecto’s ways with his tool chest. It gave Perfecto a
reason to work and have something to do that he was good at, Estrella understood that. “She
lifted the pry bar in her hand, felt the coolness of iron and power of function, weighed the
significance it awarded her, and soon she came to understand how essential it was to know
these things. That was when she began to read.” Estrella was able to realize the ability and
power that Perfecto had with his tool chest and all the things he could do with it that Estrella
believed that she could have the ability and power to be able to read.