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Rhetoric Analysis Essay
Rhetoric Analysis Essay
We Stand Together
Cameron Tickerhoof
Professor Babcock
English 137
We Stand Together
How could a society function while a large percentage of the population feels
discriminated against every day? A country is built by its citizens and how they come together as
a whole. As America developed, white people continuously discriminated against many types of
people. Over time, the discriminated parties fought to tear down these injustices, such as Jim
Crowe laws and police brutality on African Americans, to get to the point we are at now, but this
point in time is still not fair enough for every group of people. Citizens often refuse to
acknowledge the racist components still existing in America. Stand Your Ground law protests
and the Black Lives Matter movement are two parties united with a similar cause. While most of
the country remains ignorant towards daily injustice, these movements fight racial injustice by
illuminating the discrimination present in everyday life, while also showing the humanity in
The two movements focus on different key points, but they have overarching themes in
common. The Stand Your Ground (SYG) protests come from the Stand Your Ground laws
existing in the majority of American states. While intricacies differ in many states, the general
idea remains constant: a person has no need to retreat, and if he or she feels threatened, he or she
may take lethal force. The protests center around the fact that this law has allowed many
shooters to avoid indictment because they felt threatened. This law’s formula has led to many
calls for reform of the law. The protests also cover the fact that many of the dropped cases are
centered around the murder of an African American person by a white person. According to
PBS.org, a white person killing an African American is 354% more likely to be ruled justifiable
in court than an African American killing a white person in Stand Your Ground states
(Childress). Such statistics are a major reason as to why the Stand Your Ground protests and the
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Black Lives Matter Movement overlap each other. Black Lives Matters Movement focuses on
the injustices against African Americans on all levels of society. The movement exists because
many parts of society do not value African Americans as much as white people in the United
States. If a law that has such strong racial preferences still exists, how can the Black Lives
The ideology of the two movements is fairly similar and relatively simple: all lives are
important and should be treated with equal respect. The focus is on the value of lives, and the
importance of keeping society equal for everyone. SYG law protests take the idea that no one
person should be allowed to kill another simply because one party may have felt threatened. The
protest further builds upon that idea by bringing the discrepancies of each race related to the law,
such as the previously mentioned statistic from PBS.org. Without racial equality, the law can be
twisted even further allowing many murders to walk away free. The value of life is a key
component of the ideology of the Black Lives Matter Movement as well. A person’s life is
worth much more than the color of his or her skin. The main goal of the movement is to reach a
point in time where everyone is valued equally as humans. Until this point is reached, many
protests and movements will exist with the intent of erasing racial injustice and entitlement. At
face value, the context of each movement is very different and relates to a different cause, but by
looking a little further, it is understandable how the two relate to each other. The movements
play on the emotions by advertising that every race has their differences, but we are all one large
community. Humanity is the outstanding byproduct of the two movements, and humanity is the
only word that will allow any full progression of both causes.
The emotions and empathy of humans are used in both movements. Every type of person
belongs to a community, and we all have a shared race or group of people. The Black Lives
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Matter Movements wants to allow its community to feel safe and secure in the larger community
that is our country. “We demand an end to the war against Black people. Since this country’s
inception there have been named and unnamed wars on our communities. We demand an end to
the criminalization, incarceration, and killing of our people.” (The Movement for Black Lives).
The quote is the movement’s end goal for its respective community. Each community has strong
ties with each other, so each of the discriminations and crimes against African Americans affect
the people as a whole. The Black Lives Matter Movement emphasizes this to make its cause
more appealing to the everyday American. SYG law protests use the same type of emotion
focused around community. Some communities are broken by the losses caused by SYG
because many of the shooters never face any kind of justice. 28-year-old Markeis McGlockton
was shot in front of his girlfriend and two children, collapsed and died in front of his third child,
and his gunman was initially allowed to walk free because of the SYG law in Florida (Miller).
This is the type of shooting that drives the progress of the SYG protests. A father murdered in
view of his children is a story that has a strong pathetic appeal as no one would ever want to
experience the death of a loved one. Michael Drejka, the shooter, was not arrested on site
because the sheriff believed what he did was lawful. Protests only became more prominent after
this shooting and refusal of arrest, which eventually resulted in Drejka’s arrest. The pathos
drove these protests in this specific case, and the protests have continued to put pressure on the
SYG law in states across the country. This pressure has led to many well-known figures and
Protests and movements require credibility to make any progress in their respective
fights. This credibility gives the protests a strong basis and strengthens the reasoning behind the
cause in the eyes of the people. The protests have strong followings from many African
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Americans and other races alike. The large number of people fighting for both causes has
resulted in many politicians siding with each movement, further building upon the credibility of
each fight. Many politicians promise to reform the SYG laws as a part of his or her campaign.
The Black Lives Matter Movement has also seen much support from many big names. Most
recently, Nike created an ad including former NFL quarterback Colin Kaepernick which further
adds credibility to the fight for equality. Colin Kaepernick originally brought an immense
amount of attention towards the Black Lives Matter Movement by controversially kneeling
during the national anthem at the start of an NFL game (Meyersohn). As Black Lives Matter
progresses, more racial problems in this society with begin to surface, and the statistics
surrounding the SYG law and racial bias will become clearer. This clarity is vital for the
progression of both movements. Because the two causes are connected, they help portray each
The message both movements try to communicate is very logical and structured. Black
lives matter is a simple phrase that has a strong following and background. It is organized
around the idea that racism still exists in everyday America. White privilege often trumps the
whole purpose of everyone in America being made equal and having the same exact rights.
White privilege is something that the Black Lives Matter Movement is trying to absolve by
playing on the logic that everyone is human, and everyone deserves to have the same chances
while living life. SYG law protest layout the same ideals, but it is more in focused towards all
lives and that no one has the right to choose who lives or dies. Although SYG law protests focus
on all human lives, black lives are most affected by the law. Human lives all having equal value
are why these movements make sense. This key point existing in both fights is the reason the
The Kairos of the two movements often align with each other. The SYG law protests
have recently sparked more debate surrounding the McGlockton shooting. According to Liz
Mineo, The Black Lives Matter Movement formed after a major SYG case. Specifically, the
2012 murder of African American teen Trayvon Martin by white adult George Zimmerman.
George Zimmerman’s acquittal kicked off the major SYG protests and induced the creation of
the massive Black Lives Matter Movement (Mineo). The most recent SYG shooting to happen
was the McGlockton shooting, as previously mentioned. This drew in attention around the law
and the Black Lives Matter Movement as it was clearly a case involving discrimination. The
Back Lives Matter Movement has also seen a lot of publicity lately because of the
aforementioned Nike ad. The perfect timing of this ad breathed fire into the fight and called for
more people to join the movement when most of these protests were starting to fade from the
spotlight.
Although the two movements differ in many ways, they share an overarching goal: bring
society together as one organized body. The resulting community would better achieve goals
previously unattainable because of the divided population. Bringing communities together and
drawing attention to human value are why these movements continue to progress. These two
movements will continue to rage on and pick up speed in the pursuit of creating changes in
America and challenging us to join. Will you join the movement and stand with those fighting to
Works Cited
Childress, Sarah. “Is There Racial Bias in ‘Stand Your Ground’ Laws?” PBS, Public
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Meyersohn, Nathaniel. “Nike Takes Sides, Tapping Colin Kaepernick for New 'Just Do It' Ad.”
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Miller, Hayley. “Girlfriend Of 'Stand Your Ground' Shooting Victim Says Gunman 'Was Picking
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Mineo, Liz. “Background on Black Lives Matter.” Harvard Gazette, Harvard Gazette, 13 Nov.
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