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Shady Plot: First Half PS-Please Suggest Dialogues and Corrections
Shady Plot: First Half PS-Please Suggest Dialogues and Corrections
First half
Hallock-So, I started thinking of the plot. Perhaps, it is strange but I think I am a genius in myself. I get a plot in a snap (snaps his
fingers) without even thinking. Oh, this is so boring!!!(in cringe)
Hallock- Today, I’ve come to know that I’ve unlocked a new sense of mine. I can actually visualize stories as if they are real.
Hallock- No, I didn’t and why the lights are do dim? Oh, electric fault.
Narrator-Hallock is horrified. He doesn’t know what to do now. He’s sweating because he cannot believe his eyes.
Ghost- We cure people like you. Give you the stories and avoid what happened with us?
Hallock-Were you murdered for giving a nice story so you can protect me.
Ghost-No, we were never given recognition for our stories when we were alive so, we ghosts have made a story lending
department of ours. I sense someone. Now, I’ve got to go. Take an Ouija board and call me whenever you want(ghost exits).
Hallock-Why are you wasting money on this creep, supernatural, curse on humans who are living?
Hallock-Oh, really!! But, last week you said that you were afraid of these supernatural beings .