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A Critical Analysis
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10 March, 2006.
PAPER PLAN
INTRODUCTION
1- PRELIMINARIES
4- RECOMMENDATIONS
5- CONCLUSION
END NOTES
6- REFERENCES
7- APPENDICES
Any syllabus will express— however indirectly—
INTRODUCTION
Oman's secondary schools for general education have undertaken, since last
September 2005, the implementation of the first Elective English Programme (EEP)
ever for Grade 12 classes. A global book1, entitled Reading and Writing Targets 3
(RAWT3) by Evans and Dooley (2001), along with a supplementary Writing Tasks
Sheet (Appendix One) has been prescribed by the Ministry of Education authorities
for that purpose (Assessment Document Development Committee for English 2005).
The textbook just referred to, while intuitively praised for many a merit over the last
few months, does still pose a dire need for systematic analyses and evaluations of its
very content and ways of working, which, unfortunately, has not been fully satisfied
to date.
The present paper is in partial response to the gap in investigative research noted
above. Within its purview, it will be mainly concerned with providing a critical
analysis of RAWT3, with chief regard to its underlying syllabus design assumptions
and to the degree of its congruence with the needs of the EEP student community at
Sohar Secondary School for General Education, where I currently work. To this two-
fold end, the essay proposes to proceed according to the following steps:
The remainder sections are to be structured according to the format outlined above. In
the interest of time and space, further details are available in the End Notes and
Appendices Sections to supply necessary clarifications and comments, as need arise.
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1- PRELIMINARIES
As the heading should clearly indicate, the present Section will comprise a few
introductory notes to serve as a basis for the Critical Analysis Section to come. These
particularly concern RAWT3, as a coursebook2, in relation to its macro syllabus and
course design background and, at a later stage, to the very micro instructional context
it is being implemented in.
Syllabus and course materials design falls within two broad strands closely connected
to either Type A or Type B syllabus design classification (White 1988: 45-6)3. The
former (also termed synthetic4) type may be of a notional-functional, topic, content,
phonological, lexical, structural or skills units of design5. Conversely, the latter
category is of an analytic6 or process orientation, and takes "task" as a unit of analysis
and design. It concerns the Procedural, Process and the Task-Based Language
Teaching syllabuses, which first appeared in the 1980s (Long and Crookes 1992). In
contradistinction to the sub-syllabuses pertaining, respectively, to Type A and Type B
taxonomy above, stand the Proportional syllabus (Johnson 1982: 135-44; Yalden
1983: 120-37) and the Multidimentional syllabuses (Ullmann 1982; Batstone 1988:
188-9).
As Reilly (1988) points out, it is practically rare that either of the syllabuses identified
earlier occurs in absolute independence, or in entire distinction, from any other. Thus,
more often than not, "For a given course, one type of syllabus usually dominates,
while other types of content may be combined with it" (ibid). This depends, inter alia,
on two intertwined factors: the target and learning needs7 (Klimová and Suchánková:
2001:9) .
The current learner's centrality in the syllabus and course design equation alluded to
just earlier would hardly pose, in principle, any serious matter of discord. This is
chiefly due to the impact of the Communicative Language Teaching (McDonough
and Shaw 2003: 15-39), work in English for Specific Purposes (Munby 1978;
Hutchinson and Waters 1987), and the growing influence of Humanistic-
Constructivist approaches to English Language Teaching (Arnold (ed.) 1999). Rather,
what is practically at issue is, as will be discussed later, the variety of claims built
around it by some coursebook designers and publishers— only to give out, at times,
some skillfully marketed masses of rubbish (Brumfit 1979: 30; quoted in McGrath
2003:12). This has necessitated the rise and growth of a plethora of textbook
description, analysis, and evaluation frameworks in the field8. Two out of the key
parameters, which have won consensus amongst curriculum, syllabus and coursebook
evaluators, directly concern the context analysis as well as the survey of learner
needs. Both of these are turned to in the next sub-section.
In extension to the previous sub-section, which placed RAWT3 within the context of
the recent developments in syllabus design and theory, the present part will now
situate the textbook under discussion in closer relation to the Omani instructional
context and, much more narrowly, to the needs of the EEP student community at
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Sohar Secondary School for General Education. The data provided below are only
quick notes from a more detailed report available in Appendices Two and Three.
The overall negative depiction of the Omani instructional context above has to suffer
yet other serious effects when considering the plight of the EEP learners here
involved. A glance through Appendix Three should be informative enough to
mentally visualize their rather low proficiency learning variables. Some of these
noticeably include:
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2.2 Aims and Objectives:
The overall aim of RAWT3, as stated in the Student's Book blurb (Appendix Six) and
the TG Introduction, is to provide "systematic" development of students' reading and
writing skills via
From its part, the four-heading "Contents" page (Appendix Seven) yields further
indicative clues as to the realization of RAWT3's aims and objectives on a unit-wise
basis. As illustrated in the extract below, the unit entries invariably specify
- reconstructing a
text
Surprisingly, this continuum misses out two key components: vocabulary and, at a
lesser degree, speaking; the latter being stressed in the TG Introduction as an
indispensable in-class activity "before the exercise is assigned as written homework".
Considering the overview description above, it might be inferred that RAWT3's design
rests, most prominently, on the following views of language and language learning:
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View of Language:
View of Learning:
As could be expected, these two sets of views are to exert a considerably powerful
influence at many a level. Their impact is notably manifest in the potential learning
context RAWT3 happens to be implemented in, the methodology it embraces, the roles
it expects from the teacher and learners, the way it is actually designed and produced
as a skills book, and, ultimately, the extent to which it meets the requirements of its
target students. The next Section will give brief consideration to the two latter.
The chief aim of the present section is to critically analyze the coursebook herein
concerned in terms of its underpinning assumptions and of the extent to which it
actually meets the needs and expectations of the EEP community described in Sub-
section 1.3.2 earlier.
Based on the overview description Section above, the principles RAWT3 draws on
tend to derive from an integrated, multilayered approach to language learning, with
stress on the functional, syntactic and lexical aspects of English on the one hand, and
on the learning strategies for fostering learners' reading and writing skills on the other.
The realization of this bi-focal objective is conceived attainable through a series of
exercises which call on the inductive and deductive faculties in students.
The initial assumptions just identified have engendered several merits as to the
ultimate state of the Coursebook. Their subsequent positive impact is outstandingly
tangible in the latter's
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selection of topics and themes which undeniably appeal to its teenaged
audience.
Its inclusion of graphic and written inputs, along with study and writing tips,
so as to maximize motivation and performance in students.
Its devising of lexical and syntactic exercises which prove of tremendous
assistance and relevance as to carrying the ultimate writing assignments and
projects.
Its pedagogically realistic stance in approaching the writing skill as a
combination of process and product.
Its genuine efforts to live to its claim as a reading-to-writing skills book from
one unit to another.
Its success in exposing the targeted writing students to a variety of writing
genres
Irrespective of these advantages, RAWT3 does seem to suffer, at least, three major
deficiencies. These are summed up in the following points:
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fact of being a global textbook, imminently sparks off serious problems of suitability
with many an instructional context around the world. The one here considered will
happen to be yet another case in point. Indeed, a perusal of the data in Sub-section 1.3
above would not fail to reveal the number of gaps between the expectations of the
coursebook and the realities it has to confront when implemented with students whose
profile is not dissimilar to that described in Sub-section 1.2.3. These, most pertinently,
concern
Understandably enough, these and other similar points exert an urgent need for
adapting RAWR3 to the EEP community at Sohar Secondary School and, by
extension, to their peers with identical profiles elsewhere in the Sultanate. A few
suggestions in this regard are put forth in the next Section.
4- RECOMMENDATIONS
In light of the preceding Sections, it is felt crucial to realize that RAWR3, however
well-designed, simply cannot be expected to be ideally suited to each and every
learning context. The discrepancies between its potentialities and the practical
difficulties surrounding its implementation (Section 1.3) urgently require EEP
teachers to consider the following set of recommendations:
A critical stance towards the content, aims and procedures of any Units which
might prove well beyond the intellectual, cultural or linguistic reach of the
students, as is the case with Units 3, 6, 9, and 12.
A more independent and creative attitude towards the prescribed textbook.
This will greatly maximize the teachers' possibilities for inspiration and a
sense of partnership with RAWR3's co-authors (Cunningsworth 1984: 65).
Adoption of language learning procedures and techniques inspired by a
genuine drive for humanizing the imposed coursebook and the classroom
(Tomlinson 2003).
5- CONCLUSION
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specific needs of the student community at Sohar Secondary School for General
Education. Based on the tripartite data deriving from syllabus design theory, the
description and analysis of RAWT3 and learners' needs, a set of recommendations for
amending the Evans and Dooley series book for near future use in the Sultanate was
also suggested.
Given its scope, the paper has limited itself to approaching RAWT3 according to the
three parameters mentioned above. In so doing, it missed out higher-order data which
could only be derived from testing out the "Trojan Horse" Textbook against "what
may actually happen in classrooms" (Littlejohn 1998: 191). This unfortunate lacuna
may be adequately filled out, in its own right, in a separate paper based on an Action
Research framework. Only then, could RAWT3, and, by extension, other similar
coursebooks, best reveal their real value as active, dynamic contributors to the
learning processes.
END NOTES
1- According to Tomlinson (1998: x), a "global coursebook" is one " which is not
written for learners from a particular culture or country but which is intended for use
by any class of learners in the specified level and age group anywhere in the world ".
Type A Type B
b- Attitude towards the learner . external to the learner . internal to the learner
learners
decision-makers
. teacher doing things to the learner . teacher doing things for or with the
learner
d- Language content . content = what the subject is to . content = what the subject is to the
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the expert learner
. content = a gift from the teacher or . content = what the learner brings
procedures
4- "A synthetic language teaching strategy is one in which the different parts of
language are taught separately and step-by-step so that acquisition is a process of
gradual accumulation of the parts until the whole structure of the language has been
built up" (Wilkins 1976)
5- See Robinson (1998) for a state of the art article which establishes second language
syllabus design in light of recent SLA theory; Richards and Rodgers (2001) and
McDonough and Shaw (2003: 40-58) for further details and analysis.
7- As Klimová and Suchánková )2001:9) explain " The former reflects what the
learner needs to do in the target situation, what communication purpose,
communicative setting, or the means of communication is, what language skills,
functions, or structures the learner will need to acquire. The latter answers the
question of what the learner needs to do in order to learn, what his/her learning
purpose, learning style, resources, or profile are".
8- See, for instance, the models proposed by McDonough and Shaw (2003), McGrath
(2002), Tomlinson (ed.) (1998) and Cunningsworth (1984; 1995).
9- Almost two decades ago, Nunan et al (1987: 3) noted the problems presented by
the various backgrounds of the expatriate teaching workforce, especially insofar as
their teaching methodology was concerned. Their observation still holds true, in my
view.
6- REFERENCES
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Assessment Document Development Committee for English (2005), Student
Assessment Document for English: Grades 10 to 12, Muscat: Sultanate of Oman's
Ministry of Education.
Batstone, R. (1988), "Teachers and course design: the case for a modular approach",
ELTJournal 42, 3: 185-94.
Breen, M. (1984), "Process syllabuses for the language classroom". In C.J. Brumfit
(ed.), General English Syllabus Design,Oxford: Pergamon.
Evans, V. and J. Dooley (2001), Reading and Writing Targets 3, Student's Book,
Newbury: Express Publishing.
Evans, V. and J. Dooley (2001), Reading and Writing Targets 3, Teacher's Book,
Newbury: Express Publishing.
Littlejohn, A.(1998), " The analysis of language teaching materials: inside the Trojan
Horse". In B. Tomlinson (ed.), Materials Development in Language Teaching,
Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 190-216.
Mac Grath, I. (2002), Materials Evaluation and Design for Language Teaching,
Edinburgh: Edinburgh University Press.
McDonough, J. and C. Shaw (2003), Materials and Methods in ELT. 2nd edn.
Malden, Ma., USA: Blackwell.
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Munby, J. (1978), Communicative Syllabus Design, Cambridge: Cambridge
University Press.
Nunan, D., D. Watton and M. Tyacke (1987), Philosophy and Guidelines for the
Omani English Language School Curriculum, Muscat: Sultanate of Oman's Ministry
of Education.
Prabhu, N.S. (1987), Second Language Pedagogy, Oxford: Oxford University Press.
Richards, J.C. and T.S. Rodgers (2001), Approaches and Methods in Language
Teaching.2nd ed, Cambridge: Cambridge University Press.
Robinson, P. (1998), "State of the art: SLA theory and second language syllabus
design", The English Teacher Online 22, 4. [28 January, 2006]
http://langue.hyper.chubu.ac.jp/jalt/pub/tlt/98/apr/robinson/html.
Ullmann, R. (1982), "A broadened curriculum framework for second languages", ELT
Journal 36, 4: 255-62.
White, R.V. (1988), The ELT Curriculum: Design, Innovation And Management.
Oxford: Blackwell.
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7- APPENDICES
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APPENDIX TWO: The Omani Learning/Teaching Context
The data, provided below in a Prompts-Notes format, concern only two out of
Cunningsworth (1995: 149)'s four-category, 27-item checklist for specifying aims and
analyzing the learning/ teaching situation.
The Sultanate of Oman is one of the Arabian Gulf states, with a population of
approximately 2,331,000 people— about 75% of them are Omani nationals; 49%
Females; 51% Males: around 40% illiterate as per the Year 2003 Census releases. It
presents the following features:
8- a- Status of English: First foreign language since 1970. Recently used as a medium
instruction at Science, Medicine, Engineering and Agriculture faculties at Sultan
Qaboos University. Widely used in banks, hospitals, hotels, private firms dealings
especially in major cities and towns and where expatriates are predominant. Limited
use as a communication channel amongst young nationals at and outside home.
10- a- Main purposes for learning English: To raise the consciousness of pupils,
including those aspiring to enter tertiary institutions, in relation to the following " four
dimensions of a language learner: 1. As a communicating individual (the development
of communicative competence)
( Nunan et al 1987:3)
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English Elective Grades 11-12 3 45 mins. 138 mins
10- Materials and equipment resources available in the school: 36 classrooms; two
physics labs; two chemistry labs; two computer labs; a library; an OHP; tape-
recorders; two photocopiers; English language book-boxes; English Arabic
dictionaries.
APPENDIX THREE: Learner Factors and Needs at Sohar Secondary School for
General Education
The learners involved in the present coursebook description and analysis are about
150 out of 1,130 in total. They are all males in their final, pre-university class. They
all come from Sohar, the second largest city in the country. The majority of them are
Omani nationals; the rest are Sudanese, Egyptians, and one Algerian newcomer from
Nottingham, England. They are taught by four Omani teachers, three Egyptians, three
Tunisians and one Sudanese. They display a wide range of learner factors and of
learner needs, as shown below:
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The coursebook: preparation for the end-of-term examinations
The teacher: a facilitator; a spoon-feeder; a mediator; a translator
Their own role: teacher-dependent
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APPENDIX FIVE: A schedule presenting the "explicit" nature of RAWT3
(Adapted from Littlejohn (1998: 197) in Tomlinson (ed.))
A. BOOK AS A WHOLE
1. Type : supplementary; class use for pre-intermediate students
2. Intended audience :
Age range: not specified
School: pre-intermediate
Location: worldwide
3. Extent :
5. Distribution
a. Materials Teacher Learners
cassette [ ] [ ]
tape script [ ] [ ]
answer key [√ ] [ ]
guidance on use of class materials [√ ] [ ]
b. Access
index/ word list [ ] [ ]
detailed content list [√ ] [√ ]
section objective
7. Subdivision
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B. OVERVIEW OF AN EXTRACT (Unit Two: Everyday People)
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APPENDIX EIGHT: A Copy of RAWT3's Unit Nine
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