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Selecting Interesting Details (Chinese Cinderella Chapter 17)
Selecting Interesting Details (Chinese Cinderella Chapter 17)
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details for 1-2 paragraphs in our own writing. Date :
WHAT TO SHOW? Good authors select the best details to include in their writing. Notice how Adeline Yen Mah
uses only a few but well selected details to show her regret for not saying goodbye.
I knew the Schillings were leaving Hong Kong for “hovered around
Geneva on Thursday morning, so I got up early and “got up early” the front door”
(to show eagerness) (to emphasize the
hovered around the front door, hoping Father would eagerness)
REWRITE How would you change the second paragraph of chapter 17? Continue the following sentence with
your own ideas. Use not more than 3 details.
GIVE IT A SHOT In 100 words, write about a time when someone delivered an unpleasant news to you. Before
you write, brainstorm a list of possible details. Then, choose 2-3 of the most interesting ones and sequence them.
stomach / I can feel my insides quivering /
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Brainstorming
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Useful phrases for
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your own writing
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