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Chapter 2 - Writing Business Messages
Chapter 2 - Writing Business Messages
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Includes memorandums, reports, proposals and other forms of
writing.
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Concise & compact – straight to the point.
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Effective
business Good organisation
writing
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Organising Your
Message
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Is the message clear?
Are the details sufficient?
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Is there completeness?
1. Taking too long to get to the point – improper introduction / ‘advertisement’
No introduction to the topic.
Not stating the purpose of writing.
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3. Mixed-up ideas (identify the different main ideas, supporting info)
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E.g. I want to persuade my audience that the newly launched iPhone 7 is the best smartphone in
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2. Limit the scope (length and details of message)
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4. Choose ‘direct’ or ‘indirect’ approach. (by analysing the audience)
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Outline Flow chart Let them flow!
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FOUR WAYS
(C) (D)
(A) Control (B) Select Produce Develop
the style the best creative coherent
and tone words effective paragraph
sentences
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STYLE:
1. Use plain (common) English for better understanding.
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b. To avoid attribution, credit or blame. (Focus is to emphasize on what’s being
done/action/result.)
Anonymity purposes.
E.g. (According to Mr. XYZ,) the crime weapons were found on the scene. (an object)
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TONE:
Depends on the nature of the message (and relationship with the audience too!).
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Use conversational tone – use plain /direct language
Avoid Description(s)
• Ask yourself, “Will I talk like this face-to-face?”
Obsolete (outdated) language
• Minimize overly formal language.
• Arrogance should not be present.
Pompous (arrogant) sentences
• Do not inflict (impose) self importance.
• No stories about personal life.
Intimacy
• E.g. “Just between you and me…”
Communication difference across different
Humour
cultures may end up in misunderstanding.
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Preaching or bragging Do not pretend like you know everything.
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Grammatical errors lead to the followings:
Lose credibility.
Lack of preparation.
Expresses
relationships
Carries meaning
Verb
of sentence
Content words
Adjective
Adverb
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ii. Abstract vs. concreteness
Abstract Concreteness
Use strong words. (That express your thoughts most clearly and accurately)
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Avoid clichés
Cliché Meaning
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What is a paragraph?
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Paragraph development
e. Problem and solution – presenting a problem and then discuss the solution. 45
Writing Effective Email
Message
FIA1163 Professional Writing
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1. Organising email messages:
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Dear Mr. Brown,
Informative
25 – 40 characters
Keywords, quotations, questions, etc.
E.g. “Employee parking” “Revised Resurfacing Schedule for Parking Lot”
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E-mail without subject?
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Avoid lines that run off the screen.
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Avoid styled texts.
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Personalising messages – depends on audience and purpose:
Greetings
Appreciation
Regards
VS Yours sincerely
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Signature
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