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Nila Syarifun Nisak - Proposal Final
Nila Syarifun Nisak - Proposal Final
THESIS PROPOSAL
Advisors:
Dra. Pratiwi Retnaningdyah, M.Hum., M.A., Ph.D.
Prof. Dr. Susanto, M.Pd.
By
Nila Syarifun Nisak
17070835004
INTRODUCTION
Higher-order Thinking is the highest levels of cognitive process and the ability of
completing the given tasks. (Yee et al., 2015) Nguyễn & Nguyễn (2017) mention that
higher-order thinking skills that can be seen when learners face uncommon problems,
uncertainties, dilemmas and questions. In this case, memory is not the exact way to help
learners in this kind of situation, therefore reflective, critical, logical, and creative
thinking is needed. The needs of higher-order thinking skills shows that being critical
and able to find ideas are the keys of learning. (Heong et al., 2012) Practically, teaching
thinking skills objective including the assessment is not clearly stated; so, students’
language skills and proficiency levels become priorities. (Heong et al., 2012) It is has
been a challenge for language teachers and educators to make sure that students learn
processes.
teaching learning environment. HOT is best teaching learning technique in real world
contexts and by varying the scenarios students can use their newly acquired skills.
(Mainali, 2013) Issues related to higher order thinking skills in education, especially for
English learning, have been frequently investigated. Language skills are also connect to
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the thinking skills. (Pollock, 2014) Unlike reading comprehension measures, measures
of writing have not been usually included in batteries assessing cognitive abilities.
Indeed, the skills measured by critical thinking tests are those commonly involved in
Addressing to writing skill, Faragher & Huijser (2014) find out that the quality of
writing in English does not always reflect students’ quality of thinking. The results show
scripts there was some evidence of HOTS according to the framework. Taken from a
students who had graduated from their universities and obtained a permanent resident
visa in Australia in 2005–06 were assessed as having poor English. (Bretag, 2007)
Singh, Singh, M. T. M., Mostafa, & Singh, (2017) reviewed several research on the
use of higher order thinking skills to teach writing. The results shows that most of
research pertaining the usage of Higher Order Thinking Skills in a language classroom.
In addition, students with no English experience outside classroom need strategies such
as higher order thinking skills to increase their thinking skills in their daily life.
From the previous studies mentioned above, Higher Order Thinking Skills in EFL
students’ writing of Higher Education students have not been explicitly investigated. In
addition, most of the subjects of the studies are students who have English as their first
language. Only one of the studies focused on students of Higher Education learning
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English as their second language; but they are still international students who of course
have higher level of English proficiency. These of course will bring different result of
English writing and thinking level which will be ended up bringing different result of
study as well.
The present study is considering the case that Academic Writing, which was actually
taught in 5th semester, is now taught in 2nd semester EFL students in a University; it
brings different results in the quality of the students’ writing. The Students’ HOTS in
writing and any other aspects affecting their thinking skill in their writing will be
In relation to the background of the study previously outlined above, the problem of
The main purpose of the present study is to figure out higher level of thinking in
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1. Knowledge utilization shown in undergraduate students’ writing.
writing will be the focus of the study. In addition, the main data is taken from the
students’ writing. The material taught will be argumentative essay: How to write,
Generic Structure, and the writing Standards. Writing taught in the University
Furthermore, the study is limited to students in 3rd semester. They are EFL learners in
English Department of the University who are taking Academic Writing Class.
The result of the study is expected to give contribution for both English learners and
teachers. In particular, this study can be one of sources in recognizing and realizing
students’ of higher education thinking level in writing. For students who tend to think
critically but find it difficult to express in form academic writing, hopefully will survive.
In addition, this research can give extra information about the ways learners think about
every information they get and express it through their writing in different senses;
Furthermore, this study can show students’ writing ability in specific level of
education with specific learning objectives. This hopefully can be lecturers’ and,
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probably, curriculum developers’ consideration in designing courses for students.
Additionally, the results shown in this study can increase students’ awareness to the
relationship between their thinking skills and their writing ability. From this stage, it
will be a great outcome if the result of this study can give particular or alternative
In order to have the same idea and concept in this study, the researcher clarifies the
In defining the term Higher-order Thinking, this study is in line with Zohar and
Cobern (2004) that it is cognitive activities that are beyond the stage of understanding
research will apply the work of Marzano & Kendall (2006) related to thinking level
for students’ writing. Three thinking levels which are considered as the Higher-
Order Thinking in this study are knowledge utilization, metacognition, and self-
system thinking. The skills are students’ operational processes related to the three
2. Writing:
Meeting the needs of higher education students’ needs today, writing skill
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academic writing in the course taught by the lecturer in the second semester.
around 2-3 writing assignments produced by the students. The assignments are given
after the students have accepted the materials of the course; those are grammar,
generic structures of the text, and the topic for their writing.
3. Undergraduate Students
Undergraduate students representing students in higher education here stands for the
Surabaya. They are EFL students who are taking Academic Writing Course and
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CHAPTER II
All writing practitioners aim to address academic writing as ‘writing to learn’ for
all students, not just a remedial service to ‘weak students’. Nevertheless, the ways of
how to put teaching and learning goals into practice are different. (Björk, Bräuer,
Rienecker, & Jörgensen, 2003) Academics negotiate “standards” where the writing is
poor for a range of reasons. It is possible that if they had been able to evaluate the
writing in terms of an analysis of thinking skills, their attitude might have been more
positive and also the students might have benefited educationally. (Bretag, 2007) The
concept of teaching and learning of writing in higher education have been explored by
• Assessment, which is often a major purpose for student writing. Students may
content. In assessing such writing, lecturers focus on both the content and the
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form of the writing, which is the language used, the text structure, the
well as develop more general abilities to reason and critique (Hilgers et al.,
students may also be asked to write texts that trace their reflections on the
questions, problems, and ideas about readings, lectures, and applied practice.
are the primary means by which academics transmit and evaluate ideas (Prior,
1998). As they progress through the university, students are often expected
postgraduate study.
conventions and practices have emerged from the study of disciplinary genres and
the field of systemic functional linguistics (see e.g. Martin and Veel, 1998). In the
United States, for decades courses in ‘freshman composition’ have taught the
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presumed generic skills of academic writing to first-year students as well as
nonnative speakers of English (Leki, 2001; Zamel and Spack, 1998). Recently
interest has grown in teaching writing in the disciplines or across the curriculum,
Institutional structures around the world tend to include any of four main
Words such as ‘essay’, ‘laboratory report’ and ‘case study’ are problematic in
that they denote a wide variety of types of text. For ease of reference in discussing
text types we continue to use these labels, but we emphasize that you cannot
assume that the knowledge of what to expect in a certain text type is shared by
students. The essay, for example, may contain different elements depending on
exposition. The implicit knowledge of what to expect from text types in response
informs the judgments that we make about the success of students’ texts as a
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whole. The way we can generalize text types enables us as teachers to isolate
certain traits and make them explicit to students, but we need to bear in mind that
text types vary in response to the function that a text performs, which is not always
The exact key notes of Higher-order Thinking cannot be specifically defined, but
higher-order thinking skills can be recognized when it is showed up. (Zohar & Cobern,
2004) Many perspectives regarding to thinking levels have been revealed. It is not
something that have any behavioral indices, therefore it is not easy to observe it in
action. (McGregor, 2007) In teaching ‘thinking’, different kinds and different levels of
French philosopher, Rene Decrates argued that thinking is reasoning, and that reason is
a chain of simple ideas, linked by applying strict rules of logic. In the other words,
‘thinking’ is part of direct physiological connections between logical thinking and the
Talking about ‘thinking’ level, Bloom’s Taxonomy then of course takes significant
roles in this. In order to discern the similarities and the differences of learners’ ability
in relating the teaching and learning goals and instructional programs, taxonomy is used
(Krathwohl et.al, 1956) The term higher-order thinking then appear in pair with Lower-
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order Thinking. These are firstly stated by Anderson (Krathwohl, 2002) in revision of
Higher-order thinking skills is used to delineate any cognitive activities that are
beyond the stage of understanding and lower-level application. (Anderson, et.al, 2001)
Based on this taxonomy, memorization and recall of information, etc. are no longer
classified into the higher-order thinking skills; but, those are included into lower-order
thinking skills. While the skills that are classified into higher-order thinking skills are
analyzing, synthesizing, and evaluating. (Zohar & Cobern, 2004) The highlighted
observable activities of the higher-order thinking skills mentioned above are basically
the same. Likewise, Chinedu (Heong et al., 2012) mentions that analyzing information
to distinguish problems, evaluating problems and creating new practical solution are
included into higher-order thinking. In line with this, Marzano & Kendall, (2006)
propose the new taxonomy for educational objectives that is defined as an opportunity
to change whatever one is doing or attending to at a particular time. The Higher Order
Knowledge utilization processes are those that individuals employ when they
wish to accomplish a specific task. For example, an engineer might use knowledge
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a new type of aircraft. Specific tasks are the venue in which knowledge is rendered
useful to individuals.
have been identified: (1) decision making, (2) problem solving, (3) experimenting,
Decision Making
individual answers questions such as, “What is the best way to _____?” or “Which
(Baron, 1982, 1985; Baron & Brown, 1991; Ehrenberg, Ehrenberg, & Durfee,
1979; Halpern, 1984; Wales, Nardi, & Stager, 1986). All of these models focus
sound criteria.
Problem Solving
accomplish a goal for which an obstacle exists (Halpern, 1984; Rowe, 1985;
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process one engages in to answer questions such as, ‘How will I overcome this
obstacle?’ or ‘How will I reach my goal but still meet these conditions?’ At its
Critical attributes of the problem solving process include the following: (1)
the goal (3) Evaluating the alternatives (4) Selecting and executing the
alternatives.
Experimenting
such as, ‘How can this be explained?’ or ‘Based on this explanation, what can be
predicted?’
test the predictions, (3) Evaluating the validity of the principles based on the
Investigating
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Investigating is the process of generating and testing hypotheses about past,
one goes through when attempting to answer such questions as, ‘What are the
defining features of _____?’ or ‘How did this happen?’ or ‘Why did this happen?’
different so-called rules of evidence (Abelson, 1995; Evans, Newstead, & Bryne,
1993). The rules of evidence for investigation adhere to the criteria for sound
However, the rules of evidence for experimenting adhere to the criteria for
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2.2.2 Metacognition
responsible for monitoring, evaluating, and regulating the functioning of all other
types of thought (Brown, 1984; Flavell, 1978; Meichenbaum & Asarnow, 1979).
executive control (Brown, 1978, 1980; Flavell, 1979, 1987; Sternberg, 1984a,
1984b, 1986a, 1986b). Within the New Taxonomy, the metacognitive system has
four functions: (1) specifying goals, (2) process monitoring, (3) monitoring
Specifying Goals
relative to that activity. In terms of the New Taxonomy, the goal specifying
what Hayes (1981) refers to as a clear end state; what the goal will look like when
accomplished along the way. Last, it is the job of the goal specification function
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to develop a plan for accomplishing a given learning goal. This might include the
resources that will be necessary and even timelines in which milestones and the
end state will be accomplished. It is this type of thinking that has been described
Process Monitoring
also comes into play when a long-term or short-term goal has been established for
information.
knowledge.
for clarity, and monitoring for accuracy. Salomon and Globerson (1987) refer to
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situational cues and underlying meanings that are relevant to the task to be
connections and construct new structures and abstractions made by reflective type
processes.
and emotions. It is the interaction of these attitudes, beliefs, and emotions that
much energy the individual will bring to the task. Once the self-system has
determined what will be attended to, the functioning of all other elements of
thought (i.e., the metacognitive system, the cognitive system, and the knowledge
domains) are, to a certain extent, dedicated or determined. This is why the act of
the self-system’s selecting a task has been referred to as “crossing the Rubicon”
There are four types of self-system thinking that are relevant to the New
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Examining Importance
Obviously, if students consider the skill of reading a contour map important, they
will be more likely to expend time and energy developing this mental skill. What
Maslow’s hierarchy has been criticized (Wahba & Bridwell, 1976), it provides
As Covington (1992) explains, “it provides a useful way of thinking about the
factors that activate normal human beings”. In Maslow’s (1968) hierarchy, needs
such as physical safety, food, and shelter are more basic than needs such as
important by an individual.
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Examining Efficacy
Bandura’s (1997) theories and research have brought the role of beliefs about
beliefs about efficacy address the extent to which individuals believe they have
individuals believe they have the ability, power, or necessary resources to gain
specific skill, this might greatly lessen their motivation to learn that knowledge,
(1994) research also attests to the situational nature of one’s sense of efficacy and
underscores the importance of these beliefs. He has found that a low sense of
Given the biology of emotions, many brain researchers assert that emotions are
involved in almost every aspect of human behavior. A good case can be made for
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the contention that emotion exerts a controlling influence over human thought
(Katz, 1999; Pert, 1997). This case is well articulated in LeDoux’s (1996) The
of his analysis of the research on emotions, LeDoux (1996) concludes that human
beings (a) have little direct control over their emotional reactions, and (b) once
humans’ lack of control over emotions, LeDoux notes, “Anyone who has tried to
fake an emotion, or who has been the recipient of a faked one, knows all too well
the futility of the attempt.” While conscious control over emotions is weak,
emotions can flood consciousness. This is so because the wiring of the brain at
this point in our evolutionary history is such that connections from the emotional
systems to the cognitive systems are stronger than connections from the cognitive
Relative to the power of emotions once they occur, LeDoux (1996) explains,
they chart the course of moment-to-moment action as well as set the sails toward
long-term achievements. But our emotions can also get us into trouble. When fear
becomes anxiety, desire gives way to greed, or annoyance turns to anger, anger to
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For LeDoux (1996), emotions are primary motivators that often outstrip an
component and the part that response plays in one’s motivation. The importance
of such self-analyses has received a good deal of attention in the popular press
It is important to note that these three self-system determiners are probably not equal
override a perceived lack of efficacy and a negative emotional response. In terms of the
identifying the interrelationships between one’s beliefs about importance, beliefs about
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CHAPTER III
RESEARCH METHODOLOGY
In addressing to answers for the research questions of this study, descriptive analysis
and explanation. When a research aims to develop a theory that will explain what was
& Abbott, 2011) The depth of understanding the undergraduate students’ higher order
thinking skills in academic writing will be obtained. This study can be assumed as
document and content analysis for it will be focused on students’ written material to
seek about their thinking skills; however, this can be a basic interpretative study if
interviews might be needed to collect data. (Ary, Jacobs, Razavieh, & Ary, 2010)
The study will take place in a State University in Surabaya. English Education
Department has been activated and programmed since 13 years ago, and the curriculum
have been changed frequently for particular reflections. This academic year, English
Writing Course specifically academic writing will be taught in 2nd semester. There will
be one class to be investigated and chosen randomly; under the consideration of their
scores in English grammar and Vocabulary are varied. There will be one class to be
investigated. As it is stated before, students English skills are varied as well as their
thinking skills.
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3.3 Research Subjects
There are around 20 to 25 students in the class of the Course. They are 2nd semester
students of English Teacher Education Department who are taking English writing
The data of this research is the students’ words in their writing production for
English Writing Course. Furthermore, the source of data is the students’ writing. It will
be actually assignments given by the lecturer as one of the way to assess the students’
ability for the course. There will be 2 kinds of writing with different topics for academic
writing. Specifically, the kind of the text to be written will be argumentative essay;
Creswell stated that various ways in collecting data are included into qualitative
method, those are: researcher can collect information through unstructured or semi-
participants. (Creswell, 2009) Specifically, in this research, the data will be collected
from documents, and if it is needed, interviewing the lecturer will be obtained as well.
Unstructured interview will be gained based on the situation as questions may be arise
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Documents refers to text-based or any other form of artefacts to be analyzed. (Ary
et al., 2010) Documents can be categorized into 4 classifications, those are: public
Public records means every information that can be accessed from public, such as news,
federal government in education, websites, etc. Personal documents stands for typically
first person narratives such as diaries, letters, etc. Physical materials represents many
are documents kept by participants in fulfilling the researcher’s wish. In particular, this
research will use personal documents, as the students’ writings are including their
After the data collected during the observation process, it will be analyzed using the
data analysis technique that is in line with the framework presented by Ary et al. (2010);
there are three stages needed in this technique, those are (1) familiarizing and
organizing, (2) coding and reducing, also (3) interpreting and representing. However,
in this study, only two stages will be done based the data collected. To be in line with
By applying this part, the researcher will reread and reorganized the data collected.
The researcher will occupied in the data; so the students’ writing will be read and
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course needed. Therefore being familiar with the result of the interview is required.
Furthermore, the major task of organizing the information begins after the
stage will be applied to the result of interview; it can be based on questions or source
of data.
Interpreting here involves the reflection of words, sentences and every writing
will make generalizations based in the connections and common aspects among the
categories and patterns. It is about bringing out the meaning, describing the cases
all of the data collected will be organized as research findings and will be connected
Representation involves how the data will be presented. Considering the purposes,
data, and the approach of this research, the analyzed finding will be presented
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