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Symbols To Give Feedback On Form: Symbol Meaning Example SP P VT SV SP P
Symbols To Give Feedback On Form: Symbol Meaning Example SP P VT SV SP P
Aside form any question, education considered a wonderful aspect of anyone personality. It separate Commented [MA1]: This is a good first try, but your topic
sentence could be more specific.
you from other in the universe. Education make a person to be better used in society. It gives you
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knowledgeable about other people. And also it keep you open mind to another point of view. Education helps
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you to take a correct decision. I remember a time when I was a little girl, my father told me about a rich man,
his father was a business men and he had one child he bought him everything. But he did not let him attend
school because he had already all that he needs: big houses and lots of fancy clothes. So he think if his son go
to school it will waste his time. But after his father’s death the son did not know how to take care of himself. In Commented [MA2]: I like this example a lot!
my opinion, it would have help him if he had a high education. Commented [MA3]: This is a nice paragraph but you could
improve it by providing more details about the rich man and his
son. Why, exactly, did he not allow his son to go to school? What
kind of problems did the son face living on his own?