Journal 4

Part 2

1.Cristian was able to see that my warrant doesn’t match my claim in the first paragraph. It is very
valuable because it can affect my score on logic.

2.Cristian also noticed that have good reason and warrant in my second paragraph, but it does not have
a suitable claim. I need to develop a suitable claim as it can affect my scores in development and logic.

3.Cristian noticed that claim was missing in my last paragraph and I must improve it.

Part 3

1.For the first paragraph, I will revise my claim so that my evidence is able to match with it or I will find
another suitable evidence to connect it logically with my claim.

2.For my second paragraph, I will develop a bettor claim that connects logically with my evidence and
also with my thesis.

3.I have to revise the thesis in order to make it more clear.