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United Nations Essay Rough Draft
United Nations Essay Rough Draft
United Nations Essay Rough Draft
Chloe Williams
Mr. Taylor
Honors English 1
22 March 2019
“Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world” -Nelson
Mandela (“Education Sayings”). In 2016, the United Nations enforced a set of goals that would
make a huge impact in the world by 2030. These seventeen goals would be called the Sustainable
Development Goals. With these goals, the UN was hoping to end poverty, protect the land we
live on, and provide humans with peace. Quality Education is one of the most meaningful goals.
This well-known organization wanted all children to be able to complete primary and secondary
school free of charge. This would reduce the rate of children out of school in developing regions.
When the goals were put into play, there were approximately 265 million children out of school.
Not only did the organization want kids to attend school, they also wanted them to leave school
having reasonable knowledge and preparing for life after school. This meant that the children
would have an education that would make them productive within the workspace, and their skill
level would be relevant to work. The overall target is that financial instability would not be a
factor for an innocent child not getting an education, which means that no discrimination would
be used towards kids without the best backgrounds. There are a few things that makes this goal
stand out from the others. One, trying to end poverty. Two, the emphasis of children getting a
great education. And three, bringing everyone together for a incredible change within society.
But these are only a few reasons that this goal is most important (“Education-United Nations”).
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Unfortunately, there are various obstacles that are in the way of achieving this goal. One
major issue is poverty. Disease plays a huge factor in the build-up of poverty. Epidemic diseases
are easily spread throughout an area when it is overpopulated. Africa and Asia have a very high
population and obtain some of the most deadly diseases in the world. Another cause of poverty is
bad leadership within the government. Commonly, countries that are in bad conditions lack a
stable government set up to provide the things that they need. This may include adequate
protection, appropriate living spaces, available food for citizens, and having good authority over
that country. Another cause of poverty is underemployment. In less fortunate parts of the world
there are not enough trained teachers to teach the children the things they need to know. And this
is because, as children themselves, the adults were not provided with a valid education.
Foundations are coming together and working to fix this global issue. So far, the enrollment of
primary aged children in school has increased drastically! But 57 million children still remain
uneducated, and about three-fourths of those children are living in Africa. 620 million kids lack
basic math and english knowledge. It is evident that this is the most important goal. However,
there are many things that must be fixed before this goal can be carried out (“Goal 4:
Education”).
Education is viewed as the key to success. Not everyone feels that education is necessary.
However, in many aspects, it provides students with numerous opportunities to thrive after
completing school. The United Nations selected goal four (quality education) to provide the
equal opportunity for everyone to have an education. Hopefully, as a result, no one would feel
inferior to their neighbor and the world would be able to unite as a whole. But again, there is
always a downfall to the plan. This operation would require a lot of monetary investments, which
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results in the UN not receiving as much money from as many people as desired. This may alter
estimated to take $176 billion each year to accomplish these seventeen Sustainable Development
Goals. We must build strong relationships with people within and outside of the United States.
This will make them feel needed and appreciated. Hopefully, encouraging them to pitch in and
help. As of right now, SDG Media Zone and Sony Pictures Entertainment are working to impact
the outcome of this goal. SDG is a huge media outlet. The organization is trying to enhance our
knowledge of what’s going on in the world, using social media. And encouraging everyone to
help attain this goal in some way. Sony Pictures is emphasizing the target; children. They have
used cartoon characters as a fun way to intrigue people and inspire them to donate to a good
Again, there is still a bunch of work that needs to be done to improve the quality of
education. The best thing to do is to travel to these countries, see the conditions, and find
solutions to make it better. There are many things that could be done to help achieve this goal.
The two big processes for achievement could be spreading the word and taking action. Inform
your family and friends of the major target that the UN is trying to reach by 2030 and get
involved in organizations that could aid in reaching this goal. There is a lot to be done, but
Works Cited
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“BK101.” Education Sayings, Education Quotes and Thoughts about Improving
Cann, Oliver, “How Can the Development Goals Be Achieved?” World Economic
sustainable-development-goals/.
www.un.org/sustainabledevelopment/education/.
www.sdgfund.org/goal-4-quality-education.