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Writing A Thesis Statement
Writing A Thesis Statement
Writing A Thesis Statement
Every paper you should have a main point, a main idea or central message. The
arguments you make is your paper should reflect this main idea; the sentence
that capture your position on the main idea is called thesis statement.
You should provide a thesis early in you essay in the introduction or in longer
essay in the second paragraph in older to establish your position and give your
reader a sense of direction
TIPS:-
• Indicate the point your paper but avoid sentence structure like “The point
of my paper is …”
Unless you are writing a technical report avoid technical language, Always
avoid jargon.
• Compare original thesis with revised version which is more clear than
original thesis.
Original Thesis:
Revised Thesis:-
Although the timber wolf is actually a timed and gentle animal, it is being
systematically exterminated because people wrong fully believe it to be fierce and
cold blooded killer.
Avoid generic arguments and formula statement. They work well to get a
rough draft started but will easily bore a reader keep revising until you thesis
reflect your real ideas.
Use your own words in thesis statement; avoid quoting, insightful, crafting
an original and memorable thesis makes a distinct impression on reader you will
lose credibility as a writer if your become only a mouthpiece or a copyist; you will
gain credibility by gaining the reader with your own ideas and words.
A well crafted thesis statement reflect ideas. It signals a writer who has
intelligence, commitment and enthusiasm
For example :
Saying European travel is a good way to spend your summer” is not specific
enough why is European travel good? But
“Solo European travel require independence which in the end bolsters
personal confidence”
Example:
Bad:
Good:
Americans should add exercise to their daily morning routine because it not
only keeps their bodies at a healthy weight but also reduce the risk of high
blood pressure.
A good thesis statement developed from the point of view of the reader. Be
very careful you are not developing a topic that is of interest to go alone. This
is a harsh yet necessary question to ask yourself will my readers have any
reason to care about what an writing?