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Revised Essay
Milana Albakova
Holly Batty
English 101
28 May 2019
How many students actually get through college while being unemployed? For a lot of
college students, being unemployed is not an option, but having a job can negatively impact your
grades. A lot of people can say that having a job as a student is not a hard thing to do, but the
evidence suggests that it can stunt one’s academic performance and cause an overall decline in
well-being.
A lot of people can argue that having a job and going to college is a piece of cake on its
own because some students have many responsibilities outside of school and work but still
manage to maintain a high GPA. The facts prove that it is not the reality for most college
students. An article written by Walden University states that, “Researchers have learned that
students who work upward of 20 hours a week suffer from reduced academic performance”
(“Should Students Hold Jobs While in High School?,” n.d., para.8). This could be for many
reasons. Even a 20-hour per week job takes a lot of time out of a person's hands. Working takes
up a lot of a student’s energy, which can result in college students having a lot of trouble keeping
a good sleeping schedule. All these factors are important for them to reach their full potential in
school. Having a job can take away a students goodnights rest, which will affect their
performance in school. A study done by Harvard Medical School states that “Without adequate
sleep and rest, overwhelmed neurons can no longer function to coordinate information properly,
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and we lose our ability to access previously learned information” (Sleep Learning and memory,
p9). Because of this, overworked college students who need rest will find it harder to recall
important information that they attempted to study the night before. That will negatively affect
their test scores which further proves that a job can keep a student from reaching their full
potential. This can make one wonder how many hours of work would affect their progress in
school. Rajeev Dorolia conducted a study in which he tried to see whether the number of hours
worked per week had an affect on credit completion. The outcome was that “some students take
fewer credits due to work commitments. Part-time and full-time students tend to spend less time
studying” (Dorolia, 2014). This can result in graduating at a slower pace because less time will
be spent focussing on school and studying. Another issue with this is that taking longer to
graduate can result in higher student loan debt which would be counterintuitive. It is better to
evaluate your options and get a second opinion with counselors and staff members at a college.
Establishing a relationship with the faculty in your college is an important step to your success in
school. Many schools offer counseling to aid students who are suffering from a mental illness.
An article written by Susan R. Elling and Theodore W. Elling goes over how unemployed
students were able to find ways to stay in school by creating relationships with the faculty.
“Students who did not work indicated that they had more frequent interactions with faculty and
were more likely to establish an important relationships with faculty. These relationships were
evaluated as important in helping the student remain at this college.”(The Influence of Work on
College Student Development). This quote shows how students who work part-time or full-time
jobs don’t have the time to access help and information from the faculty that could help them
succeed in school unlike their unemployed counterparts. It can be hard to balance school and
work and sometimes you might prioritize work over school even though school should be the
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priority. Being consumed by the thought of making more money can make you forget about the
long term ambition of finishing school. It is easy to get caught up in making money to have the
lifestyle that you want now, however it can easily get in the way of building your future career.
When push comes to shove students may choose their job over school and end up dropping out.
“The number one reason for leaving college is money. It’s not high tuition bills though… 54%
said they dropped out because they couldn’t balance school and work”(23 College Dropout
statistics that Will Surprise you p.11) This is from a study that was conducted by public agenda
and it brings to light the staggering amount of students that would rather make the money that
they are making now instead of completing school and building their career.
Getting good nutrition is also very important, but a lot of college students overlook this
other vitamins and minerals, specifically thiamine, vitamin E, vitamin B, iodine, and zinc, are
juggle school and work leaves a student with very little time to put effort into healthy eating
habits. That in turn can make them gravitate towards fast food and energy drinks in order to
sustain themselves. Some people would say that having a job would mean you have more money
to spend on healthier food. This is not a credible argument because a lot of students have a job
simply to put themselves through school. That in addition to choosing the faster option, students
will ultimately end up eating unhealthy foods. Flora-ala.net mentions this issue in one of their
articles. “According to boundless.org and their campus culture survey it is estimated college
students eat an average of six to eight fast food meals a week.”(Students rely more on
convenience, price when considering food options p1). This article backs up my statement on
how college students will prefer to eat unhealthy foods while being occupied with a job and
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school. Ideology and reality are two different things, and the reality of this situation is that
college students prefer to go for meals with a lower cost, and those meals do not give the
students the nutrition that they need. Mental and physical health are both very important and too
much stress could take a toll on a students health. School on its own is takes time and effort and
can be stressful. When you add work on top of school it will exacerbate stress on a students
mental well being and becomes a major issue when it begins to affect their academic
performance. “Taking a survey of 225 participants of students, it showed that stress was a main
cause for these students which caused emotional and physical exhaustion.” (“Optimism and Risk
for Job Burnout”p.6). This type of stress will inhibit the ability to learn. This exhaustion caused
by stress could easily lead to loss in motivation and even affect a students sanity. Having little to
no time to spend on social interactions due to work and school related stress can throw many
students into a range of mental illnesses such as depression, anxiety, and emotional distress.
and energy levels. Prolonged dips in mood can greatly impact a students ability to study and
perform.(“Depression Anxiety and Emotional Stress”p4). The outcome of this is almost always
low mood, social isolation, feelings of hopelessness, thoughts of self harm, sleeping and eating
disturbances, and difficulty concentrating. All these factors can make a student start avoiding
school assignments and not dedicate enough time to studying. Bouts of anxiety over not being
able to perform well in the work and school environment can be detrimental for not only your
well being but also the ability to meet the standards required for both. Although it is hard, there
Although not all working college students suffer academically, there is no denying that
the stress of a job will at some point get in the way of them reaching their full potential. All the
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research points to the fact that being a working student can get in the way of spending more time
on studying, homework, and overall getting a better GPA. Not only that but it isn’t worth
balancing both the stress of school and work because it can lead to decline in school performance
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Evan King Staff Writer. “Students Rely More on Convenience, Price when Considering Food
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