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Reflection Paavo Kivikoksi
Reflection Paavo Kivikoksi
Writing E07
Portfolio Reflection
This year, writing class was a lot harder. For the most part I did well on all of my essays
and writing pieces. I think as the year went on, not only did my essays get better, but I also
started using figurative language and writing traits better. I was proud of some essays and not so
much about others. This is how I felt about my writing throughout the year.
One aspect I think I improved a lot on was my academic language and word choice. In
the beginning of the year I wrote very generally and used the same words such as ‘good’ and
‘bad’. Over the year I started realizing how to and where to use what kind of language. One
problem I faced was using too much academic language. For example in some dialogues I wrote
academically, rather than generally. Another thing I improved on was figurative language. I did
not know how to use, and didn’t use, figurative language in my first essays, but after I learned I
realized how important it can be to stories. I enjoyed using similes and metaphors because they
gave the reader a better understanding and they were fun to think of.
Also, most of my essays were good, in my opinion, but some were not very great. Out of
all, my best essay and the one that I am proudest of was my narrative. The reason was because I
came up with a fun idea, yet I was able to do what was necessary. Another reason was because I
was proud of how well I used dialogue throughout the story. The dialogue really advanced the
plot.
In conclusion, this years writing class was definitely harder than last year. All throughout
the year, I’ve had highs and lows, but it was all worth it. Now I’ve really prepared myself for the
upcoming year, which is why this year was so amazing. Hopefully next year I can take all the
things I’ve learned to have an even better year next year. I know it is going to be harder, but that
doesn’t scare me. I will push and try my hardest to make sure I pass.