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Danylle Gallo
Fedorova Writing 2
20 April 2019
Discourse communities rely on different genres to effectively distribute information Formatted: Left, Indent: Left: 0", First line: 0.5"
to one another and interact within other groups. John Swales, a linguist and an expert in
genre analysis definedes a discourse community as a social group with broad, similar beliefs
and ideas that guide their social behavior (21). . The acapella group I am in,I am a part of an Formatted: Left
acapella group, Naked Voices, who would beare defined as a discourse community because
of our the tactics used for communicating with each other and the our community. Naked
Voices is a student run, all-gender acapella group at UCSB and each of us are involved in
other student organizations, on-campus jobs and multiple classes. We are able to come
together as a group to enjoy our love for singing with others who enjoy it, and the purpose of
the group is to spread this love to an audience and encourage others to partake in music and
also support the music community. Using technology and social media,Using an app called
“Slack,” the process of connecting together and portraying information is alleviated. we are
able to not only speak to each other, but also inform the community of our presence.
Naked Voices is one of many performance groups at UCSB, Naked Voices is Formatted: Left, Indent: Left: 0", First line: 0.5"
involved in other student organizations, on-campus jobs and multiple classes, but we are able to
come together as a group to enjoy our love for singing with others who enjoy it. Every member
of Naked Voices has a love for performance, and the purpose of the group is to spread this love
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to its audience and encourage others to partake in music and also support the music community.
Without usingusing our voices to mimic instruments on stage that creates, a more complex style
of music, providing is created because we are the only ones creating the sound, providing the
listener with something they may have not heard before. We Thespend countless hours spent
rehearsing, which reflects in each performance as we do our best on stage, along with all of the
Naked Voices gatherings would not be successful without our communication in the Slack. The
Slack is similar to many social media sites, enabling a private group to be made that can utilize a
number of threads that easily pass along instruction. In Naked Voices, every person in a
leadership position has access to all of the threads, posting dates and times for rehearsal,
performances and fundraisers. It can be difficult to share information with a group of more than
twenty people without it getting lost amongst other messages, so the organization of these
threads is helpful. Business, calendar, the day’s schedule and music are some of the threads that
we communicate in daily that keep us informed at all times. The messages sent are simple in
format to get straight to the point, notifying us that “rehearsal will be in Girvetz 1004 and we’re
learning SOS and You and I” (Katie Kaiser, Slack). A message regarding where and what will be
happening in rehearsal is crucial to easing the difficulty of tardiness and confusion. The Slack
also has a poll option where questions about availability for fundraiser times and extra rehearsals
are asked, providing the percentage of how many people voted for each option. “What time can
you table?” (Slack) is a common question proposed to Naked Voices to ensure that a portion of
us can attend the fundraiser and encourage others who pass by to support our group. . This
exposure to new audiences can be beneficial for future Naked Voices members, giving them the
possibility of new opportunities if our group is requested to perform in outside gigs. Because of
the reputation we have upheld, we have received invitations to sing for Valentine’s Day grams,
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marriage proposals and showcases for other performing arts groups. Maintaining a relationship
with those who appreciate music and even perform themselves is useful for improving all
musical institutions since they tend to be thought less of by those who do not understand how
they function.
Before we are able to connect with the rest of the community, we must first
improve as a group and how we collaborate with one another in and out of rehearsal. Forming a
bond apart from the professionalism in rehearsal strengthens our communication skills and
ability to be in sync on stage. Swales declared that a discourse community must have their own
“language” in a sens (22), or any way of communicating that is specific to that group and may
not be understood by outsiderse, to manage themselves in a way that might not be understood by
those not in the group. Since we are anAs an acapella group, our main way of communicating is
through music. Each individual is at their own level of music knowledge, so as newer members
join, they are introduced to common lingo we use when learning new music. The music genre
itself uses musical terms, such as “adagio” or “crescendo/decrescendo” while learning new
pieces to expedite the learning processlearning these new songs and make the music much easier
to learnby reducing the explanation of the director. This language is common among all
musicians and has improved my musical ability significantly through both choral and acapella
training. Outside of rehearsal theThe members ofin Naked Voices sing extensively as a means of
communicating when we are not practicing, both for fun and also as a means of speaking to one
another. Singing a phrase that could have just simply been spoken is extremely common, so even
when I am walking on campus and encounter another member, I am able to hear them from great
distances.As I stroll through campus I can hear when another member is nearby because I am
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greeted with the sounds of hellos that are always sung (never spoken). Although it is just a sort
of inside joke, it is a meaningful way of getting your point across in an environment like
acapella. The Slack is beneficial for fast and informative messages, but in-person interactions are
The main genre that Naked Voices utilizes is technology and communicating together
through social media. All of these are helpful for deciding when to have concerts, fundraisers
and rehearsals and also informing the rest of the community about our choices. Crucial
information that may get lost among other group messages are sent in the Slack and on
Facebook, so they are easily accessible to every member in the group. In a group that is as big as
Naked Voices, it is important that every member is equally in the loop and able to communicate
any issues they may have. For each gig we must have a certain number of people in each section
to maintain a balance, and if a member that was expected to come does not show up, it will
throw off not only the balance, but the song setlist will have to be adjusted to fit who is there at
that time. As soon as I was accepted into the group, I was added to all the group messages, Slack
conversations and Facebook pages which allowed me to express how I feel during group
decisions and to keep me informed. In Slack specifically, we use polls to vote for concert times,
themes and any extra rehearsals that are added to ensure that everyone is included, and we are all
aware of each other’s schedules for future needs. Through Facebook, choreography videos are
posted for each member to practice individually and return to rehearsal prepared. All of these
platforms prevent any confusion and any possibility of someone missing an event.
advertisement through our social media. Advertising includes making posters and flyers, posting
on multiple social media platforms and also fundraising at local restaurants. Our targeted crowd
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is the student population, but we ensure that all forms of advertisement are public so that they
can be seen by anyone. Our concerts for example are always free, so there are no financial
barriers that prevent someone from being able to enjoy the music. Facebook allows us to share
events with friends and family members who do not have the same access to information as
UCSB students, but it also assures the students of how and when to attend our fundraisers and
concerts. There are many other organizations on campus with the goal of gaining attention on
campus, so our advertisement over social media must stand out in a long feed of events. Included
on each poster is the time, place, price, and any special guests that will perform, all displayed in
bold and bright lettering so it can be noticed amongst the crowded bulletin boards. The title listed
on each poster always includes a catchy phrase or a clever pun that acts as a preview to the show
the audience will hopefully observe. Our presentation cannot be too long in length, or it will
become another filler in the media timeline that is overlooked. The first concert was titled
“Naked and Afraid,” referring to the TV show with Naked Voices stranded in the jungle, without
the nudity, and our upcoming concert is titled “Keeping Up with Naked” to mirror “Keeping up
with the Kardashians,” providing the audience with a theme that they will more than likely
understand. Every event that we promote is critical because they help us raise money for
competitions and Naked Voices uniforms, helping us to look more professional and further
enhancing our reputation in the community. This exposure to new audiences can be beneficial
for future Naked Voices members, giving them the possibility of new opportunities if our group
is requested to perform in outside gigs. Because of the reputation we have upheld, we have
received invitations to sing for Valentine’s Day grams, marriage proposals and showcases for
other performing arts groups. Maintaining a relationship with those who appreciate music and
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even perform themselves is useful for improving all musical institutions since they tend to be
Naked Voices is not a typical discourse community in the way we interact with one
another, but these encounters continue to strengthen our groups’ relationship which reflects on
our performance and how we present ourselves. Using social media as a way to tether ourselves
to the rest of the community is a simple way that is favorable for both sides.
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Voices, Naked. “Facebook.” Keeping Up With Naked, Naked and Afraid 2018-2019,
www.facebook.com/events/866218460385181/?notif_t=plan_user_invited¬if_id=155543930917
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