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A Textual Analysis of W.B Yeats Poem
A Textual Analysis of W.B Yeats Poem
A Textual Analysis of W.B Yeats Poem
B Yeats’
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In Partial Fulfillment
First Semester
by
MICHELLE GIE R. BERSALUNA
November 2018
ABSTRACT
This paper assumes that William Butler Yeats’ poem “When you are Old”
which is directly addressed to the speaker’s lover. Yeats was born in Dublin,
Ireland, and is one of the most celebrated poets in Irish history. Many of his
poems reflect the Irish spirit, but this poem concentrates more on the love he
once shared with a woman. Many of his poems reflect the Irish spirit, but this
poem concentrates more on the love he once shared with a woman. This woman
is probably Maud Gonne, an Irish revolutionary who ended up marrying another
man. Yeats himself would go on to marry, but many see When You Are Old as a
poem highlighting the failed relationship with Gonne. After an initial read, many
see this poem as one that is filled with love, but the last stanza is dark; the
speaker is reminding his former mistress that their love did not last, and this is
something she should regret for the rest of her life. While this is one of Yeats’
most popular poems, he wrote many others that were just as successful. As a
result, he won the Nobel Prize in Literature in 1923.
Thus, this poem argues that W.B Yeats poem is expressive of the poet’s
experience with unrequited love through a textual analysis of it’s language and
tone. Specifically, it seeks the poetic vision of the poem and how this experiences
expresses the language and tone of unrequited love.
Introduction
Rationale
Love was one of William Butler Yeats’s great inspirations. It was love that kept
him moving and developing. It was love that confused him and made him reflect.
It was love that shattered him and made him mourn. Yeats’s experience with love
was rich and fulfilling as well as frustrating and devastating. In order to come to a
better understanding of Yeats’s love poetry, we need to take a look into his
private life.
“Yeats met the fiery revolutionary [Maud Gonne] in 1889. He fell deeply in love
with her and would propose to her in 1891, 1899, 1900, 1901, and 1916. Gonne
had no use for Yeats's proposals. However, she did have a use for his talents.
Gonne would use Yeats for his ability as an orator. Maud Gonne, dragging him at
her heels on nationalist agitations, soon found that he was a natural orator and
could easily dominate committees. Maud Gonne would continue to turn Yeats
proposals down, yet she continued to be the catalyst for the finest love poetry
Yeats would ever create. Gonne would once ask for Yeats's help in London,
ending a brief but happy love affair with Olivia Shakespear. Sensing divided
loyalty, Shakespeare would end the affair and it was shortly thereafter that Lady
Gregory would save Yeats from a potentially more tragic end, like the poets of the
tragic generation” (cf. nadn.navy).
Yeats really loved Maud Gonne. She was the love of his life, and still, she would
never really react to, let alone return his love. Yeats has experienced the many
different facets of love through this continuous interaction between his everlasting
true and sincere affection and dedication and her cold and calculating rejection.
But although this may be a personal tragedy it also resulted in something positive
and beautiful, namely Yeats’s love poetry Maud Gonne inspired him to. Yeats
managed to deal with all his positive and negative experiences in a productive
way and included them into his poetry. Maud Gonne once even said to him that
she could not stop rejecting him as he would not write such beautiful poetry about
her anymore then.
As said, Yeats’s perception and concepts of love can be identified in his poetry.
Furthermore, we can identify a development of Yeats’s depiction of love in his
poetry. We can find many different sides of love in Yeats’s poems. In some
poems, Yeats describes it as an almost divine power. In other poems, he starts
doubting whether love is really that fulfilling or not. And in further poems, he even
focuses on the dark and destructive sides of love. These different concepts of
love will be described in this paper through the analysis of selected poems.
Methodology
This study employs qualitative research through discourse analysis in the poem
that we can connect the relationship between man and woman who experienced
one-sided love. Thus, Formalism and Expressivism theories helps in the further
explanation of the poem’s content and language based from the experiences of
the author.
This paper argues that W.B Yeats poem is expressive of the poet’s
experience with unrequited love through a textual analysis of its language and
tone. Specifically, it seeks the poetic vision of the poem and how does his
experience express the language and tone of unrequited love.
This is a poem that many see as highlighting the unrequited love between the
speaker, presumably Yeats, and his former lover. The speaker, talking directly to
his muse, instructs her to open the book in which this poem can be found and to
re-read it. While re-reading, she should recall how many people loved her for both
true and false reasons, namely because of her beauty. The speaker goes on to tell
the lover that there was one man, probably the speaker, who loved her completely.
In the final stanza, the speaker tells his former lover that she should remember
that this love did not last, and she should be filled with regret because of it.
Addressing Moud Gonne, the poet says that when she is old, she should take up
this book of Yeats’ poems and read it slowly. He asks her to compare her old age
with the time of her youth. Feeling sleepy and nodding by the fire-side she can
compare her grey hair with the softness of look and deep shadows that her eyes
had in the prime of her life. Inn brief the poet wants Maud Gonne to have a feel of
the terror that old age produces , ‘full of sleep’. Here sleep can be explained as
usual time of sleep as well as the natural laziness or lethargy that comes in a
human being as he or she grows old.
In the second stanza the poet further asks Maud Gonne to recollect as to how
many people loved her when she was young and beautiful, and not all of them
had true love for her beauty even. Quite a few of them just pretended love to her
falsely, but there was one man only who loved , not her physical beauty alone but
also the purity of her soul behind her beautiful shape. His love was purely spiritual
and she must remember that he loved the pains of her growing old. It also means
that he loves her even now when she is old and is prepared to share with her the
sorrows of her age.
The speaker says to Maud Gonne that when she lies down on the bed,
bending a bit toward the fire-side where the iron-rods outside the fire-chimney
are glowing red with the heat of fire she must says to herself in a sort of sad of
soliloquy that with the departure of her youth and charms, the false love of her
lovers had also vanished away and evaporated in the mist of high mountains and
stars. By saying this the speaker also intends saying that in comparison to her
false lovers, he was the only true lover who had loved her all-through –from youth
to old age and he loves her even now.
Poem Analysis
First, note the rhyme scheme. The first and fourth lines rhyme, as well as the
second and third lines. Also, note the meter, it’s an iambic pentameter—this gives
the poem a musical quality. Finally, the word “and” appears six times! At least one
reason for this is to assist in keeping the poem metered.
The poem is full of gentle images, such as “Full of sleep”, “nodding by the fire”,
“slowly read”, “dream,” “soft look”, and “shadows deep”. This sets the tone and
mood of the first stanza which is clearly one of calmness. The first stanza is very
soothing to read.We can guess that the book referred to above would be one by
Yeats—specifically one containing poems about the beauty of Maude Gonne.Pay
attention to the mention of eyes. Eyes are actually one of traits that perhaps, in
terms of exterior appearance, age the slowest. It’s not so uncommon to find an
older person with youthful and beautiful eyes. But that’s not so here! Instead, the
eyes have lost their “soft look”, they’ve lost their “shadows deep.”The mention to
the eyes helps us understand that Yeats is predicting that not only will Maude
Gonne lose her physical beauty, she will lose her spiritual beauty as well. Her
eyes will become those of a shallow person. She will become harsh. This is very
revealing as to the theme and intent of When You are Old.
The rhyme and meter of the poem in the second stanza is basically identical to
the first stanza. However, the word “and” isn’t used as much, and the pacing here
is harsher and faster.
The implication of the first line is that people loved Maude Gonne only when she
was happy and gay, but the moment she turned somber and sad, they
abandoned her. So clearly this was not a true love. (In a way, at the time, this was
already something Gonne was experiencing in her life.)Yeats, admits that some
people might have loved Maude Gonne for her beauty, but even here he notes,
some of this might have been superficial. This is why he states, “love false or
true”.The use of the word “pilgrim soul” here is very important. Yeats wants to
explain to Gonne that he and she are kindred spirits. They are soul mates. They
both share, to at least a degree, Irish nationalism—and both at the time were
interested in the Hermetic Order of the Golden Dawn. We can be sure though,
that this line is meant to cut even much deeper than that—Yeats believes that
they truly share something on a deep spiritual level. In this way, Yeats feels only
he can really appreciate where Gonne’s truest beauty lies.We can contrast the
final line of the second stanza with the first line of the same stanza. So long as
Gonne is successful and outwardly projects happiness, superficially some man
claim they love her. However, when the tide turns, and her success is no longer
present, who shall lover her then? Yeats is saying he would still love her.
The third stanza, as far as meter and rhyming scheme, is no different than the
first and second stanza. The form is identical.
The references to the “glowing bars” is to most likely to some type of fire grating
that is so close to the fire that perhaps it glows a bit red. These bars potentially
represent prison bars, suggesting that Maude Gonne is going to entrap herself.
Worse, given the fiery implication here, the suggestion seems to be she’s going
to find herself in a kind of earthly hell of her own making. We don’t want to
suggest anything overly literal here, but only hell as a kind of metaphor. But given
Yeats propensities for the occult, who knows?The second line of the third stanza
then suggests that Maude Gonne will regret this. But her punishment is even
worse, because to a degree she’ll already have lost her depth, which will limit her
ability to even regret what has happened. She will truly have become imprisoned
in her own future shallowness.While Gonne is stuck in an earthly hell of her own
devising, where will Yeats be? Why up there in the heavens, of course. The love
will have waited for her there on the mountains, pacing back and forth, and
hoping she would come to receive it, but eventually it’ll become one with the stars,
always gazing down at her from the distance—after all she’ll no longer be in a
position any longer to achieve that love. The use of symbols such as mountains
and stars might even be of deeper significance here. We will leave it to others to
explore this possibility.
Conclusion/Recommendation
In conclusion, Ultimately Ithis poem accurately reflects the life of Yeats and
possibly the life of many others. It is a rather common occurrence for someone to
love another, and never truly act upon it, or if they did it was unsuccessful. Yet
once they reach an old age the one who is in love realizes that the love was truly
lost much before. It is honestly heartbreaking, even in the case of Yeats and
Gonne; Yeats love Gonne unconditionally and she never once reciprocated his
sentiments, even going to the point of her marrying another man, one that Yeats
openly despised. It is sad to acknowledge Yeats lost love and also how it
happening is a rather common occurrence, although it happens and we must be
made aware.This all shows that Yeats is giving her the subliminal mandate inside
the clear and direct message to love him now, that he is the only one who really
loves her and to not let time walk against their happiness.
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Appendix A
I am Michelle Gie Bersaluna, 24 years old. An Educator and a dreamer, who
never gave up on achieving her dreams and aspirations in life. I am the eldest out
the two siblings in our family and I came from a happy and loving family.
I also worked so hard for my family and I was a scholar during my college years,
and it was not an easy path I conquered a lot of challenges, hardships that
requires great perseverance and through all those challenges I was able to
graduate. I earned my degree of Bachelor of Secondary Education major in
English in University of Cebu- Main Campus. My beloved Alma Mater, who
helped me in realizing my dreams and aspirations in life.
Appendix B
When You Are Old
Appendix C
William Butler Yeats was one of the greatest English-language poets of the 20th
century and received the Nobel Prize for Literature in 1923.
Born in Ireland in 1865, William Butler Yeats published his first works in the
mid-1880s while a student at Dublin's Metropolitan School of Art. His early
accomplishments include The Wanderings of Oisin and Other Poems (1889) and
such plays as The Countess Kathleen(1892) and Deirdre (1907). In 1923, he was
awarded the Nobel Prize for Literature. He went on to pen more influential works,
including The Tower (1928) and Words for Music Perhaps and Other
Poems (1932). Yeats, who died in 1939, is remembered as one of the leading
Western poets of the 20th century.
Early Life
William Butler Yeats was born on June 13, 1865, in Dublin, Ireland, the oldest
child of John Butler Yeats and Susan Mary Pollexfen. Although John trained as a
lawyer, he abandoned the law for art soon after his first son was born. Yeats
spent much of his early years in London, where his father was studying art, but
frequently returned to Ireland as well.
In the mid-1880s, Yeats pursued his own interest in art as a student at the
Metropolitan School of Art in Dublin. Following the publication of his poems in the
Dublin University Review in 1885, he soon abandoned art school for other
pursuits.
Career Beginnings
After returning to London in the late 1880s, Yeats met writers Oscar Wilde, Lionel
Johnson and George Bernard Shaw. He also became acquainted with Maud
Gonne, a supporter of Irish independence. This revolutionary woman served as a
muse for Yeats for years. He even proposed marriage to her several times, but
she turned him down. He dedicated his 1892 drama The Countess Kathleen to
her.
Around this time, Yeats founded the Rhymers' Club poetry group with Ernest
Rhys. He also joined the Order of the Golden Dawn, an organization that
explored topics related to the occult and mysticism. While he was fascinated with
otherworldly elements, Yeats's interest in Ireland, especially its folktales, fueled
much of his output. The title work of The Wanderings of Oisin and Other
Poems (1889) draws from the story of a mythic Irish hero.
The celebrated writer then became a political figure in the new Irish Free State,
serving as a senator for six years beginning in 1922. The following year, he
received an important accolade for his writing as the recipient of the Nobel Prize
in Literature. According to the official Nobel Prize website, Yeats was selected
"for his always inspired poetry, which in a highly artistic form gives expression to
the spirit of a whole nation."
Yeats continued to write until his death. Some of his important later works
include The Wild Swans at Coole (1917), A Vision (1925), The Tower (1928)
and Words for Music Perhaps and Other Poems (1932). Yeats passed away on
January 28, 1939, in Roquebrune-Cap-Martin, France. The publication of Last
Poems and Two Plays shortly after his death further cemented his legacy as a
leading poet and playwright.
Theoretical Underpinnings
Formalism
Expressive criticism
It focuses on the artists emotion. It is well known among poets, for poetry is
based on emotion. Expressive criticism describes poetry as an expression, as an
over-flow of a poet’s feelings. Expressive criticism is unlike many other forms of
criticism in that it does not focus on the style of writing, or grammar, or diction; it
focuses on what is being said by the the author.
This form of criticism originated from a cultural movement in Germany and
Austria in the early twentieth century called, expressionism. Expressionism was
focused on the arts, it’s true meaning changing constantly over time. Ironically,
this term was first used to describe French artists, not Germans. If work produced
by Van Gogh and Munch is inspected, the critic will find that their work is based
off of human experience. It was for this reason that expressionism was claimed to
not be a style.
One of the big names associated with expressive criticism is William Wordsworth.
Wordsworth defines poetry as “emotion recollected in tranquillity”. He says, “a
poem is inner made outer”. Wordsworth was a naturalist. In any poem of his, that
known fact becomes clear. He, himself, always plays a major role in his own
poetry. Who he is as a person, reflects in his poetry.
Expressive writing has really evolved since it was first created. It is not only the
main writing style of poetry, but it is now used in therapies, to help clients better
understand their own emotions. The reason for this, is when something is
expressive, it cannot be judged as fiercely as something that is factual. Critics
cannot have an influential opinion about how somebody feels.
Other criticisms tend to downplay the importance of the author while critiquing his
or her work. Expressive criticism directs its focus on the author. While expressive
criticism is more likely to be used with poetry it is also useful when critiquing
novels and essays. Most people tend to focus on word choices and different
styles, and mistakes that have been made, rather than why the author wrote the
essay or novel, or even a short story. By focusing on the author, readers may
better understand what they are reading.
Pedagogical Framework
LESSON 1:
Textual Analysis of W.B Yeats “When you are Old”
At the end of the 2-hour lesson, the students will be able to:
Preparation/ Motivation
Pre-Activity Questions
William Butler Yeats is an Irish poet and one of the greatest poets in the English
Language in the 20th century. He was awarded Nobel Prize for literature in 1923.
He is one among the great love poets of the world.
This is a love poem addressed to the poet’s beloved Maud Gonne who was the
most beautiful young lady of his time. She is believed to be the inspiration behind
this poem. The tone of the poem is one of melancholy. W.B. Yeats imagines her
future years and his true love in future. He repents over her divergent attitude
who fails to understand his spiritual love. The poet begins the first stanza
addressing her imagining her to be in her old age. The lady will be very old
approaching her peaceful years. She then opens the book of poems penned by
the poet. As she starts to read slowly, she is taken back in time to recollect her
past when she had innocent looks in her eyes and sadness hidden in the looks of
her eyes. The poet also says that his beloved would also regret how
many loved her physical grace but only the poet worshipped her Pilgrim soul
even as her face changed. At last, the lady will grieve over the loss of her True
Love fleeing from her and joining a crowd of stars very distant from her. Thus the
poet expresses his true intentions while his beloved fails to understand.
Directions: Read the poem silently and take note of the difficult words.
Comprehension Questions
Comprehension I
Directions: In the diagram, explain your analyzation of the poem “When you are
Old”.
Explain Stanza 1
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Explain Stanza 2
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1. Directions: Explain this question in connection with W.B Yeats “When you
are Old” poem.
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