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Rhetorical Analysis Final Draft
Rhetorical Analysis Final Draft
Jonah Mendoza
Professor Parker
ENGL-1302
25 July 2019
In 2009, the 44th President, Barack Obama was awarded with the Nobel Peace Prize for
his own effort to enhance relations with other nations. After accepting the award, Obama makes
a speech that discusses his own ideas and beliefs regarding the war between different nations
across the globe. Throughout the president’s acceptance speech, he claims that wars are
necessary when it comes a resolve and it reminds the world that we are meant to fight against
oppression and corruption in order to develop a greater effort to create peace. While wars do
create violence, casualties, and conflicts between nations, it’s also not the right answer to make
peace. The reason Obama believes in his ideas of war and peace is because he thinks realistically
that he will have to face the world as it is. He thinks his own nation will continue the fight for
international peace even though he strongly believes that it will happen eventually.
At the time, President Obama was on his first year of presidency when he made that
acceptance speech. He starts off his speech with how he feels about the reward by expressing his
gratitude and then he says that his accomplishments in the beginning are “slight” compared to
the many big names of US history. This introduction of his speech attempts to give an ethical
explanation of his early successes by contrasting his work with others and give more praise to
those who have impacted the US more than he had. Later, Obama transitions from his acceptance
of the award to war by stating that he is the Commander-in-Chief of the US military while they
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are in the middle of 2 wars. When it comes to war, the President believes that the nation’s battles
against threats are one of the reasons that he will have to face through the world as it is. He backs
up his logical claim by looking back at the past events such as the Universal Declaration of
Human Rights which was a document that protected human rights. Obama continues with his
evidence saying that making a promise for peace would be meaningless without protected human
rights. In other words, he believes that discrimination will not bring peace to many nations
around the world. While the 44th president has spoken his reasoning on his views of war and
peace, there are at least some emotional appeal that he tries to capture the audience with in order
Not only does President Obama speaks out his opinions towards war and peace, he also
explains how he manages his war decisions in conflicting situations and his motivations for
waging war.
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Works Cited
https://www.commonlit.org/en/texts/barack-obama-s-nobel-lecture?search_id=22705597
"How Obama's Nobel Prize speech became a guide to his wartime decision-making." The
https://www.washingtonpost.com/graphics/national/obama-legacy/nobel-peace-prize-oslo-
2009-speech.html?noredirect=on