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It is great to hear from you. I hope you are as fit as fiddle. I just got back
from Bukit Tinggi, one of the hilltop destination in Malaysia. It was such a
incredible trip.

It took an hour drive from Kuala Lumpur. For your information, there is a
rabbit farm where visitors are allow to pet and feed the cute and fluffy rabbit.
We had a whale of a time satisfy the hunger of the hopping rabbits.

Next, we went to the botanical garden. Walking around the garden

soothed ours mind. Lush greenery maked us feel relaxed. While strolling, we
enjoyed the serenity and tranquillity by nature. That’s something that we missed
when we are in the city. So, it is great to be away from the hustle and bustle of
the city once on a while. .

Final, we went to the Japanese Village. I was on top of the world dressing
up in a kimono while explore the area and taking photos of the gorgeous
traditional building. I also drank traditional Japanese herbal tea. I felt very
energetic after drank it. My sister listened carefully to the instructions on how to
prepare and served Japanese tea in the traditional way. She loves explore and
gain knowledge of other cultures.

After having exhilarating experiences at three diverse place, we decided

to go home. Although it was the short trip, I really had a ball. For me, the rabbit
farm is the most good place I have visited.

I felt grateful because the trip helped to strengthen family ties. I

appreciated every moments that I spent with my family. I wish I have the
opportunity to visit it again.

I need to pen off now as I have a bigger fish to fry. Send my regards to
you family members. Bye!
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Paper 2 (Part 2)
The picture below shows a house on fire you witnessed while you were
returning from the playground. In about 120 words, write a recount of the
incident.

It was a blistering Wednesday afternoon. The scorching sun was shinning

brightly. I was playing with my friends at the playground. By 2.00pm, we
decided to go home as we could not withstood the hot weather. We were
chattering away while strode joyfully towards our houses.

All of a sudden, I heard a girl shouting on top of his voice. Out of

curiosity, I ran as fast as lightning to check out what was happening. My friend
and I saw a crowd at a house. Then, we realised the house was at fire.

We witnessed thick smoke billowing on the roof of the house. We were

taken back. We stood frozen at those scene. Without realising, my friend
grabbed my hand and running to a nearby house to ask for help. We called the
firemen to came to Taman Harmoni.

The firefighters arrived beating the clock at the scene of incident. They
extinguished the fire at about half a hour. A firefighter grabbed a ladder and
climbed to the balcony to safe a girl from the burning house. The girl was alone
in the house as her parent were working until dawn. As she was hungry, she
cooks some dishes.

Unfortunately, the fire was burning a phone’s charger that she forgot to
put it in a shelf. It began a big unmanageable fire which caused the furniture in
the house to damaged. She was still alive but she had a bad injury at she hand.

I felt devastated for the girl. She was outside and final her parents
returned home upon receiving a call from their neighbour. Her mother quickly
hugged her and they burst in tears. It was such a blessing in disguise that no
casualties was reported. The firefighters thanked us for quick action. Then, I
realised the house that was on fire was just a stone’s throw away by my house! I
felt delighted and grateful that I had did a good deed.

To prevent accidents from happening, children should be educate on how

to handle fire emergencies from a young age. Dangerous things such as match
should be put in a safe place. Beside, children shouldn’t be allowed to be alone
at home as anything unpleasant could happen at anytime. Prevention is better
that cure.