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Conformity of Revisions
Conformity of Revisions
Conformity of Revisions
Date : 1/28/2019
Page Reflected
Nature of Revision Actions Made
Manuscript
Page 8-
19
1. Use proper citation Added, Edited and rephrased some citations
Page 38
3. Check the tenses of the verbs. Check and changed the future tenses of verbs to past
Page 28-48
Study was already conducted. tense to reflect study is already done.
Set-Up
Height ≈104.14 cm
Range ≈152.4 cm
Added the specs of hardware used
4. Complete the details on the data
Page 28-30
gathering e.g.(distance, height)
Laptop Specs
I5 3400i
GTX 940m 4GB
8GB RAM
1TB HDD