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THESIS/CAPSTONE CONFORMITY OF REVISIONS

Date : 1/28/2019

TITLE : A Pilot Study of Detection of Taekwondo Kicks Using RGB-D Sensors

Name of Student Student No. Program of Study


Maverick Bustos 2011310689 CS
Josemaria Sebastian 2012110642 CS

IMPLEMENTATION OF THE RECOMMENDED REVISIONS

Page Reflected
Nature of Revision Actions Made
Manuscript

 Page 8-
19
1. Use proper citation  Added, Edited and rephrased some citations
 Page 38

 Discussed the advantages and limitations of the


2. Elaborate further the conclusion methodology
Page 49-51
and recommendation  Suggested a few ideas on the use of the current findings
of the methodology for future work

3. Check the tenses of the verbs.  Check and changed the future tenses of verbs to past
Page 28-48
Study was already conducted. tense to reflect study is already done.

 Added the specific details concerning the sensor

Set-Up
Height ≈104.14 cm
Range ≈152.4 cm
 Added the specs of hardware used
4. Complete the details on the data
Page 28-30
gathering e.g.(distance, height)
Laptop Specs
I5 3400i
GTX 940m 4GB
8GB RAM
1TB HDD

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