Name: ________________________________ Date:________________

Course and Year:________________________ Score:_______________

Direction: Restate each sentence using the grammatical principles of technical

writing. Erasure means wrong. (2 points each)

1. Could you utilize my E-card to forward a package to you at a rapid rate?

2. The guidance counselor made a suggestion that graduating seniors should

submit early applications to the colleges of their choice.

3. Our company takes pleasure in informing you of our newly formed administrative
stafff for this year.

4. There was one customer requesting a replacement of the product she bought
from the store the other day.

5. Observation reports are absolutely essential in that scientific project.

6. I would like to take this opportunity to thank you for sending me a copy of your
audit report

7. Many colleges have come to an understanding that continued increase of tuition

is no longer possible beacuse of strong resistance from parents to the soaring costs
of higher education.

8. Hoping to receive a copy of the newly formed solution in the near future.

9. There are a number of accountinng technicians to monitor financial transactions

and to arrange payments for invoices.

10. Please, inquire about the utilization of additional stamp for mailing the package
to the client subsequent to the meeting.

11. A lady lawyer received an email message from the chairman of the organization
regarding the case prior to the hearing.

12.A person interested in seeing the product has to give his name to the
businessman.

13. The manager said that there are several customers waiting at the lobby at the
present time.

14. It has come to my attention that the investigation of the registered accounts is
necessary to reduce numerous problems encountered within the network.

15. Needless to say, all business frims want enthusiastic, well-read, and creative
technical writers.
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