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Bo Tro 10 - 11
Bo Tro 10 - 11
I. Opening
1 - Context (sport)
There is no doubt that sport has evolved greatly since its
inception.
3 - Paraphrase
Today, sport is one of the highest grossing industries,
with celebrity athletes being paid extravagant sums of
money and many firms trying to take advantage of the
lucrative opportunities that sport offers.
4 - Answer
In my opinion, while … is not without drawbacks, the
upsides are far greater.
II. Body
Body 1
1 - Topic
On the one hand, the negative aspects of sport becoming a
business are clear.
2 - Idea 1
First, there is an enormous pay gap among athletes /
professional players / sportsmen and sportswomen
(sportspeople).
3 - Explain
A dwarfs B
Today, the money that a selected few sportspeople make
dwarfs that of the rest.
4 - Example
This situation manifests itself starkly in popular spectator
sports like football.
Body 2
1- Idea 2
In addition to income disparity, the growing funds poured
into sport also make the game more corrupted.
2 - Example
For example, many players are bribed to manipulate the
outcome of matches and certain famed individuals start to
lead a debauchery lifestyle which later results in a
decrease of their performance. (go downhill - S)
3 - Mini-conclusion
These are some of the disadvantages that money involved
in sport could have.
Body 3
1 - Topic
On the other hand, I am convinced the aforementioned
drawbacks pale in comparison with the monumental
contribution of the commercialization of sport.
2 - Explain
The funding invested in sport is central to the advancement
of this field, as is the case with any other field.
3 - Explain
With regard to earnings, the attractive financial incentives
motivate athletes to push themselves to the limit and create
healthy competition.
4 - Explain
In terms of the increasing involvement of companies, this
has provided the necessary funds for facilities to be built
and sport academies to operate.
5 - Mini-conclusion
This goes to show how monetization is necessary if sport is
to develop and gain widespread interest.
III. Conclusion
In conclusion, while the business of sport may be
criticized for its many limitations, I believe in order for
sport to thrive / prosper, commercialization is inevitable.
SPEAKING
Describe a time that you had to change your plan
[talk about yourself]
-> I’m not much of a planner
-> (compare) I have friends who plan their lives to a
tee (very detailed) >< usually just wing it (improvise =
ngẫu hứng)
-> in my experience, even the best laid plans can go
south (go downhill)
4. How would you tell your friends when you must change
plans?
-> there’s no easy way to go about this (go about sth =
approach)
-> an apology is called for (>< uncalled for) / in
order (~ necessary)
-> promise to make it up to them