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Elements of Fiction 1DI Model
Elements of Fiction 1DI Model
>this is a sample set of answers - but with way more detail that would be expected on this as a
test, as we did them together and I recorded ALL of our awesome ideas!
Expectations: Students will be able to answer all of these questions for any short story,
providing details from the story to support their arguments. These answers are longer than what
is expected, as we gathered ideas from the whole class to create these. Students should be able
to answer the question with at least one clear example from the story - quoted and explained.
C. Climax:
1. High point of the story>identify type: person vs person; person vs self;
person vs environment
>The moment that the climax occurs is when the Seller reveals that the "artifact" is, in fact,
our planet - Earth. The place where the logical climax of the action in the story, the
moments in which the sale is negotiated between the two main characters, is NOT
mentioned. The author purposely skips right over this part of the story. Because there is a
distinct "ah ha!" point where we find out that the "artifact" is our planet, we know that this
is the climax. When we look back on the details of the story, we realize that WE are the
"microbes" which have caused the destruction of the spirit of the planet. The intended
message of the story is to make people aware that our actions - polluting, using Earth's
natural resources - are having a negative impact on our planet.
2. How do the characters learn how to fix the main problem?
The problem for the characters within the story is the selling of the artifact. The Seller
wants to sell it off, and the Collector wants to verify the value of the artifact so that he can
have it in his collection. The Seller tells the Collector that the echo of the spirit of the
planet is still present but the Collector doesn't believe him until the planet lets out a "wail"
when the Seller tries to clean it. The Seller also points out the "jewels" within the
"transparent window". We can assume that the window is the ocean, and the jewels are the
fish, corals and mammals within our oceans. Once the value of the object has been
established, the Collector feels he must have it, despite the fact that his wife will not like it,
and that he may have to pay a large amount of money to have it.
In this story, the characters are not the ones who need to learn how to fix the problem - it is
humans. The message of the story is that we are killing the "spirit" of our planet, and we
need to stop doing what we are doing to cause this death. One thing which is causing this
death is pollution and we know this because there are "large sooty stains on its surface".
The actions that humans are taking on the planet - like mining - cause changes that can't be
fixed. These actions happening all over the planet for various purposes, like when we take
away natural resources which cannot be replaced, could be the "tiny organisms that feed
upon the workings...and cause the deterioration". The story warns us to stop what we are
doing before it is too late.
D. Falling Action: Once the problem has been resolved
1. What happened to the characters?
The Seller and the Collector make a deal and both are satisfied with it by the end of the
story.
2. How have they changed?
Neither of the characters changes, as the change which the author wants to see must take
place within the readers.