Student’s Name: Salsabila Fadhilah Farah H Writing Task 3

Class: A Topic: Travelling

Please write between 200 – 250 words on the following topic:

“Travelling“
(Explain about your favorite destination, somebody you always go with, your memorable experience, the biggest
challenge happened during your travelling, etc)

Hi fellas! Back with me again on my travel blog racacapa-blog! Today I am going to tell you about my vacation
experience I had. Last week, I went to the river with my special friend in the morning (why did I call it special? Because
he does mean the world to me. HAHA kidding). Shortly, he picked me at my house by car because the river is quite
far from our village. When we were going there, we sang along the song which played on the radio. One of my
favourite song was 2002 sang by Anne-Marie. The roads towards the river were very challenging because we had to
climb the mountain and there were so many curves in the mountain. Also, the views up there were pretty awesome.
The journey took time about 2 hours but it felt like only a half hour. Before my special friend caught me up in my
house, he prepared so many snacks and soft drink in the car, thus we would not be starving in this long journey.
While we arrived, I was very happy. I went out by the car and jumped into the river directly. The river was very clean Commented [v1]: should, after getting out of the car told you
and wide and we can see the riverbed. It was very safe to swimming in there because it was not so deep and the first what are you doing there. so, as if not jumping directly into the
river.
current was pretty well. Some people seemed fishing and got so many fish in their bucket. I did not swim quite long
because the water was very cold. I tried to get warm with my towel. I saw my special friend just sat beside the man
who had already fishing since we arrived at the river. When the sun started to sleep, we decided to go home and
unconsciously, I slept over until my special friend woke me up and arrived at my house. The journey was amazed me,
I was so happy and going to plan the next trip! See ya!
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Comments: Area for Improvement:*teacher only
Why is’t called racacapa-blog. I like your
language style, but please tell me in more
detail and in full, but packaged in short words.

Friend’s name: Vicky Teacher’s Name: Yulisa Hambali