Johnson Rey E.

Paclibar
9/17/19
BS-CRIM 2 SECTION B GE 7

WHEN I WAS TEN YEARS OLD

INTERNAL
: As a kid, I used to read a lot of story books. When I used to hold
my pappa’s hand and go for a walk, I used to observe the
surroundings. It always made me curious to know the things that
the book had taught me. I used to ask innumerable questions to
my dad but he never grew tired of answering them. One night,
when I was deep in sleep, I got this particular dream. I was
walking miles on the endless road, totally isolated but flanked
with beautiful trees on the either side. Fascinated by the
greenery, I marched towards it only to end up deeper and deeper
into the greenery. I happened to stop upon seeing something. It
was a massive, wonderful bungalow. I fell in love with that
amazing part of art. Yeah, it was indeed a piece of art with every
nook and corner touched artistically and lovingly. I don’t know
why I felt that it was done lovingly. May be because, things turn
out to be beautiful only when we put our love into it- just like the
delicacies prepared by mom which taste more delicious with her
love.

EXTERNAL
When I was ten years old we traveled to our farm happy
because I was always with my family. there my mom and
dad go to our farm every Sunday and I only have a week
and my partner is always home but my brother and I are
eating. I have a lot to remember because I am the oldest
child and I am the older brother but also when I am around
because I always go crazy and my mom always yells at
me because I always go home with us often I can not
believe my dad will accept me because I am crazy for
playing tin can when I was a kid playing lots of games and
doing lots of things because it was a kid and I didn't know
how to be young and that was my experience now I was
only ten years old.
ANALYSIS:
It’s amazing how we grow from careless kids to responsible
teens. What happens in the course that makes us responsible
now? It’s the seeds that we sow in the beginning which grows
and becomes a huge tree. As I sit here, silently thinking about my
growth, enduring the changes, I wonder over some questions
which don’t have an answer but it’s because of such
unanswerable situations that life has become a roller coaster
ride.
MARIEL H. QUIPANES
9/17/19
BS-CRIM 2 SECTION B GE 7

WHEN I WAS TEN YEARS OLD

INTERNAL
: As a kid, I used to read a lot of story books. When I used to hold
my pappa’s hand and go for a walk, I used to observe the
surroundings. It always made me curious to know the things that
the book had taught me. I used to ask innumerable questions to
my dad but he never grew tired of answering them. One night,
when I was deep in sleep, I got this particular dream. I was
walking miles on the endless road, totally isolated but flanked
with beautiful trees on the either side. Fascinated by the
greenery, I marched towards it only to end up deeper and deeper
into the greenery. I happened to stop upon seeing something. It
was a massive, wonderful bungalow. I fell in love with that
amazing part of art. Yeah, it was indeed a piece of art with every
nook and corner touched artistically and lovingly. I don’t know
why I felt that it was done lovingly. May be because, things turn
out to be beautiful only when we put our love into it- just like the
delicacies prepared by mom which taste more delicious with her
love.
EXTERNAL
When I was ten years old we traveled to our farm happy
because I was always with my family. there my mom and
dad go to our farm every Sunday and I only have a week
and my partner is always home but my brother and I are
eating. I have a lot to remember because I am the oldest
child and I am the older brother but also when I am around
because I always go crazy and my mom always yells at
me because I always go home with us often I can not
believe my dad will accept me because I am crazy for
playing tin can when I was a kid playing lots of games and
doing lots of things because it was a kid and I didn't know
how to be young and that was my experience now I was
only ten years old.

ANALYSIS:
It’s amazing how we grow from careless kids to responsible
teens. What happens in the course that makes us responsible
now? It’s the seeds that we sow in the beginning which grows
and becomes a huge tree. As I sit here, silently thinking about my
growth, enduring the changes, I wonder over some questions
which don’t have an answer but it’s because of such
unanswerable situations that life has become a roller coaster
ride.