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Ellen McCammon / March 26, 2017 / Grad School / applying to grad school, personal
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A statement of purpose for grad school is also where you sell the
admissions committee on why you belong in their program
speci cally. Why do you t there, and how does what they o er t your
interests?
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A strong statement of purpose will clearly and speci cally lay out your
goals in undertaking the program and what you hope to accomplish
with the degree. Again, for a research-focused program, this will focus
primarily on the research project(s) you want to undertake while you are
there. For a more professional program, discuss what interests you within
the professional eld and what skills/knowledge you hope to gain through
the program.
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In this section, we’ll present four successful graduate school statement
of purpose examples from our graduate school experts, along with a brief
commentary on each statement. These statements come from a diverse
selection of program types to show you how the core essentials of a
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statement of purpose can be implemented di erently for di erent elds.
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This statement of purpose is notable for its great use of space and its vivid
descriptions. The author is able to cram a lot into about a page. She
discusses how she came to her two primary research interests (and how
they are connected). She integrates this discussion of her interests with
information on her past experiences and quali cations for pursuing the
course of study. Finally, she includes details on her goals in pursuing the
program and components of the program that interest her. Her examples
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are speci c and eshed-out. There’s a lot very cleverly included in a small
amount of page space!
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This statement also lays out and elaborates on speci c goals the student
hopes to pursue through the program, as well as features particular to
the program that interest the student (like particular professors).
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One of the rst things you’ll likely notice about this statement is that it’s a
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single-spaced, it still comes in under 2 pages (excluding references). It
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a master’s degree statement of purpose—there’s more to lay out in terms
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The writing style is fairly straightforward—there’s de nitely a stronger
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more quantitative-focused eld, this is ne. But the writing is still well-
organized, clear, and error-free.
The writer also gives numerous examples of their past work and
experience, and shows o their knowledge of the eld through references,
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looking back at my statement of purpose, I do a good job outlining what
within the eld interests me and clearly laying out how my past
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experiences have quali ed me for the program.
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PARAGRAPH 1
Since I was a child, my favorite thing has always been a book. Not just
for the stories and information they contain, although that is a large
part of it. Mostly, I have been fascinated by the concept of book as
object—a tangible item whose purpose is to relate intangible ideas
and images. Bookbindings and jackets, di erent editions, the
marginalia in a used book—all of these things become part of the
individual book and its signi cance, and are worth study and
consideration. Books and their equivalent forms—perfect bound,
scrolled, stone tablets, papyrus—have long been an essential part of
material culture and are also one of our most signi cant sources of
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information about the human historical past. Through both the literal
object of the book, the words contained thereon, and its relationship
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the beginning and phrases like “perfect bound, scrolled, stone tablets,
papyrus” lend life to the writing and keep the reader engaged.
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This nal paragraph o ers just quick touch on my future goals beyond the
program. It’s typically ne for this to be relatively brief, as it is here, just so
long as you can clearly identify some future goals.
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I also have work experience that lends itself to the study of the book.
After my freshman year of college I interned at the Chicago History
Museum. Though I was in the visitor services department I was
exposed to the preservation and archival departments of the
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This paragraph also has a clear focus: my past, relevant work experience.
Discussing archival collections and presenting information to the public
links the interests discussed in my rst statement with my quali cations in
my second statement. However, if I were to revise this paragraph, I would
add some speci c examples of the amazing things I worked on and
handled at Houghton Library. In that job, I got to touch Oliver Cromwell’s
death mask! An interesting example would make this paragraph really pop
even more.
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suburb of Boston, I have learned the value of book history and
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learning. By managing and organizing collections in a way that makes
sense we are making information accessible to those who need it.
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example of a book-based (or book technology-based) project I did with one
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interesting examples here.
This statement is split into two parts by virtue of the two-prompt format.
However, if I were to integrate all of this information into one uni ed
statement of purpose, I would probably brie y introduce my research
interests, go in-depth on my background, then circle back around to speak
more about my personal interests and goals and what intrigues me about
the program. There’s not really one correct way to structure a statement of
purpose just so long as it ows well and paragraphs are structured in a
logical way: one topic per paragraph, with a clear topic and concluding
sentence.
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We’ve provided you with four great graduate school statement of purpose
examples from our graduate school experts. However, if you’re looking for
more, there are other sample letters of intent and statements of purpose
for graduate school online. We’ve rounded up the best ones here, along
with some strengths and weaknesses about each example.
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for a biology program. It includes useful commentary after each paragraph
about what this statement of purpose is accomplishing.
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STRENGTHS
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This statement of purpose sample is well-organized, with clear topic
sentences and points made in each paragraph.
The student clearly identi es what interests her about the program.
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research experience as a positive thing.
She gives a tiny bit of color about her personality in a relevant way
by discussing her involvement with the Natural History Society.
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are a little awkward or cliche. For example, the “many people have
asked me” sentence followed by “the answer is” is a little bit clunky.
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The author is able to very clearly and articulately lay out her
research interests and link them to past work she has successfully
completed, namely, her thesis.
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She is able to identify several things about the program and
Berkeley that indicate why it is a good t for her research interests.
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Her writing is very vivid, with excellent word choice and great
imagery.
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While very well-written and engaging, this sample statement of purpose for
graduate school is a little bit on the long side! It’s a little over two single-
spaced pages, which is de nitely pushing the limits of acceptable length.
Try to keep yours at 2 pages or less. Some of the information on the thesis
(which comprises over half of the statement of purpose) could be
condensed to bring it down to two pages.
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This is not technically a sample letter of intent for graduate school because
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STRENGTHS
This is a serviceable letter of intent: the writer clearly lays out their
own goals within the eld of pharmacy, what quali cations they have
and how they’ve arrived at their interests, and how the program ts
their needs.
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across as fairly generic. For example, “The PGY-1 Residency
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There’s a typo in the last paragraph—a “to” that doesn’t belong! This
is an unprofessional blip in an otherwise solid letter. Read you own
letter of intent aloud to avoid this!
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This is an ine ective graduate school statement of purpose example, with
annotations on why it doesn’t work.
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the statement is riddled with grammatical mistakes, awkward
sentence structures, and strange acronyms.
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