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Draft Example 3
Draft Example 3
Draft Example 3
Uncomfortable
Religious reasons
Uneducated
Too much effort
Side effects
People want to have kids
3.3 Select one of your reasons and conduct a ‘myth bust’ find information to support or help
someone who might feel this way. Be mindful of emotions and use evidence.
In my opinion condoms might be uncomfortable but having a STI for the rest of your life would
be a lot more uncomfortable. Some STIs have side effects which can be painful and on going.
Being uncomfortable for a short amount of time is better than being uncomfortable for the rest of
your life. Commented [hf9]: Find three examples of STIS which are
life long, so once you get it the symptoms might leave but
the infection does not. Look at this table;
https://smartsexresource.com/about-stis/types-stis. In the
***** I like your use of original thoughts, but you can’t just pull information from the sky. You last column, find those that may stay or will stay in the
must be able to show me that you have sourced this health information from an official website. body.
Give me the author and the year of what resource you have used to get the facts from. The
Port Broughton Area School: 9/10 HPE | SHINE
author and the year are above the links on the resources page. I have indicated where you should
do this within the writing. There is another aim behind safe sex, it is not all just physical, it’s
something mental and emotional. List it in your first question. Also spread the first answer out,
give me at least three sentences.
For question 3.1, think about what same sex intercourse involves, is there still the chance of
bodily fluids exchanging between partners? What can happen as a result from this? What
resources are under this question on the resources page?... tell me what could happen, how it
could happen and how to stop it from happening?
Over all you have provided some good writing, your opinions show me that you can think critically
about sexual health but now I just need you to talk more and provide evidence.
You cannot have the same answer as another student. You will both fail that section.
Guidelines:
- You must use three different STIs in your responses.
- To highlight the validity of a point (how true it is), include a reference. Back your ideas with
evidence. Include more than one reference when possible.
- Use appropriate referencing including intext referencing and a reference list, (guide given).
- Use appropriate and inclusive language.
- Write your responses under each numbered question.
Due Date:
- You will be given one draft. This is due Friday morning 17/8.
- You will have Mondays lesson to alter any suggestions and complete the work before handing
it in that day 20/8.
- If deadlines are not met you will be spending your lunch times catching up.
Word count:
- Approximately 400-500 words.