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That puppy’s knocking maggie and milly and molly “A Kite for Aibhín” Stylistic Analysis of Anna Stylistic

Stylistic Analysis of Anna Stylistic Analysis of The Voice


over those potplants! and may Swell’s “BLACK BEAUTY”: A
(deviation) Poetic Prose
graphological First, there is the palpable Capitalization is an important Multiple punctuation marks Graphological features applied in
physical substance of the element in Cummings‘ in a sentence, capitalization, the story are punctuation; full stop
utterance which, when poems. His style of writing hyphenation, dashes, use of (.) 186 times, comma (,) 93 times,
written, comprises poetry is manifested by brackets, unusual spellings apostrophe („) 41 times, inverted
graphetic substance or, violating the regular rules of and quotation marks are commas (“”) 161 times, question
when spoken, phonetic capitalization or punctuation unique graphological mark (?) 18 times and exclamation
substance. in general. He often writes features of the text. The use mark (!) 7 times. Another
In terms of graphology, proper names in small letters. of such features has excessively used graphological
this particular sentence Even his own name is written particular semantic and feature is „contracted form‟. For
is written in the Roman using small letters. Rather stylistic effects on texts example they‟re, shan‟t, haven‟t,
alphabet, and in a 10 point than capitalizing the first  Use of Multiple wouldn‟t, can‟t, it‟s, who‟s, you‟ve,
emboldened ‘palatino’ word of every sentence, or Punctuation Marks: Use of he‟s etc These contracted forms are
font. every proper name, particular punctuation marks used for the economy of space and
However, as if to echo its Cummings seems to have an in a sentence creates certain time. Capitalization is used for two
counterpart in speech, the entirely different use for effects in the text. Often such times in the story. For example,
sentence-final exclamation capitalization in a poem. In fragmented language makes
mark suggests an emphatic this poem, there are text difficult to comprehend A Message.
style of vocal delivery. numerous examples of the but here case is reverse. Capitalization is used here to
graphological deviation. Sentences narrated by Black emphasize the word “A MESSAGE”.
Examples from the poem Beauty are fragmented but It shows the importance of word
include; ―maggie, milly, are not difficult to “the message”. It is a deviation.
molly and may” also starting comprehend. It also helps the Thou whose Voice the waters
the lines of the poem without author to narrate the events heard, and hushed their saying at
capitalization in detail which is an evidence Thy Word.
of her extensive and deep
observation of animal life. The capitalization in this statement
Two or three examples are is not a deviation on the part of
being presented here. writer. It is the norm of language as
Example:  "Over the hedge, these words referred to The Lord,
on one side we looked into who is a supernatural force.
the plowed fields and on the
other we looked over a gate
at our master's house we
stood by the road side."(p4) 
"My mother seemed much
troubled; she said that she
had known that horse for
years, and his name was Rob
Roy; he was a good horse,
and there was no vice in
him."(p 8-9)

 Capitalization Every
chapter and its title is
capitalized and serves the
purpose of foregrounding
and attracts the readers and
brings colors to aesthetic
beauty of novel. The title of
all chapters is in noun
phrases just like news
report’s heading. Examples: 
"MY EARLY HOME"(p4) 
"CHAPTER 2"  "THE
HUNT"(P7)

Unusual Spellings 
"Hallo"(p33),"Thank Ye"(p33)
and "Plowed" are the words
with unusual spellings. There
purpose looks to create
certain effects because in the
whole novel "Ye" is not used
for "you" except in this
sentence. Hello and ploughed
are actual words for "Hallo"
and "Plowed".

 Use of Brackets Use of


bracket is also a
graphological feature of this
text. It has been used to
provide extra information
related to particular event or
Example:  Dorothy (Dolly
they called her) p35  (I was
on the side next the house
and could see all that went
on) p25

 Hyphenation Hyphenation
has been used to create new
vocabulary item in the text
which adds colors to literary
expressions in the novel and
also has the aesthetic appeal
for the readers.
Examples:  Cart-horse cart
(p5)  Well-born (p5)  Box-
stall (p13)  Water-mill (p15)

That puppy’s knocking maggie and milly and molly “A Kite for Aibhín” Stylistic Analysis Stylistic Analysis of Anna Stylistic Analysis of The Voice
over those potplants! and may of the Short Swell’s “BLACK BEAUTY”: A
Story ‘The Last Poetic Prose
Word’ by Dr.
A. R. Tabassum
phonological In that spoken This lyric has a nursery 1-Assonance: the repetition Alliteration Anna Swell has exploited Mental activities and exact feelings
counterpart, systematic rhyming, song for little of the vowel sound to The repetition of different literary devices to of characters are described through
differences in sound sort children. So there is ample create internal rhyming initial consonant create a particular aesthetic phonological features in the story
out the meanings of the use of alliteration. It helps in within the poetic line. life/ sounds in closely appeal in her “The Voice”. For example,
words used: thus, the creating rhythm and music time; pale/air; white/high; occurring words anthropomorphic and Onomatopoeia is applied in the
word-initial /n/ sound at suitable for a table for beating/breeze is called autobiographical memoir of description of “The Voice” to make
the start of ‘knocking’ will example: alliteration. The horse "Black Beauty".  it clear and lively.
serve to distinguish it from, i. maggie and milly and molly 2-Alliteration: the text under study Sound Repetition: It is one of
say, words like ‘rocking’ or and may repetition of the consonant displays the outstanding features of Then he called out more loudly
‘mocking’. To that extent, ii. so sweetly sound, for example; the numerous "Black Beauty". Almost on “Morgan”!
the phoneme /n/ expresses iii. stranded star third line white- wing, instances of every page, there is more
a meaningful difference iv. five languid fingers beating –breeze , also in alliteration. than one example of sound In this sentence by speaking slowly
in sound. v. blowing bubbles the eleventh line; with – ‘……and here is repetition. This is in-form of and loudly respectively, feelings and
vi. a smooth round stone wind, and the fifteenth line; my dusty shirt alliteration and assonance. At mental condition of Lewis is shown.
Apart from these fixed Climbing –carrying. smeared with least one example from every
features of pronunciation, At the phonological level, sweat and dirt.’ page will be put forward.  Lewis in terror.
there is potential for there are many examples of 3-Free repetition: which ‘Why has sweat The repetition of sounds in
significant variation in rhyme, end rhyme, and means the repetition of full dried suddenly different names in the novel hear”?
much of the phonetic internal rhyme. ―may-day, words in the poem. For on your creates a very unique impact
detail of the spoken stone-alone, me-sea‖. example; the word ―and‖ forehead?’ on the mind of the readers. Here „shouting‟ represents Lewis‟
version of example (1). For is repeated so many times ‘During the last On the other hand, sound fear.
instance, many speakers of There is a pattern in stressed in the whole poem about watches of the repetition creates a musical
English will not sound in and unstressed syllables 10 times, also the word last night while effect in this text and makes sharply from the whole.
connected speech the ‘t’s correspondingly referred to ―kite‖, and the word lying in my dark text of the novel just like
of both ‘That’ and as the ‘ictus‘ (/) and the ―carrying‖ in line (15). If room….’ poetic prose.  "Rob Roy" „Sharply‟ represents Lewis‟ rage in
‘potplants’, but will instead ‗remiss‘ (x). The basic foot in we want to know the ‘Then she smiled (p9)  "Black Beauty"(p16)  this sentence.
use ‘glottal stops’ in these this poem is iamb with some reason for and said to me:’ "Gray Grant or Governor
positions. This is largely a variations, ‘You are exactly Grant fear‟, said the old man calmly.
consequence of the e.g.: what I wanted
phonetic environment in /x/x/x/ you to be.’ Here, „calmly‟ shows Morgan‟s
which the ‘t’ occurs: in maggie and milly and molly ‘….the Expression such as on page inner satisfaction. Pritchett applies
both cases it is followed by and may nightingale sang 25, 16 and 7 serve as an other phonological features like
a /p/ consonant and this There is a repetition of the a sweet and effective onomatopoeia assonance, consonance, alliteration
has the effect of inducing a conjunction ‘and‘ which gives melodious song. which adds color to the and repetition etc to beautify his
change, 'ise to a typical rhythm found ‘………beauty of beauty of text and Swell's work. Consonance is the repetition
known as a ‘secondary in children‘s song. The my man. style.  "snappish and of consonant sounds at the end of
articulation’, in the way number of syllable line-wise ‘……the lovely suspicious" (p26)  "will do the words in a sentence. For
the ‘t’ is sounded . is 1-2-9-3 drops of dew…… very well with"(p27) example,
Whereas this secondary The number of syllables in “And the dark  "day by day, whole by ing their lives
articulation is not many lines is similar so it and stormy night whole"(p28)  "still strained working and digging for hours.
necessarily so conditioned, helps to create rhyme. Thus, is drawing on the saddle"(p29)
the social or regional all these devices help create nigh…….’ In this sentence \η\ is repeated
origins of a speaker may nursery rhyme flavor which is Assonance  Sound Elision: In this thrice. It‟s a consonance.
affect other aspects of the thematically blended with the Assonance is the process writer often omits a k-lock of the word went on.
spoken utterance. A major tone of the moral fable. repetition of unit of sound or even syllable
regional difference in similar vowel to create certain literary \k\ is consonance in this statement.
accent will be heard in the sounds in closely effect which satisfies Consonance \t\ is repeated.
realisation of the historic occurring words. aesthetic sense of readers. Alliteration is a repetition of initial
<r> – a feature so named Following Swell has exploited this consonant sounds in two or more
because it was once, as its instances of sound device to achieve her words in a sentence. For example,
retention in the modern assonance are
aesthetic goals.  "I don't
spelling of a word like found in the text. communion rail.
know" (p35,7)  "I don't
‘over’ suggests, common …..and here is my
believe" (p21,26)  "but 'twas
to all accents of English. dusty shirt \k\ sound is alliteration as it is
all for me"  "I don't
Whereas smeared with repeated thrice.
think"(p14)
this /r/ is still present in sweat and dirt.
Irish and in most American “And the dark
pronunciations, it has and stormy night  Elongation of sounds: This \r\ sound is repeated twice in this
largely disappeared in is drawing device has also been used for sentence, it‟s also alliteration.
Australian and in most nigh…….’ 5.2.3 emphasis such as at page 7; 
English accents. Finally, the Consonance "yo!yo,o,o!yo,o,o!" hands over the pit.
articulation of the ‘ing’ There is
sequence at the end of the repetition of \h\ as alliteration, repeated three
word ‘knocking’ may also ‘s’,‘t’ and ‘d’ times.
vary, with an ‘in’ sound sounds in these
indicating a perhaps lower lines. …… his skin again.
status accent or an is sunburned.
informal style of delivery. ‘……and here is \w\ is alliteration in this sentence.
my dusty shirt
smeared with
sweat and dirt.’
‘Why has sweat
dried suddenly
on your
forehead?’ 5.2.4
Rhyme “Then she
smiled and said
to me: You are
exactly what I
wanted you to
be.”
That puppy’s knocking maggie and milly and molly Stylistic Analysis of The Voice
over those potplants! and may

Morphologic Certain of these The words used in this poem V.S Pritchett has created new words
al morphemes, the ‘root’ are those which figure in from existing ones through word
morphemes, children‘s language or formation. For example,
can stand as individual domain. They are related to from world.
words in their own right, the toys or for which children
whereas others, such as have attraction. So they
prefixes and evoke the world of children Three types of word formation are
suffixes, depend for their and their interests. These can found in this story; 3.6.1 Affixation It
meaning on being be treated as words of a set is the formation of new words by
conjoined or bound to of their associated words or joining free morphemes and bound
other items. Thus, collocated words. For morphemes. For example,
‘potplants’ has three example:
constituents: two root
morphemes (‘pot’ and ―Beach – sea – standed –
‘plant’) and a suffix star – shell – sing – horrible
thing – round stone – bubbles Unmistakable (prefix; „un‟ and
– blowing- Sang-not suffix; „able‟)
(the plural morpheme ‘s’), remember troubles,
making the word a three befriended- chased.‖ „ed‟)
morpheme cluster
All these are the words from 3.6.2 Compounding Compounding is
a set. They create or evoke an to combine free morphemes to
atmosphere at the sea-beach make new words. For example,
and how children help
themselves and meet their
interests, the use of too many gyman
‘ands‘ in the first line of the
poem cannot go unnoticed. It 3.6.3 Hyphenation Hyphenation is
distinguishes the four people formation of new words by joining
at the same time also groups free morphemes through hyphens.
them. For example,
-goat
-walk
-tack

That puppy’s knocking maggie and milly and molly Stylistic Analysis of The Voice A Stylistic Analysis of a Philippine
over those potplants! and may Essay, “The Will of the River”

semantic A truth value specifies the In the story, many figures of speech The classified adjuncts in the initial
conditions under which a are used to accomplish the semantic positions facilitated in the analysis
particular sentence may be expressions. Personification is a of the meaning of the essay.
regarded as true or false. typical rhetorical device in fairy
For instance, in this tales. In this story, the pigeon just The essay opened with a locative
(admittedly hypothetical) symbolizes the omen of release. prepositional phrase function as a
sentence, the Furthermore, Pritchett also applies subject of the sentence. As a
lexical item ‘puppy’ similes and metaphors excessively subject, it does not function as an
commits the speaker to which make the language diversified adverbial. It fulfills a syntactically
the fact that a certain type and beautiful. Here lists some nominal function. But since it
of entity examples excerpted from this story answers the question where it
(namely, a young canine to illustrate the similes and denotes a semantically adverbial
animal) is responsible for metaphors. function. It expresses circumstance.
the action carried out. 3.5.1 Similes (4) [BY MY WIFE’S ancestral home]
Other flows a river. The subject of the
terms, such as the tooth. clause itself identifies the location of
superordinate items ‘dog’ the river in the essay. According to
or even ‘animal’, would Busse (2012), a by my construction
still be compatible rabbit. is lexically primed because “the
in part with the truth persons, concepts or things referred
conditions of the sentence. to are usually held high in high
3.5.2 Metaphors Lewis calls Morgan esteem by the speaker. Also, they
“devil” again and again. „Devil‟ is are thought to be appreciated by
metaphorically used here to show the hearer” (Hoey, 2005 in Busse,
Lewis‟ biasness against Morgan. 2012 p.302). This said construction
seems to tell us that the river is very
significant to the narrator.
Essentially, the succeeding clauses
of the essay show initial position
adjuncts of circumstance time
providing more information of time
duration and temporal position that
make the narration of the author
vivid.
(5) [For a dozen summers] I have
visited it, and almost every year I
make an effort to trace its course
back to its source in the neighboring
hills; I do not consider my vacation
there complete without doing this.
(6) [But] [this past summer] I saw
something I had never seen before,
though I know that if I had been
sufficiently observant in other
abnormally dry years, I am sure I
could not have failed to notice the
same thing earlier

Circumstance time duration in the


initial position in (5) informed the
reader of the number of times the
speaker has visited the river. The
lexicon summer in the Philippines
usually refers to either in the month
of April or May where most Filipinos
have their vacation by spending it to
some beautiful destinations or visit
their relatives in the provinces just
like what the narrator did in the
essay. The duration of time suggests
not only the fondness and value of
the river to the narrator but also its
deep familiarity with him.
EVIDENTLY, the narrator has known
the river for so long. Initial adjuncts
in (6) contribute to cohesion by
being anaphoric through the
repeated word such as summer that
exemplifies cohesion of the text.

Significantly, the author has


effectively woven the events using
linking adverbials which are
important devices for creating
textual cohesion (Biber et al., 1999).
The author employed them to
organize and connect long stretches
of clauses and to help readers follow
the preceding discourse. In the
essay, most occurrences of this
classification are conjunctions which
introduce another context with their
pragmatic meaning while others
retained their semantic meanings.
They function as linking adjuncts as
shown in the following lines in the
essay: (23) [But] [this past summer] I
saw something I had never seen
before… (24) [But] [where we stood
at the moment] there was no water
to be seen. (25) [And] [yet],
[continuing our way into the hills],
we found the river grow deeper…
(26) [But] Bacong - because that is
the name of our river determined to
reach the sea… (27) [And] [then] I
thought of human life. (28) [But] I
thought most of all of those who,
like our river… (29) [On the other
hand], think of other lives that, …
(30) [And] what is the duty of a
river? (31) [For] part of the
ministering duty of a river is to flow
on and on… (32 [And] does this not
suggest that the river of man’s life
should be likewise? (33) [For] [if in
the face of obstacles] it lacks the
strength… (34) [For] Bacong was
able to carry on…
That puppy’s knocking maggie and milly and molly Stylistic Analysis of the Stylistic Analysis of The Voice A Stylistic Analysis of a Philippine
over those potplants! and may Short Story ‘The Last Word’ Essay, “The Will of the River”
by Dr.

A. R. Tabassum

Syntactic from morphology takes us Note the grammatical The story contains various The syntactic features of the story THE PHYSICAL STRUCTURE
into the domain of deviation in line11 ―Like a parallel structures. The are of both types, short as well as
Lexico- The essay consists of 15 paragraphs
language organisation you or me‖ (misclassification- story contains parallelism long. The shortest sentence in the
grammar with 53 sentences and 1,356 words.
known as the grammar, or word of one class for on the phonemic, word and story is only of one word; for
The highest number of words in a
more appropriately another) here the personal syntactic levels. Anaphora example,
paragraph is 229 which occurred in
perhaps, given that both pronouns turn up as heads of occurs where many
the last paragraph. It also has the
lexis and word-structure noun phrases. See also the successive clause or
greatest number of sentences, and
are normally included in deviant syntax in the use of sentences start with the
the lowest number of words is 22
such a description, the ‘alone‘ as an object of same word or clause.
Longest sentence in the story is which occurred in the 9th
lexico-grammar. comparison. Following instances of
comprised of 65 words. For paragraph, the only paragraph
anaphora and parallel
Much could be said of the ―As small as a world and as example, which contains only one sentence.
syntactic structure are
grammar of this sentence: long as alone‖. Notice the
found in the text, which are ial adjunct adverbials including the
it is a single ‘clause’ in the deviation in the following
in big proportion if we man with saintly white head and the adjuncts that appear in series in a
indicative declarative line:
consider the total length of eyes half closed by the worldly clause. Thirteen out of fifteen
mood. It has a Subject
―Whose rays five languid the story. juices of food and wine, for walking paragraphs have initial position
(‘That puppy’), a Predicator about dressed in his vestments, like
fingers were‖ (dislocation). adjuncts which include coordinating
(‘ ’s knocking over’) and a “Here is my shovel, here is an actor walking in the sun of his
These two examples of conjunctions functioning
Complement (‘those my basket, and here is my own vanity, a hook-nosed satyr, a
fragmentation/ parenthesis semantically as adjuncts. The
potplants’). Each of these dusty shirt smeared with he-goat
placed in bracket, e.g. (to play highest number of adjuncts is in the
clause constituents is sweat and dirt.” significant to servant girls, the crony
one day); like a you or a me). last paragraph in which the number
realised by a phrase which of the public-house, the chaser of
The use of the indefinite “Why have you dropped of occurrences is almost one-fourth
itself has structure. For bookmakers, the smoker of cigars.
article ‗a‘ modifying your scythes from your of the total initial adjuncts while the
instance, the verb phrase
pronouns ‗you‘ and ‗me‘ as hands in despair? Why has It is a combination of narration and second higher in number occur in
which expresses the
in like a you or a me. It sweat dried suddenly on dialogues. The story opens with paragraph 2 with half of the total
Predicator has a three part
suggests anyone in the world your forehead? narration and further continues in and 12 have the third highest
structure, containing a
in a novel manner. both the narration and dialogues. number of occurrences with the
contracted auxiliary ‘[i]s’, a Why have you turned
The language is a bit difficult and same distribution. The least
main verb ‘knocking’ and a In line no. 3 and 4 there is a pale?”
not easy to be understood. It is occurrences are in paragraph 1, 3, 6
preposition ‘over’ which case of syntactic elaboration
“His body is disfigured with featured by a formal style. Complex and 14 while single occurrences are
operates as a special kind e.g. and Maggie discovered
bruises and wounds and his phrases, clauses and sentences are recognized in paragraphs 7, 9, 11
of extension to the main “a shell that sang so sweetly
heart is bleeding. His hair is used frequently. and 13. The syntactic realization of
verb. This extension makes she couldn’t remember the
unkempt, his face is not these initial sentence adjuncts
the verb a phrasal verb, troubles”.
given a ranged from single adverbs to
one test for which is being
There are many cases of adverb phrases, clauses and
able to move the extension wash and his skin is
parallel structures: coordinating conjunctions. Most of
particle along the sentence sunburned.” these series are a combination of
to a position beyond the 1- Maggie discovered a shell
Worry you not if the way is single word and phrase or word and
Complement (‘That S.V.O
long and full of uncertainty, clause or clause and another clause
puppy’s knocking those
2- She couldn‘t remember the night is dark, and I in a clause. These series may affect
potplants over!’).
the troubles S.V.O disfigured and weak.” the comprehension of the readers
on the essay. In the essay, the [ ] is
3- Milly befriended a “I moaned. I screamed.” used to show the series of initial
stranded star S.V.O adjuncts.
“She paused. She
4- We loose S.V. pondered.” (1) [And] [yet], [continuing our way
5- We find S.V. “I could not scan the dust into the hills], we found the river
on your face, could not grow deeper and stronger than it
gauge the depth of your was as it passed by our cottage. (2)
wounds, could not hear the [Verily], [if a man derives his
beats of your strength and inspiration from a low
and feeble source,] he will fail to
aching heart, and could not “arrive.”
feel the bruises you had.”

Repetition

There is a lot of repetition


of certain phrase, clauses
and words
Mates and friends!

I must depart from you

My sweetheart has called


me back.

Besides the phrase and


clauses mentioned above,
certain nouns are
frequently repeated. These
are:

Dust, bruises, wounds,


dark, storm, heart, despair,
night, sweetheart, beauty,
sun, garden, song

Verbs like sigh, sobbed and


loved are also repeated
time and again. Modal
auxiliaries must, will and
should are also frequently
used.

That puppy’s knocking


over those potplants!

discourse the use of a more


generalised word like, say,
‘animal’ will have exactly
the same repercussions for
the utterance as discourse.

In spite of its semantic


compatibility, this less
specific term would
implicate in many contexts
a rather negative
evaluation by the speaker
of the entity referred to.
This type of implication is
pragmatic rather than
semantic because it is
more about the meaning
of language in context than
about the meaning of
language per se.

Returning to the semantic


component of example (1),
the demonstrative words
‘That’ and ‘those’ express
physical orientation in
language by pointing to
where the speaker is
situated relative to other
entities specified in the
sentence. This
orientational function of
language is known as
deixis. In this instance, the
demonstratives suggest
that the speaker is
positioned some distance
away from the referents
‘puppy’ and ‘potplants’.
The deictic relationship is
therefore ‘distal’, whereas
the parallel
demonstratives ‘This’ and
‘these’ would imply a
‘proximal’ relationship to
the referents.

That puppy’s knocking


over those potplants!
Stylistic Analysis of The Voice

lexical The word ‘knocking’ also Pritchett has used complex and
raises an issue in lexicology plentiful words. The story is
: notice for instance how combination of common and
contemporary English uncommon words, shorter and
pronunciation no longer longer words. The shortest word is
accommodates the two comprised of a single alphabet. For
example „A‟ and these are 86 in
word-initial graphemes <k>
number. While the longest word is
and <n> that appear in the
comprised of 13 alphabet i-e
spelling of this word. The „Extraordinary‟ and it is present in
<kn> sequence – originally the story for one time. Complex
spelt <cn> – has become a words like,
single /n/ pronunciation, Smouldering cloth,
along with equivalent
occurrences in other
Anglo-Saxon derived lexis
in modern English like
‘know’ and ‘knee’. The They are used to express the themes
double consonant of the story and inner mental
pronunciation is however activities and feelings of characters.
still retained in the They also beautify the language of
vocabulary of cognate story. For a few times the writer has
languages like modern deviated from the norms of
Dutch; as in ‘knie’ language to create the uniqueness
(meaning ‘knee’) or and newness in his work. Three
‘knoop’ (meaning ‘knot’) it types of lexical deviations are
is perhaps the very present in the story. 3.3.1
obviousness in the context Contraction Words are contracted
of what the puppy is doing for the economy of space and time.
vis-à-vis the content of the This style is used mostly in speaking
utterance that would but Pritchett has applied it n writing.
prompt the addressee to For example, They‟re, in the place
look beyond what the of „they are‟, shan‟t, in the place of
speaker ‘literally’ says. The „shall not‟, haven‟t, in the place of
speaker, who, remember, „have not‟, wouldn‟t, in the place of
is positioned deictically „would not‟ can‟t, is used for
further away from the „cannot‟, it‟s, is used for „it is‟
referents, may also feel who‟s, is used instead of „who is‟,
that this discourse strategy and you‟ve has used for „you have‟.
is appropriate for a better- 3.3.2 Neologism Neologism is the
placed interlocutor to formation of new words, which are
make the required timely used for the first time in a text and
intervention. Yet the same not applicable in the language
discourse context can normally. Pritchett has neologized
produce any of a number three such words:
of other strategies. A less
-lock,
forthright speaker might
employ a more tentative -table,
gambit, through something
like ‘Sorry, but I think you -walk.
might want to keep an eye 3.3.3 Functional Conversion In
on that puppy . . .’. Here, functional conversion, noun is used
indirection serves a as a verb or a verb is used as a noun.
politeness function, Example of functional conversion of
although indirection of this story is
itself is not always the best
policy in urgent situations
where politeness
considerations can be
over-ridden Here, word „cake‟ that is noun is
used as a verb, though there could
be used word “flowed” in place of
caked. But writer has preferred
„caked‟ to give rich expression.

maggie and milly and molly


and may

(deviation)

Figures of 1- ―Its ourselves we find in


speech the sea (of life)‖ and
―whose rays five languid
fingers were‖.

These two lines are


metaphors, which mean an
implied comparison between
two things of unlike nature.

2-―as small as a world and as


large as alone‖

This line is a simile. Notice


the use of the word ―as‖ to
compare the likeness of the
size of the world. A simile is a
figure of speech by which one
thing, action, or relation is
likened or explicitly
compared, often with as or
like, to something of a
different kind or quality.

By mentioning an example of
stylistic analysis, one can
easily recognize the patterns
of alliteration, repetition, and
examine these patterns,
which contribute to meaning
and our interpretation of the
poetic contents and effects.
The next poem will enhance
the stylistic interpretation by
giving another style and
technique of another poet.

It is necessary to note that


diction is the choice of words
a poet uses to bring meaning
across. In working through a
poem, it is useful to question
why a certain word is used,
and what kind of effect is
achieved with the choice and
placement of the word.
Besides its implied meaning,
diction also adds to the mood
and attitude of a poem; the
choice of words may be used
to evoke a feeling in the
reader. Widdowson(1992:12)
has described poems as:
―Poems are uses of
language, but in many ways
they are peculiar uses of
language. Their meanings are
elliptical and elusive,
deflections from the familiar.
They seem often to be
perversely obscure in their
flouting of conventional
standards of clarity and
commonsense. They are
frequently eccentric in choice
of word and turn of phrase.
They are cast in curious
prosodic forms of rhythm and
rhyme, assembling language
not, as is usual, in sequence
but in parallel lines‘.

discourse

maggie and milly and molly “A Kite for Aibhín”


and may

Rhythm and First of all, the rhyme scheme the language of the poem is
meter of this poem is rather simple. The total
AABCDDEFGGHH, so we can number of the words in the
easily notice that the lines (3- poem is (143) words. This
4) and (7-8) break the poem has rather various
rhyming scheme of the poem. rhyming scheme, which is;
There is also a kind of (a,b,c,d,e,d,f,g,f,h,I,h,j….etc)
parallelism between the two
Also, this poem consists of
lines (3-7), this is also right
(6) stanzas and the last line
between (4-8), these lines
―The kite takes off, itself
end with (troubles, and –
alone, a windfall‖. Each
bubbles, and
stanza consists of three
lines, which is called a
triplet using free repletion
the only answer is that to
create a musical effect and
to emphasize certain point
that the poet has in his
mind.

A Stylistic Analysis of
Complexity in William
Faulkner's

"A Rose for Emily"

Complexity of Sentence Structure


Sentence
In this level the three types of
sentence are surveyed
throughout the whole story:

a. Simple sentences

Faulkner's intelligent
utilization of sentence type is
highly obvious in A Rose for
Emily. There are 60 simple
sentences

that are mainly functioned


for basically three purposes:

1- Change of ------- time, e.g.


act I sentences no. 11 & 26

------- point of view, e.g. act I


sentences no. 31 & 32

------- place, e.g. act III


sentence no. 4

2- Rapid happenings, e.g. act


III sentence no. 6

3- Miss Emily's relationship


with the people of her town
reflecting her dignity and
obstinacy, e.g. act II
sentences

no. 18 & 19

b. Complex sentences

Complex sentences include


Paratactic and Hypotactic
constructions. Paratactic
constructions are mainly used
in direct

speech, for instance, Act III


sentences no. 15 & 24. They
sometimes also refer to the
addition of something. The
total

number of paratactic
constructions is 66.

On the other hand there are


96 hypotactic constructions in
the story and Faulkner
functions them intelligently
to convey

his theme. Since the theme is


complex in nature, he needs
a complex (round) character
represented in Miss Emily
and

complex constructions
represented in the hypotactic
ones. Almost all hypotactic
and para-hypotactic
constructions are

used to describe the complex


psychological aspects of this
character. Faulkner uses this
complex structure as a type
of

technique to express man’s


position in the modern world.
The complexity of Faulkner's
narrative structures mirrors
the

complex lives we lead.

Concerning sentence length


as another face of
complexity, Faulkner uses
sentences that vary in their
lengths; however,

the majority of them are


lengthy ones. He exploits the
longest sentence no. 4 / ACT
V which is complex of a
hypotactic

construction to declare the


climax. This sentence is
represented in table (5) in the
appendix as:

α˄β˄γ˄ε˄δ˄ζ˄η˄θ˄κ˄λ˄μ˄ν,
consisting of 129 words!

Complexity of sentence
structure and sentence
length are best shown in brief
in table (2) where the first
column

represent the act number,


the second the sentence
number, the third sentence
length, the fourth sentence
type whether

simple or complex, and the


fifth represents the sentence
complexity type. More
detailed tables that provide
better

descriptive illustrations are


found in the appendix.

A Stylistic Analysis of
Complexity in William
Faulkner's
"A Rose for Emily"
interpretatio Ironically, it can be seen from The first two lines are
n table (5) that when we describing the physical
reconstruct the chronological atmosphere, including the
arrangement in this linear air which the poet
fashion, describes as ―Air from
we render Faulkner’s another life and time and
masterpiece an injustice. The place‖, refers to something
order of events from a micro- special or rare, and
vision attitude shows its ―heavenly‖ as he mentions
impact on the in the second line. The third
whole story resulting in an line is a metaphoric line in
element of suspense that which the kite is described
dominates the story from as a as ―A white wing beating
whole. high against the breeze‖,
the wing which is flying
against the heavenly air in
the sky. After this
description, he ascertains
that it is a kite by using the
word ‗yes‘. He also
mentioned in the same line
that the family gathered in
one afternoon to watch this
flying kite. All this
celebrating the birth of the
newborn child, so the kite
can represent the child, and
all the family members are
gathered to attend this
great event. Then after this
peaceful description, he
mentions ―Among the
briar hedges and stripped
thorn‖, the thorn and briar‘
to refer to the delivery
process of the child or for
the waiting process which is
as we can say in our daily
life ―on pins and needles‖.

In line (7) the poet


continues to describe his
way of dealing with this
event or situation. In line
(8), he makes a reference
to ―Anahorich Hill‖ one of
the places from the poet‘s
early childhood, when he
was a schoolboy, this place
stick to his memory.
Actually, he recalls the
memory of this green place,
this place in which water
springs from the earth
making everything alive and
green (Ibid).

In line (10) and (11), the


poet comes back to
describe the kite, he
mentions that after
recalling some memories.
He said the all the family
members are watching the
kite, and then he uses
several vital verbs { hovers,
tugs, veers, dives } in this
line to describe the
movement of this flying
object.
Line (12) the family
encourages the kite as if it
is a person, Heaney uses
―rise‖ opposite to
―below‖ referring to the
position of the kite and the
family members.
In line (13) the poet uses a
simile; he makes similarity
between his hand and a
spindle (spinning wheel),
which rolling up the thread
of the kite.
Line (14) and (15) an
allegory of parenthood is
created by the poet, he is
describing how skillful is
the kite flyer is
―Unspooling, the kite a
thin-stemmed flower‖.
Actually, he encourages the
kite to soar ―Climbing and
carrying, carrying farther,
higher‖
Line (16) and (17) refer to
the infant‘s longing to the
breast of the mother and
looking at her face. Finally,
line (18) and (19) refer to
the childbirth and to the
separating process of the
umbilical cord which
connects the mother and
the child. Readers can
notice the long hyphen
referring to this process,
then the newborn child
comes down by itself as a
gift by nature, the poet
uses ―windfall‖ the most
appropriate climax to the
very beginning of the kite in
the air

Stylistic Analysis of the A stylistic analysis of a A Stylistic Analysis of a Philippine


Short Story ‘The Last selected short story in Agnes Essay, “The Will of the River”
Word’ by Dr. Newton Keith’s Land below
A. R. Tabassum the Wind: Narratorial shift,
ambivalence and mimicry in
colonial writing
Point of view The story is narrated by At the very beginning of the Since the literary piece is a narrative
first- person narrator, who short story, Agnes uses essay, it encompasses authorial
is also the protagonist of psychological point of view omniscience, his personal version of
the story. The thoughts, type A in the excerpt below, events. The writer serves as the
actions and it is clear that Agnes plays the firstperson-actional participant since
dialogues of other role of a narrator as well as the main character tells his story.
characters are conveyed to participant for this story and This focalization has a clear
us by the narrator’s point thought from a first-person authorial viewpoint which projects
of view. The narration is in point of view (Verdonk, the coherence or purpose and
fact in form of a 2002). Her description of the human perception The essay has 23
farewell speech. The trip to Semporna is from her occurrences of personal pronoun I
narrator is speaking in such point of view and is based on which justifiably indicate the
manner as if he is her participating character’s subject. However, there is also
connecting with his consciousness. Agnes greater occurrences of the pronoun
listeners and as if he knows describes as follows: it with 18 occurrences, referring to
how the river, which justifies the
they think and feel. Our return trip from the significance of the river throughout
Following instances from island usually leaves us at the essay.
the text serve best to Semporna for a night. After
illustrate this point. the green and blue of the
“Mates and friends! You jungle and sea, the glowing
are whispering in each white strand of Semporna
other’s ears. I know what seems to strike out at me like
you mean. a violent hand across the
“Let me tell you something cheek, painful almost in its
however incredible it may heat. But there is one time
sound.” thereafter the sun has first
“Mates and friends! Now gone, when the scene
don’t wink at each other becomes unbelievably
ominously.” beautiful. And perhaps
because that darkening coast
holds the memory of amok of
1935, that sunset beauty is
also sad…

However, as the story


progresses, there seems to
be a clear change of point of
view from type A to type B
when Agnes starts to
describe Abanawas and she
herself changes her roles to
be the heterodiegetic
narrator. The narrator is
telling the story from an
omniscient point of view who
tells the story using a third
person omniscient and
possesses the ability to see
the inner thought of her
characters. Here she focuses
on the character’s point of
view, feelings and inner
thoughts. She is trying to
avoid bias in her narrative by
making herself as the
omniscient narrator:

In the noisy darkness of the


jungle night he sat by the
river and thought. In only one
way could the shame be lifted
from himself and his wife. He,
Abanawas, a man of the river
had no choice in the dead
which he must do. He must
do what his ancestors had
done, what his conscience
told him to do […] when the
shame had been lifted by
blood Abanawas looked
down on the twisted, once
lovely body of his adulterous
wife transfixed to the ground
by his spear. The bleeding
torso and severe head of her
lover lay near her. As
Abanawas looked sadly down
on them he knew that his
action was just

Here Agnes discusses the


reason why Abanawas kills
his wife and her partner. She
describes Abanawas as an
obedient person who tries to
live as a dignified man in
accordance to the law of the
native. Starting from this
point, she uses zero
focalization where the
narrator does not play any
role in the story but seems to
know and says more than any
of the other characters. This
comes together with the free
indirect discourse.
Characters All the characters are
nameless. There is a
gardener who is addressing
his fellow gardeners as he
is departing from the
garden. The fellow
gardeners are very much
concerned about the
journey which the
protagonist is going to
undertake
because “the way is long
and full of uncertainty”
and the protagonist is
disfigured and weak
however he advises them
not to worry about him
and get back to work
because “the gardener is
hard to please”. This
certainly indicates the
presence of a supervisor.
Then there is the “sweet-
heart”, who is calling the
gardener to accompany
her to some unknown
destination where he
would be rewarded with
his wage of love.
Finally there are the
beauties of the garden
who will live in the ‘eternal
songs’ of the gardener
when he is gone.

Metaphor Allegory
and
metonymy The story is allegorical and
metaphorical one as it
contains two levels of
meaning.
At surface level there is a
gardener taking leave from
his fellows before leaving
the garden. This leave
taking is in form
of an address, but the
language used is clearly
not suited to a gardener.
The garden is used as a
metaphor for the world.
So at a deep level it is the
farewell speech of a man
leaving the world.
The phases of the sun are
the metaphor for the
different phases of man’s
life as in:
“Mates and friends! Today
at dawn the nightingale
sang a sweet and
melodious song which, I
know, was a message from
my sweetheart calling me
back. As the sun rose high,
the lovely drops of the
dew, precariously balanced
on the
thorns of the rose bush,
beckoned me to follow
them to her and then they
ominously left the bush.
Now the sun is on
the decline.”

FOREGROUN Parallelism and


DING anaphora
Parallelism

SYNTACTIC /
LEXICAL/
PHONEMIC

A stylistic analysis of a
selected short story in
Agnes Newton Keith’s Land
below the Wind:
Narratorial shift,
ambivalence and mimicry
in colonial writing
speech acts From the excerpt above, it
shows that Agnes uses the
narrative report of speech
acts. Agnes tries to
alienate the reader from
the imperialist by raising
the issue of how the white
man’s law has
discriminated the law of
the native. Agnes also tries
to build a closer
relationship between the
reader and the main
character Abanawas using
internal perspectives type
B. The excerpt above also
demonstrates some
aspects of transitivity items
by displaying unequal
power relationship
between the agency and
the victim—the clausal
structure of an agent-
affected –agent
hurledaffected.

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