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1 Increased the mass
base :
2-Promoted Rational
Thinking among masses:
3-Ended Isolation of
Indian Society

The medium of protest: It helped various social


reformers like Raja Ram Mohan Roy,
Ishwar Chandra Vidyasagar etc to protests against the
social evils

add this in conclusion


The press proved to be a
crucial weapon in the
social awakening of the masses as it 2.5/10 marks
led to the abolition -good attempt
of various social evils -need to
like sati, female infanticide and also widow elaborate more
remarriage was on points with
allowed by the examples
government of that time. -rephrase
conclusion

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impact

need to
rearrange
first write
policies then
their impacts
on indian
economy

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1.5/10 marks
-need restructuring
-read Q then
brainstorm the answer
then write
-add points as
need to add points how impacted the indian economy
suggested
1.Poverty and famines -keep writing
2.The ruin of old zamindars and rise of new landlordism
3.Development of modern industries: Industries developed during the second half of
the 19th century but most of the modern Indian industries
4.Stagnation and Deterioration of Agriculture: As a result of the overcrowding of
agriculture, excessive land revenue demand, increasing indebtedness
5Deindustrialization

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Moral Degradation of the Soldiers
: An excess of wealth and luxury made the Mughal
army lazy, corrupt and inefficient

Poor Economy: The


economic stability of the empire was ruined because of the
constant wars.

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Rise of New Powers: New powers such as the Sikhs, Jats and Marathas came onto
the scene. Gradually they broke off from the Mughal domination and established their
own independent state

-advent of europeans

3.5/10 marks
-need to
The Mughals ruled India for around 200 years but during the first half of the 18th century,
they lost their power and glory. Their empire shrank to a few square miles around Delhi.
rephrase some
points
-divide rather
on the basis of
external and
internal factors
-keep writing

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not required

Economic Benefits: The company


was granted undisputed
right to free trade in
Bengal, Bihar, and Orissa.
It also received the zamindari of the 24 Parganas near
Calcutta.

Eliminated Competition: This also confirmed that the British were now the only
colonial power left in the South. They pushed the Dutch and the French out of the
Southern part of India. This made the company rule effectively.

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Strong Army: The rich revenues of Bengal enabled them to organise a strong army.
This strong was further used to expand the British political influence to rest of the
Indian states.

3/10 marks
The Battle of Plassey was a decisive victory of the British East India Company. The battle -intro is fine
consolidated the Company's presence in Bengal, which later expanded to cover much of -need to explain
India over the next hundred years. the points
-add more
points
-add map of
india showing
plassey would
fetch more
marks
-keep writing

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