Writing your concept

paper
Refer to page 92
•A title should establish the main subject
and some supporting statements
•The title should tell the reader What the
paper all about
Example
• Science of the eight limbs : The bone crushing
knees
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The first paragraph
• This should contain the following
1. Introduction
2. Topic he wants to discuss
3. Topic statement
• This would help the readers understand
what the paper will discuss
Second paragraph
• The second paragraph discuss about the paradigm
• The paragraph didn’t use any kind of transitioning from the first
paragraph
• Plus the author should discuss more about the topic to make iy
more understandable
Third paragraph
• This paragraph used an transition from the first paragraph
• But the explanation about universal grammar is lacking and should
be added for the readers to understand the topic clearly
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Fourth paragraph
• The only blur about this paragraph is the connection between
Chomsky and Vygotsky ideas
Fifth paragraph
• The idea about Piaget’s frame work should be more expanded
• State some facts about this topic
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Seventh paragraph
• The author directly tackles this idea without clear connection to the
other paragraphs
• The author should give the readers the idea about the topic and how
it is connected to other topic
8th paragraph
• The author summarized the presented theories
• This helps the reader digest the information of the given topics
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Tenth paragraph
• The author lacked better way summarize the theories given
• The author should’ve given more description for it feels like just a
collection of ideas about the topic
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