ESCUELA SUPERIOR POLITÉCNICA DE CHIMBORAZO

Name: Edison Zapata

Level: Fourth A
Date: 2019 – 04 – 19

THE STORY OF MY LIFE Commented [U1]: Topic

My name is Edison Zapata, I am 22 years old and I was born in the city of Montalvo / Los Ríos,
I am a very sociable person and I fight every day to be better that through my person is reflected
an example of struggle and improvement for my brothers minors. Throughout my life I have Commented [U2]: General Statement
managed to obtain experiences 1, excel in the day to day2 and plan my dreams for the future3.
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The experiences obtained helped me to be responsible, determined and sociable thanks to the
excellent people who influenced my life. I traveled through many cities because of the work of Commented [U5]: Topic sentence
my father's merchant who has worked so that I and my family do not miss anything1. I went to
many schools and colleges, of which I have the affection of many of my teachers who, thanks to
their many advice, have helped me to move forward 2. The friends that I have managed to obtain
have been unconditional that support me in the different challenges that I face3. The people who Commented [U6]: Supporting statement
influenced my life have managed to instill a great human character that is ready for the challenges
of the future. Commented [U7]: Conclusion

Excelling in day to day has been difficult and full of efforts that in the future will provide a good
result. I am far from my family and that makes me miss them and return to my city, they advise Commented [U8]: Topic sentence
me to be strong and fulfill my dreams 1. I attend a prestigious university that gives me an education
of excellence that requires all my effort and dedication2. I work to pay the expenses generated by
studying in another city with a flexible and understanding boss who helps me to be more mature
and responsible3. This has allowed me to be a little more independent and gain life experience. Commented [U9]: Supporting statement
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In planning dreams for the future is to improve my family's lifestyle. Finish my university career Commented [U11]: Topic sentence
to fill my parents with pride1. Get a job that I like and pay me well2. With a stable capital I start
my plans to get married and start a family3. I want to fulfill all this planning of future dreams so Commented [U12]: Supporting statement
that my family does not have to go through the same problems as me.
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Finally, I hope that these experiences, my struggle to excel daily and the planning of my dreams
for the future will be a point of support for my brothers, who can achieve things with dedication
and effort if they wish. May we earn the respect and affection of the people who surround us with
humility and improve every day. Commented [U15]: Conclusion