MUET July 2017 Question 1: Report Writing - Student Enrolment of Four Universities in 2015

Student Enrolment of Four Universities in 2015 and Title

Factors Influence Student Enrolment

Figure 1 displays the student enrolment of four universities in 2015 Introduction

while Table 1 shows the factors that influenced the student enrolment. Overall,
student enrolment of four universities in 2015 differed due to factors
influencing student enrolment. Or Generally, there is a correlation between the Overview
student enrolment of four universities in 2015 and the factors that influenced 4 different options of
the enrolment. Or In general, the student enrolment of four universities in 2015 overview.
was affected by the factors influencing student enrolment. Or Generally, there
are several factors that influenced the student enrolment of four universities in Please write ONLY
2015. ONE overview
[In 2015, the enrolment of postgraduates in University A was the Analysis – “the highest”
Synthesis – “probably
highest at 90%] probably because [the university had the most number of because”
factors (4) that influenced its enrolment which are ‘reputable academic staff’, Analysis – “the most
‘excellent facilities’, ‘scholarships for postgraduates’ and ‘teaching assistant number”
Analysis – “the second
scheme for postgraduates’]. [Postgraduate enrolment in University B was the highest”
second highest at 65%] possibly because [it had ‘reputable academic staff’, Synthesis – “possibly
‘conducive learning environment’ and ‘scholarships for postgraduates’.] because”
Description
[Postgraduate enrolment in University D was the smallest at 10%] most likely Analysis – “the smallest”
because [the university did not have scholarships and teaching assistant Synthesis – “most likely
scheme for postgraduates and a conducive learning environment]. because” Description
Meanwhile,[as the factors influencing the student enrolment for University D
were ‘reputable academic staff’, ‘excellent facilities’ and ‘affordable fees for Synthesis – “Meanwhile”
Description
the undergraduates’], [the undergraduate enrolment of the university was the Analysis – “the biggest”
biggest among other universities at 90%]. [With reputable academic staff,
conducive learning environment and affordable fees for undergraduates in Synthesis – “with + factors”
Description
University C], [the university’s enrolment of the undergraduates was the Analysis – “the second
second highest (65%) among the four universities.] [Undergraduate enrolment highest”
in University C and D was higher (65% and 90%) than that of University A and B Analysis – “was higher than”
(10% and 35%) respectively] probably due to [the affordable fess offered to Synthesis – “probably due
undergraduates]. [The percentage of postgraduate enrolment in University A to”
Description
was the same as the percentage of undergraduate enrolment in University D at
90%.] Analysis – “the same”

In conclusion, the universities in 015 had different percentage of Conclusion

undergraduate and postgraduate enrolment due to the factors that influenced
student enrolment.

( XXX words)

Word count:

1 word - Figure 1, Table 1, 90%, ‘reputable academic staff’, University A

2 words - The table, excellent facilities, 90 percent, under graduates

3 words - the bar graph, reputable academic staff, 90 per cent, university A and B

4 words - affordable fees for undergraduates

5 words - teaching assistant scheme for postgraduates