Rubric and Comments for Portfolio

2nd Semester 2005-2006 Humanities Portfolio Rubric for:

Student 1

Beginning Developing Accomplished Exemplary Comments Score

1 2 3 4
Artifacts
Artifacts Artifacts Artifacts
demonstrate
demonstrate little demonstrate some demonstrate effort,
significant effort,
effort, learning, and effort and thought; learning, and
learning, and
Choice of thought; progress progress toward the thought; progress All artifacts
thought; progress 4
Artifacts toward the J2E goals J2E goals are toward the J2E
toward the J2E
well chosen.
are not well somewhat reflected goals are well
goals are extremely
reflected in the in the choice of reflected in the
well reflected in the
choice of artifacts. artifacts. choice of artifacts.
choice of artifacts.

J2E reflections J2E reflections J2E reflections J2E reflections Reflections

demonstrate a demonstrate an demonstrate a demonstrate an demonstrate
Depth of cursory adequate good excellent understanding
understanding of the understanding of understanding of understanding of of the goals
Thought goals and the the goals and the goals and the goals and and good 3.8
Demonstrated subject matter subject matter subject matter subject matter connections to
and/or little attempt and/or attempt to and/or good and/or superior the artifacts,
to think deeply. think deeply. thought processes. thought processes. overall.

FEW errors
anywhere!
*You left out a
Many mechanical Entire portfolio has
Some mechanical All or part of the couple of
errors present; little or no
errors present; portfolio has few words in one
grammar, spelling, mechanical errors;
grammar, spelling, mechanical errors; sentence, and
punctuation, and grammar, spelling,
Mechanics punctuation, and grammar, spelling, have a coupel 3.9
other mechanics punctuation, and
other mechanics punctuation, and of non-
demonstrate a other mechanics are
need some other mechanics standard
significant need to perfect or near
improvement. are good overall. phrases, but
improve in this area. perfect.
otherwise, this
was well done
and accurate.
No additional
Entire portfolio Entire portfolio pictures,
Some parts of Entire portfolio
demonstrates demonstrates music, or
portfolio demonstrates some
significant lack of significant graphics
demonstrate originality and
originality and originality and included. Nice,
Originality/ originality and creativity. Some
creativity. Extra creativity. Extra clean 3
Creativity pieces such as
creativity. pieces such as
pieces such as backgrounds.
Backgrounds, backgrounds,
backgrounds, backgrounds, The font color,
pictures, music may pictures, and music
pictures, and music pictures, and music though pretty,
be present. are present.
are absent. are present. was difficult to
read
Most links
Portfolio is functioned
Portfolio lacks Portfolio is Portfolio is neat
extremely neat and well. The links
neatness and somewhat neat and and organized.
Neatness/ organized. All links on the table of
organization. Some organized. Few links Links function well; 3.5
Organization links are broken or are broken or adequate links
function perfectly; contents all
ample links went to goal
absent. absent. present.
available. #1, but I could
navigate

Less than 5 artifacts
5 artifacts included
Required included &/or 2-4
&/or 5-6 J2E
Pieces J2E reflections
reflections included.
included
Scoring/Total 0-11 = F 12-15 = D
Comments
Reflections
J2E1 Some people passed out those 10
commandment tracks here also. I’m
glad you realize this is demonstrating
your acceptance of God, and I also
remember your J-Miller journal. Good
reflections; well written.
J2E2 I appreciate your comments about
where you were last semester as
compared to this semester. What has
made the change? (You ended this
reflection with a question; I thought
I’d end these reflection notes with
one as well.)
J2E3 I am glad that you enjoyed thinking
about your own FFT quotes this year.
Good job on this reflection.
J2E4 You made good connections
between this goal and your chosen
artifact here. Well done.
J2E5 Good connections here also.
J2E6 Yes, Angel, actually I DO catch
myself making decisions all the time,
as well as making CONNECTIONS
as you have done here between the
goal and your chosen artifact.
J2E7 I am glad you saw such a wide range
of goals being met through your
legacy project. I agree. I would not
have thought about adding
without using
that page.
6-8 artifacts
9-10 artifacts All required
included &/or 7-8
included; 10 J2E pieces 4
J2E reflections
reflections included. included.
included
16-17 =C 18-20= B 21-24 = A 22.2
Artifact(s)
Fine artifact choice for this goal.
Ellen White is a very integral part of
the Adventist church. I am glad you
have a positive attitude toward her;
not all young people your age do.
I did enjoy these personal FFT
assignments as well, Angel. You
could have included several
artifacts here if you had wanted to
REALLY impress the person
viewing the portfolio.
I have seen you mention several
times how much you enjoyed your
legacy project. I wish you had
included some pictures of it here!
I agree: the media assignments
were important in helping you
develop a balanced lifestyle!
NOW I see why you kept talking
about “health” in your reflections!
Your artifact mentioned it as well,
and now I can see the connection.
I know I mentioned this to you
before, but I really appreciate the
interest you have taken in the
homeless people, and the fact that
you have realized that many
 “communication skills” to this list, but
you have made a good case for it.
J2E8 Just being a servant leader is utilizing
personal management, don’t you
think?
J2E9 The connection between this goal
and your assignment was not as
strong here, but your reflections were
none the less good.
J2E10 The legacy project fits logically here,
and you have included other aspects
of this goal in your reflections also.
homeless people suffer from
mental illnesses of various types.
Good choice here, even though it is
short. Perhaps you could add your
whole research paper to give this
depth and demonstrate your
learning even more.
Your wording on this CLQ FFT was
lovely, demonstrating your personal
love for beauty.
I believe you have a total of three
artifacts related to your legacy
project. This truly has had a great
impact in your life!