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Theatre Writing Sample
Theatre Writing Sample
Peyton Smetana
3 May 2019
Clifford Odets’ 1935 Broadway hit, Waiting for Lefty, was raved by audiences
nationwide. A piece for the people, Odets captured the struggles and frustrations of the
American citizens in six small vignettes. Critic Edith J.R. Issacs explains that “when you
read his plays, as when you see them, you have the distinct impression that two-thirds of
the time it is Odets talking” (Miller). Undoubtedly, Odets has thrown his hat into the
revolution ring with Waiting for Lefty, calling on Americans to stand up and fight
against systemic injustices nationwide. The outcomes of the threats forced upon the
characters are relatable to the audience, but are unique to the characters themselves too.
By avoiding the implications Odets had for the audience and focusing on the characters
experience, Odets presents a series of moments where characters are separated from the
groups they ought to support, and that ought to support them. By making it clear how
much unification would help all of these characters, Odets makes a broad case for the
fairness, of protecting others—Odets looks at how the best unity happens around
class distinction and economic inequity—he also suggests that unity has a dark side.
Ultimately, Odets supports unity under positive and fair conditions as he weaves in
Odets’ belief in unity being the best under humanitarian goals. Much of the research
regards Odets’ inclusion of political ideas in each scene and how those scenes are
supposed to influence the audience watching the play. Though the research does not
specifically cover this idea of unity, the research contributes to the overall unifying idea
of selfish and corrupt unity leading to the separation of groups and unification being
incredibly important to these characters. Each of the scenes in Waiting for Lefty
produces some sort of comment regarding the character’s situation: threats to the
sanctity of family (Faulkner); the strike representing more than an increase in wages but
for a “greater dignity for a better humanity” (Chatterjee); the working man having the
right for a better life (Hertel); the immediate consequences of corrupt capitalism
(Todras); and the encouragement for workers to engage and form other communities
(Papa). With that in mind, Odets’ critics have provided a strong foundation for the
“Joe and Edna,” one of the strongest and most compelling scenes within Waiting
for Lefty, is a great example of how unity thrives when built around humanitarian goals,
though the situation itself is engulfed by systemic corruption. Their fight begins because
of missing furniture, but Joe and Edna are quick to move away from that insignificant
piece to the origin of all their problems: corrupt unity. Edna, the voice of reason,
struggles to make Joe, the oblivious and hopeful husband, recognize what action must
be taken, and who it needs to be taken against. Edna angrily expresses how Joe’s boss
has it out for them, “your boss is making suckers outa you boys every minute. Yes, and
suckers out of all the wives and the poor innocent kids” (Lauter 1712). Edna evens
realizes that it is Joe’s boss who is controlling their conversations, “your boss makes this
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subject. I never saw him in my life, but he’s putting ideas in my head a mile a minute”
(Lauter 1714). Not only is it Joe’s boss, but it is also the union too, “No? Then what are
they doing? Collecting dues and patting your back?,” and, “they don’t tell little Joey
what’s happening in his bitsie witsie union” (Lauter 1712). Edna is able to recognize the
unfairness, selfishness, and overall corruption that has manifested in both the
workplace and the union. The elites of these institutions have taken advantage of Joe
and the other workers. In order to combat the elites and their dark unity, Edna
recommends Joe take a stance and rally with his co-workers, “I don’t say one man! I say
a hundred, a thousand, a whole million, I say. But start in your own union. Get those
hack boys together!” (Lauter 1714). The idea of fighting for change is obviously better