Mckenna Lloyd

Brad Neuhoff
Professional Writing
October 13, 2019
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October 13, 2019

Javier Garcia
Associate Director, William Penn Honors Program
George Fox University

Dear Dr. Garcia,

Enclosed is the mission statement for the Reformed Christians’ Club.

I believe that the mission statement reflects the values of the proposed club very well. Please
peruse the document and let me know your thoughts. I’m very excited to work with you on
starting my club, I know your guidance will be integral to the future of the club.

Thank you so much for accepting the exciting opportunity to be the overseeing professor of the
Reformed Christians Club.

Sincerely,

Mckenna Lloyd
Mckenna Lloyd
Undergraduate Student
George Fox University
mlloyd18@georgefox.edu

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October 13, 2019

Javier Garcia
Associate Director, William Penn Honors Program
George Fox University

Dear Dr. Garcia,

Enclosed is a copy of the response from student activities concerning the formation of the
Reformed Christians’ Club.
I’m very sorry to tell you that my application to start the Reformed Christians Club has been
denied. They decided that there would not be enough student interest in that type of club.
Therefore, I will no longer need your help as overseeing professor.

Thank you for being willing to help me with the attempt to start the club. Your involvement in
my efforts was greatly appreciated.

Sincerely,

Mckenna Lloyd
Mckenna Lloyd
Undergraduate Student
George Fox University
mlloyd18@georgefox.edu

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October 13, 2019

Javier Garcia
Associate Director, William Penn Honors Program
George Fox University

Dear Dr. Garcia,

Enclosed is the mission statement for the Reformed Christians’ Club, a campus club I am hoping
to start with your help.

I need an overseeing professor for the club I want to start. I know your theological doctrine leans
more reformed, so I wanted to ask you to be the overseeing professor for the Reformed
Christians’ Club. You would need to sign off on my request paperwork and attend meetings. I
would also hope that you would advise me in club matters and guide some club activities, such
as Bible studies or off-campus events.

I hope to hear from you soon and look forward to working together on this project. If you choose
to accept, I will greatly appreciate your generous help.

Sincerely,

Mckenna Lloyd
Mckenna Lloyd
Undergraduate Student
George Fox University
mlloyd18@georgefox.edu