Elia Agusta

IELTS-Writing
9 November 2018

The graphs present the result of an experimental flu vaccine on females that was trialled in a
large country town on June 1996. In general, females were the most risky population that
affected by flu and had the highest death rate caused by it.

To begin with, in February flu rate was significantly raised from zero to 1,000 cases in April
and extremely rocketed to 3,000 cases in May that caused one person death. Next, it was
increased to 3,500 case on June which responsible for the death of 2 males and 4 females
between June to August then the flu rate gradually decreased to its end of period.

Accordingly, new vaccine was given for four categories of female groups whom most at risk
for the flu case, in the random order, vaccine was given for babies or children at 24%, women
aged over 65 years old at 35%, then 13% for hospitalized women, and lastly for those who
have not received any vaccine yet at 28%.

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