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    Kelsey Bilon completed Assignment #3 on proofreading and editing a document about the journey of the digestive system. The corrections include removing unnecessary commas, adding missing commas to separate clauses in sentences, correcting spelling errors, and adding introductory commas. A total of 10 errors across lines 1 through 22 of the original document were identified and corrections were provided.

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    Kelsey Bilon completed Assignment #3 on proofreading and editing a document about the journey of the digestive system. The corrections include removing unnecessary commas, adding missing commas to separate clauses in sentences, correcting spelling errors, and adding introductory commas. A total of 10 errors across lines 1 through 22 of the original document were identified and corrections were provided.

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    COMM 1715-Proofreading and Editing Assignment #3 —5%

    The Journey of the Digestive System*


    Answers to P&E- Assignment #3 –The Journey of the Digestive System

    Kelsey Bilon

    Line # Error Correction


    1. 1 Remove comma after then. then

    2. 2 Run on sentence with no commas for Add comma before and.


    separation.
    3. 2 it’s its
    4. 4 Run on sentence with no commas for Add comma before and .
    separation Add comma after intestine.
    5. 5 Remove colon after called. Add colon after peristalsis.
    6. 7 Add semicolon after top.
    7. 8 Add comma before and.
    8. 9 brake break
    9. 16 Introductory word missing comma. Add comma after first
    10. 22 Add comma after waste and food.

    *Adapted from “The Journey of the Digestive System” published on https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_QYwscALNng date: 26-11-12; transcribed on 06-17-19.

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