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Critique Draft
Emily Skardon
Mrs. Ostdiek
English 2040
9 May 2017
Gender has long been an obstacle for women in the workforce, due to the perception that
males are superior. In the book A Room of One's Own, Virginia Woolf critiques this system.
Woolf's commentary regarding female writers takes a feminist standpoint through a first person
narrator. She states that “a woman must have money and a room of her own if she is to write
fiction,” which is the thesis to Woolf’s argument. The book is about feminism and about how
The narrator is a woman that attends a prestigious university called Oxbridge. She seems
Once the train of thought is lost, it generally is not regained. Woolf is trying to prove a point that
women need their own space to think without interruptions to succeed in life. The text shifts in a
different direction when the narrator sees a cat without a tail which once again causes her to lose
her train of thought which shows the reader what it is like to be a writer as a woman. It
emphasizes that women cannot compete against men when it comes to writing because men are
given their own space while women are constantly being watched over. A lack of alone time
caused the quality of women's writing to suffer. The room that Woolf is wanting so terribly for
herself and other women not only gives women their own space but also stands for freedom and
financial independence, which women lack because of gender inequality during this time. The
narrator states that, “intellectual freedom depends upon material things. Poetry depends upon
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intellectual freedom. And women have always been poor, not for two hundred years merely, but
from the beginning of time . . .” which is why she finds so many women have written
unsuccessful poetry. It is easier for women to write novels because the starts and stops that come
along with interruption does not affect a novel as much because there are many different parts,
Woolf created her own writing style, which was very uncommon during this time because
there were not very many women writers who were successful let alone create their own writing
style. Many men in the early 1900’s did not believe that women could or should even be allowed
to write. Woolf does not stick to the traditional writing style, but she adds in her own twist by
adding interruptions throughout the text. She states that Mary, the narrator, has “every right…if
she does them not for the sake of breaking, but for the sake of creating,” she is creating
something new and adding it to the style of her writing. By creating her own style of writing in
the early 20th century, it shows how strong and independent of a woman she was even though
there were many people, especially men that did not think she could do it. Woolf believed that if
a woman felt grievance about the status of herself and other women, then her writing was to be
doomed. This shows how confident and independent Woolf was, she had nobody holding her
Although gender has always been an issue and today still is an issue in the workforce,
there have been a handful of women that have fought this truth and stood out against the rest.
Woolf is one of those women that did not give up. She did not care what others thought of her in
the early 20th century, with no man to financially support her. The creation of her own writing
style, she was a breakthrough for women writers all around the world.