Reflection for IO

My thesis was very clear and I had an understanding of both texts. However, I could
have expounded upon other women and their position within society and how they were forced
into their gender role. Additionally, my speaking was relatively fluent; on the other hand, I
stuttered when unsure of how to continue my commentary. In order to fix this, I should practice
and make a note of the commentary I plan to use prior to the official IO. My literary analysis was
rather weak because I did not acknowledge explicitly what each of my literary examples were.
For example, I would say what a metaphor represents but I did not state that is was a metaphor
that I was speaking about. My language as a whole was much better than the last IO because I
did not use the word like or basically compared to the amount of times I used those words in the
prior extract