NAME : RENASISTIN NUR ARYSHA

SRN : 2211417037
Genre-based Writing
Unforgettable Experience

My First Cat

Almost everyone has pets, such as birds, dogs, cats, hamsters, and others. I'll tell you about my
first pet, that was a cat. About 6 years ago this story began.

I always whined toat my grandmother, asking for a cat to be mya pet. At that time, I was still
living in my old house. One day I saw my neighbour having a few kittens. I always visitedgo to my
neighbour's house, so I can play with the kitten. After school, I heard a loud meow from under the
chair in the living room. Iit turned out that my grandmother asked a neighbourr to give one of they Commented [WU1]: Or it could be “their” [Nur Rois S
the kittens. This is my first pet cat that I named Emong. I really like the Emong. Emong have three 2211417029]
colours, that were white, black and yellow striped fur. She really likeds playing, eating, and sleeping Commented [U2]: It should be “ the “ ( Ikhlasul Amal
like a kitten in general. Two months later I moved to my new househome. Emong wasis increasingly Santosa 2211417031 )
active and he wasis happy because in my new home there wereare a lot of tall grasses. At school I
had too much homework and some test, and I often accompanied Emong. My grandmother was
angry when I forgot to feed and throw Emong's poop. This anger I give to Emong, I wouldill kicked Commented [WU3]: It might be “When I was angry to
Emong when Emong didn’tdo not want to follow orders from me until Emong madke a loud Emong,” [Nur Rois S 2211417029]
meowing. A few days passed, in the morning I looked for Emong while calling her, she was lost. I
didn’ton't know where Emong gowent. I feel guilty at that time. I cried to my grandmother while
apologizing and I said "I won't repeat it again", then my grandmother forgave me.

The second chance was open to me., Mmy mother gave the cat that she found in traditional
markets. This Himalayan cat is named Momo. I promised myself not to repeat the same mistakes like
I did to Emong. To make up for my mistake with Emong, sometimes I bring food for somecat
catssome cats on the street. I miss you Emong, even when I write this story, I'm still crying and can't
forgive myself. Commented [rr4]: Rena’s text has nice topic, I think. But
she careless about the past tenses form and some
punctuations, I think.
Commented [N5]: I don't find another mistake in this
story