What are the Common Errors While Writing an Essay?

Essay writing is difficult for many students who repeatedly make mistakes of one or the other kind and
therefore struggle to get their score in writing. By working on those mistakes and by avoid repeating them, you
are able to write an essay effectively.

Some of the common errors often make while writing an essay:

(a) Not Meeting Minimum Word Limit
Though the instruction regarding word limit is clearly written in the essay question, it is usually ignored by the
students. Rather, some students do not even bother to count the number of words in their writing tasks. So, the
result is that they do not even write the minimum number of words. The word limit for writing an essay is
minimum 150 or 175 words and you need to strictly ensure this, otherwise it would lead to reduced score.

(b) Writing Longer Essay

While you must write at least 150 or 175 words, you should also not write more. Writing longer essays
indirectly cost your marks. Actually, for two reasons, we should not be writing longer essays. One reason is
that the more you write, the more grammatical mistakes you are likely to make and therefore, it would lower
your score. Therefore, you should write accurately! The other reason is that you would not be able to complete
the essay on time or if complete it, you may not get the time to review it.

(c) Not Meeting Task Requirements

If the case is that you lack in terms of task response, it is a big issue in your essay such as not writing your
opinion in the essay question which asks for your personal opinion, missing one or the other part of the essay
question e.g. if the question is to discuss both views, one view is completely not described in the body
paragraph or one view is reasonably described more in length when you have to write both equally as per the
question.

(d) Not Explaining Ideas

One of the problems associated a student carries in his mind is that essay writing requires you to write a
number of ideas and that the more you write, the better it is. This is wrong! You should rather focus on
explaining and extending the ideas that you have mentioned in your body paragraph.

For example:
If you are writing a paragraph on reasons, mention one point as reason and then explain how it is the reason
along with supporting that reason with an example.

(d) Copying the Essay Question in Introduction

Some students are in the habit of copying the question the way it is written rather than re-writing it.
Introduction is the part where you need to paraphrase the question but if you instead copy the complete
statements from the question, the examiner will not count those words and therefore, you will get punished for
writing less number of words. Therefore, understand the essay question first and then try to rewrite it in your
own words.

(e) Missing Out Examples

It is more habitual with the students to write ideas, in general, without supporting them with examples. Writing
example is an important part of your essay and therefore, it should not be ignored at all. It is good to write an
example along with 2-3 ideas you have described in the body paragraphs. Apart from this, example should be
written as per your knowledge and experience, keeping the tone as academic.

For example, rather than writing “Yesterday, I found a person committing a crime who got caught by the
policeman” as example in the body paragraph, we can write “The one who commits crime gets punished by
the police”.

(f) Extending Length of Conclusion

It is rather common that when students are practicing essays, they give more emphasis on content and ideas in
body paragraphs, and therefore by mistake, they do extend conclusion also in the same way they write body
paragraphs. You should keep in mind that conclusion has to be shorter in length and should not look like a fully
developed body paragraph.

(g) Over-using Connectives

Many students try to go beyond the usage of connectives in essay since they know that coherence and cohesion
are important marking criteria. But actually, using the connectives more than required will lead to reduced
score. Therefore, always make sure that you are not over-using the connectives.

Following is an example of overusing connectives (highlighted below),

To begin with, technology is changing day by day and thus, bringing positive changes in the life of mankind.
Moreover, it has revolutionized the way humans used to work earlier.

(h) Incorrect Tone of Writing

Students with unplanned approach towards writing or those who are not aware of the writing format, complete
their writing tasks in informal tone the way they speak informally. It should be strictly noted that you should
write essay in academic tone and style, rather than writing as if you are talking to somebody or the way an
interactive blog is written.

For example:
Informal tone, incorrect tone of writing an essay: We see many kids are gonna have fun playing more and more
games, and wasting their time when they got to go for study.
Formal tone, correct tone of writing an essay: Many children are found wasting their precious time, by playing
games more, which they can otherwise use for study purpose.
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