Name : Selinka Eptakyrietis Hariyadi

NPM : 1906287995
Class : MPKT BING – Kelas C
Faculty : Pharmacy

ESSAY WRITING
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Introduction

General information : Car accident are fortunately very common in any part of the world.

Thesis statement : Based on the data, road crashes could happen because of distracted driver,
speeding driving, and road condition.

Body
1. Topic sentence : Distracted driver become the largest factor that leads cause of car accidents
Supporting sentence : - The drunk driver is under influenced by usually an alcohol after
having a party and forced to drive
- Wrong-way driving happened because of the driver not focused on
the road
- Something that accidentally showed up like animal on animal
crossing makes the driver terrified
2. Topic sentence : Speeding driving can caused road crashes because the driver is running late
Supporting sentence : - Because of running out of time, the driver usually do
 Running the red lights
 Running from the closing railroad barrier
 and not following the road sign
3. Topic sentence: Road condition is one of the problem because the driver must be more aware
of their surroundings
Supporting sentence : - The condition such as
 raining  more slippery
 night driving  more darker
 and construction  many construction equipment
Conclusion
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ROAD CRASHES CAUSES

Car accident are fortunately very common in any part of the world. Every year thousands of
lives are taken every year by these horrible car crashes. Because your life can be at risk of you
drive in an unsafe manner, it is so important to drive carefully and follow all traffic laws. As
the driver also have to be aware to surroundings while driving. When you are careful does not
mean that you can assure that all other drivers on the road will do the same things. If you are
in a car crash, it may not be your fault, and you should not be held responsible for the damages
caused by the ignorance or mistakes of other drivers. Now based on the data, road crashes could
happen because of distracted driver, speeding driver, and road condition.

One of the largest factors that caused car accidents is distracted driver. Distracted driver
including drunk driver is under influenced by usually an alcohol after having a party. Then they
are forcing themselves to drive back home. They usually crash the tree or the sidewalk. Also,
wrong-way driving is a distracted driver. Because they are not focused on the road. This
accident usually happened in the toll road. The driver wrong to take the turn so they ride back
off to take the other turn. Last thing is usually there are something that accidentally showed up
on the road that we don’t expected before, such as on animal crossing. Animal crossing was
made because avoid the death of an animal or a human from the crashing each other. This
accident usually happened in the forest area where the side of the road is trees and forest that
where the wild animal habitats. The animal that commonly showed up are bear, deer, and other
that life in the forest.

Another factors that can caused the road crashes is speeding driving. This activity is usually
happened because the driver is running late or running out of time. They are like the employees
want to go to their meetings but they don’t have enough time to arrive at the meeting place.
Also, there are many things that people do to catch up the time. Usually they are breaking
through the red light. This thing is very common happened in every country all over the world.
Sometimes happening in the crowded junction where there are a zebra crossing too. Also,
people usually breaking thorough the closing railroad barrier that require people to wait. As a
driver, we have to be patient in this time for their safety. Lastly, people usually not following
the road sign. Following the road sign is very important. The road sign warns us about what
we have to do when we are driving. The sign mentions the speed, the laws, and everything we
need to know when we are driving. Then we can avoid the car crashes.

Last factor of car crashes is the road condition. The road condition is one of the problems,
because the driver must be more aware of their surroundings. The road condition that can be a
problem of the driver, such as when raining on the road. When raining the road is very slippery
that when we drive to fast it can make an accident. In this condition, the visibility was limited
because the raindrops on the windows and the fog also come down. Next, when it was already
night times. People usually already sleepy and tired after the activity they do in the afternoon.
It was already darker on the road too. The driver must be extra aware when driving. Then,
when there was a construction. When there was a construction also there was a bad road
condition. The driver has to slow down their vehicle for not disturb the workers and for safety
too.

To sum up, the car accidents can caused by the human errors. Then the news of death person
can be decreased. However from now the driver have to be more aware and more focused when
driving.