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Griffiths-Final-English101 Essay 1
Griffiths-Final-English101 Essay 1
Heather Griffiths
Professor Granillo
English 101
19 January 2020
Although death is a solemn topic often found in many pathos appeals, creators haven’t
shied away from using this topic and other sensitive topics to create appeals to emotion. Hanif
Abdurraqib has used musicians and their stories to create pathos appeals. Abdurraqib is an
African American poet who has mastered the use of rhetoric appeals like ethos and pathos in his
book “They Can’t Kill Us Until They Kill Us”, a collection of essays written about different
Springsteen’s album, The River, and how Abdurraqib’s view of this album has changed. “A
Night in Bruce Springsteen’s America” focuses on Abdurraqib’s use of ethos and pathos to
incorporate the themes of death and work in order to convey his new interpretation of The River;
the difference in this interpretation on the River is a motivation for Abdurraqib to explore the
differences in the lives of African Americans and white Americans and this difference is what
Abdurraqib was motivated to write this essay in order to express his new interpretation on
The River and how this interpretation relates to the lives of African Americans. He begins
writing about his first interpretation of the album, which he thought to be about living to “the
best of your ability before the clock runs out” (Abdurraqib 18). It is only after Abdurraqib
realizes the different struggles that African Americans have with death that he comes up with a
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new interpretation of the album. It includes the perspective of the writer, who wrote it,
understanding “that he was going to live for a long time” (Abdurraqib 20). Most African
Americans, as Abdurraqib realizes, do not have this optimistic perspective on their own lives.
The difference between most white Americans’ and most African Americans’ outlooks on death
and experience with work allows Abdurraqib to see the inherent optimism found in white
America’s outlook, which is portrayed on The River. Abdurraqib’s use of ethos throughout this
Abdurraqib uses ethos to describe how The River and African American’s views on death
are different. Ethos is a rhetoric appeal that is used to increase an author’s credibility. As an
African American himself, Abdurraqib understands their concerns about being killed by the
police. One example of this sad tragedy is of Michael Brown’s death by a white police officer. In
this essay, Abdurraqib describes visiting Brown’s memorial and feeling “a sadness and rage that
had become a very real part of [his] life” (Abdurraqib 18). His own experiences in life allow him
to better understand this perspective about death. He has learned, whether consciously or
unconsciously, from his parents, the community around him, and from his own experiences. This
allows his audience to recognize his credibility on the issue, not only because he himself is
African American, but also because of how carefully he addresses African Americans’
perspectives. At the Springsteen concert, Abdurraqib notices that “the only other black people
[he] saw were performing labor in some capacity” (Abdurraqib 19). This would have been
ignored by many others. Abdurraqib addresses it instead of copying how the others reacted.
River. Abdurraqib uses ethos to detail another theme found within this essay.
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Abdurraqib uses ethos to articulate the theme of work throughout this essay, including the
hardships African Americans experience while working. Abdurraqib describes the difference
between the River’s portrayal of romantic work and work that is done for survival. He
“[understands] being black in America, and [he understands] being poor in America”
(Abdurraqib 20). Most white Americans would have romanticized work, as they didn’t live from
paycheck to paycheck like many African Americans did. Abdurraqib recognizes this, as he
understands what it is like to be poor, a situation that many African Americans relate to. He is
also able to understand the differences between these two perspectives. He explains how “hard,
beautiful, romantic work is a dream sold a lot easier by someone who currently knows where
their next meal will come from” (Abdurraqib 20). Abdurraqib understands how easy it is for
others to romanticize work. Throughout this essay, he is not only able to elaborate on his own
perspective, but also is able to skillfully explain the opposite view. Abdurraqib’s use of rhetoric
appeals stretches to include the use of pathos in “A Night in Bruce Springsteen’s America”.
Abdurraqib uses pathos, another rhetoric appeal, in order to describe how death is
incorporated into The River and the opposing views between African Americans and white
Americans. Pathos is a rhetoric appeal that authors use to evoke emotion in their audiences in
order to persuade them to agree or disagree with their perspective. Abdurraqib consistently does
not shy away from using pathos to leave a mark on his readers. He bluntly describes how the
River is about “a specific type of optimism [about living for a long time]-one not afforded to
everyone who listens to it” (Abdurraqib 20). Not everyone believes that they will be able to live
for a long time, especially those that are in lower-socioeconomic classes. This concept especially
applied to African Americans in 2016, as they were being murdered by police officers. Many
began to fear the police as a result, and did not carry this optimism about living in themselves
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and for their families. This effective use of pathos to capture the uncertainty and fear of death in
African Americans forces readers to look at The River the way Abdurraqib does.
Abdurraqib uses pathos to explain his views on the white America’s romanticization of
work. While attending a Bruce Springsteen concert, Abdurraqib notices “a young black man….
sitting on a step, covered in swear, and rubbing his right ankle. A man… yelled at him to move”
(Abdurraqib 20). This description of the African American, trying to rest after vending at the
concert, is meant to evoke pity for the African American man, and perhaps a little anger at the
man yelling at him. It allows Abdurraqib’s readers to understand why many African Americans
do not romanticize their work. It may be because of the unfair treatment, blatant racism, or
perhaps the low pay, that creates animosity towards their own workplaces. Most of white
America, however, can easily avoid the racist comments or unfair wages that many African
Americans have, giving them the opportunity to love and begin to romanticize their work, with
the help of Springsteen’s album’s messages depicting how great work can be. Abdurraqib once
again clearly understands and communicates these two perspectives on work into this essay.
differences between African Americans’ experiences with work and death as seen by his own
experiences and white Americans’ experiences as seen by the songs in Bruce Springsteen’s The
River. Abdurraqib’s combination of ethos and pathos in order to further describe this relationship
and the themes of work and death has elevated his essay. This essay acts as yet another bridge
Works Cited
Abdurraqib, Hanif. “A Night in Bruce Springsteen’s America.” They Can’t Kill Us Until They