Where am I

going?

ESSAY
 THESIS STATEMENT
 a summarized, short and snappy idea
which provides the reader an exact
point of argument, analysis, opinion or
reason to envisage the paper
 THESIS STATEMENT

-main idea of your essay

 THESIS STATEMENT

-one sentence that provides the

controlling idea
 THESIS STATEMENT

- umbrella that covers all the

main points of your research
paper
 Characteristics of a
Strong Thesis Statement

1. takes a stand
2. justifies discussion
3. expresses one main idea
4. specific
 SPECIFIC TOPIC
+ SPECIFIC CLAIM
------------------------
THESIS STATEMENT
 Specific Topic: The use of
graphic videos in TV news
programs

+ Specific Claim: can have

a negative effect
Thesis= The use of graphic videos in TV
news programs can have a negative effect
on young viewers

Thesis= TV news programs that show

graphic videos affect young viewers in a
negative way
Fact:
The population of the Philippines is 80
million.

Thesis:
The alarming rate of increase of population
of the Philippines threatens the food
supply of the country.
A. Sixty-five percent of Filipino
teenagers are into online gaming.

B. Online game addiction develops

the decision making skills of
players.
 Choose the thesis statement.
A. Over four thousand call centers have
been established since year 2001.

B. Call Center industry contributes to

the improvement in the Philippine
Economy.
 Choose the thesis statement.
A. The worsening conditions of the
ozone layer causes the extreme
conditions of the weather in the
Philippines.

B. At least ten provinces from the

Visayan region were greatly affected
by drought this year.
Let us try to make a thesis statement
from these factual statements.
 Boracay is a tourist destination in the
Philippines.

 Many students are taking up BS Information

Technology.

 Social Networking sites connects people,

friends, and, families.
Seatwork
Choose two from the following factual statements. Make a
thesis statement based on the factual statement.
1. Social Networking sites helps people be connected to
one another.
2. College students are dropping out of school.
3. FEU-EAC students are technology oriented individuals.
4. The average teenagers spend at least an hour in social
networking sites.
5. The noontime show “Eat Bulaga” has been a part of the
Filipino culture.
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Plata, S. et.al. (2006). Research: Process and Product
Workbook. Laguna: Trailblazer Publications.
Plata, S. et.al. (2006). Keys to Critical Reading and Writing 1:
English Proficiency and Personal Leadership Workbook for
College Success (2nd ed.). Laguna: Trailblazer Publications.
Plata, S., Mirador, J.F., Dayag, D. T. , and Chua, H. (2002).
Thinking and Writing Research: A Complete Guide To
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