fran Binh Toes ide 4ggao4core ‘Topic: Parents should have no control over the lives of their children once they tum 16. OUTLINE Thesis statement: Although there may be mixed opinions about this issue, in my personal belief, parents should permit their children to control their lives once they are over the age of 16. Reason 1: Children have fully developed in physical health, ~ Due to puberty. - Changes in appearance. ~ Having the ability to protect themselves, | = [an outside source] Reason 2: Children have changes in psychology. = Changes in their thoughts. - Complex psychology that parents could not understand. = Being more sensitive, > parents should not intervene much. - [an outside source] Reason 3: Children want to define themselves. - Feeling of being adults - Strange behaviour. = Not wanting to be controlléd. Ze ~ [am outside source] Reason 4: Children have the right to live their lives. ~ Itis stated in law. - Many psychologists believe that. . Vv - [an outside source] Counter argument: Controlling children leads them to success. - Parents want their children to live good lives. Vv - It is said that sucessful children have their parents expect highly on them and manage them toward that goal. {an outside source] - Which means parents control their children in some ways to make them succeed. - Itis partly correct. - However, those expectations and management of parents could possibly make their children stressed -> suicide — due to statistics... [an outside source] opt! They Lntedy Grewal bo madery te (oll pope You chosld crmpore Khe yaxrraity 04 vecallars .