● 2) Losing viola at 28

● 2) cello solo lining up with English horn (24, 26)

● 3) Trombones tune at 24
● 14-29 more bass notes (dotted halfs) - bring out chromatic changes downward
● 4) cello solo more vibrato on all C#s, please
● 5) MUCH slower bell tree
● 6) Celeste is important, can't be heard -
● 7) viola solo @ 41 needs to louder
● 8a - more viola and cello at 30
● 9 trombones clean up 5 - very muddy
● Harp and strings line up at 31
● Bass and Bassoons @ 22 match trombones @ 11
● Strings aren't clean @ 41 and other stacatto bits
● Snare right @ 56???
● Basses, bassons, cellos at 72 - crisper sol-do s
● 10) strings are anticipating beat 2, still coming in earlier than clarinets
● 11) horn at 22?
● DOLCE strings at 116
● 12) trumpets generally very strident, should probably be more 'uneasily dolce', not 'bright
as the sun'
● Bass note at 19?
● Violins, don't rush into the eighths at 38/68
● 12b - great grittiness on the low c#
● 12c - louder pizz on bass
● More presence on harp 16ths
● 14 recorder at 38?
● Judge and Todd with recorder private session?
● 16A) bell tree at 11? Very important - it's taking us into Todd's world
● Bass clarinet Fb 77 and 79??
● 17 - 16 needs to start ferocious - it took a bar or two to get there
● More separation/accent on the three 16ths going into 33
● Brass beat 3 at 45 - crisp and together
● Viola, cello, and bassoon needs more grittiness at 67, 69, and 71
● 18 just a bit more clarinets at 7
● Bass please play at 85?
● Any time there's the "and two three" motif, I can't hear the and of one at all (mm 85, 87,
89, etc.)
● Trombone 1 and 2 @ 356? Maybe horn??
● harp borderline too loud