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Argumentative Essay Outline - Food Security Bansi Feedback
Argumentative Essay Outline - Food Security Bansi Feedback
Author Note
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Prepared by Bansi Dhirendra Joshi, taught by Marianne Kettlewell, PMAS095, Royal Roads
Introduction #1:
Hook:
Can Community Gardening and Technology overcome essential requirements for food security?
Connecting/general Info:
the good/healthy/adequate nutritional status of the individual household member that is the
ultimate focus, and the risk of that adequate status not being achieved or becoming undermined.
Thesis:
requirements is significant to achieve food security; however, problems with food distribution
and Climate Change act as the biggest hindrances to eliminate hunger today.
Introduction #2:
Background Information
1. The League of Nations finally, however, agreed that increasing food production to meet
human needs would bring prosperity to agriculture, which would overflow into the
industry and bring the needed expansion of the world economy through what was
described as the “marriage of health and agriculture”. (Boyd Orr, 1966, p. 119) and (D.
2. During the 1930’s, and following World War one, world affairs were being dealt with by
Add something here about how food security became a problem – which is the main focus
of your essay
Claim/Topic Sentence: remember – “Climate Change” is your first point in your thesis –
you might be better off to choose a specific problem like “soil degradation due to climate
1. Crop productivity, soil fertility, and fertilizers utility significantly contribute to ensuring
food security.
2. Also, inefficient and mismanaged usage of resources is the biggest challenge to make
India a food secured place. (this can be part of the above sentence)
1. Efficient management of soil health plays a vital role in better agricultural production.
2. The significance of usage of different micronutrient like phosphorus, urea and many
more nutrients are required for better soil dynamics. (Archana, Nandish, Savalagi &
Alagawadi, 2013).
3. Remember to add information here about the problem that lead to poor soil and food
Agricultural requirement being the key aspect of food security, its inefficient and
mismanaged usage can lead to food insecurity; however, significant use of varied micronutrient
Claim/Topic Sentence:
1. Climate change affects agriculture and food production directly through changes in agro-
ecological conditions.
2. It also impacts indirectly by affecting the growth and distribution of incomes, and thus
greenhouse gases will bring changes in land suitability and crop yields. (Schmidhuber, &
Tubiello, 2007)
to agriculture: the areas potentially suitable for cropping will expand, the length of the
growing period will increase, and crop yields may rise. (Schmidhuber, & Tubiello, 2007)
Deviation in global and regional weather conditions bringing greater fluctuations in crop
yields and local food supplies they can also adversely affect the stability of food supplies and
Claim/Topic Sentence: group these two ideas under one umbrella: poor food management
1. There are several measures like Export Tax, Minimum Export Price (MEP) etc. which
arrangements from the private and offshore bank and stock exchanges those are driving
1. There are several measures like Export Tax, Minimum Export Price (MEP) etc. which
have the effects of reducing the flow of exports. Remember your citation here
arrangements from the private and offshore bank and stock exchanges those are driving
Export is the biggest contributor to food security. But, few measures like taxes and MEP
are hindrances; however, government policies can boost up the economic activity like Argentina
and Chile.
Counter Argument 1: this counter argument should argue against the importance of
establishing food security (re-visit your thesis – making it stronger will help)
land while producing fruit, vegetables, and/or plants grown for their attractive
community gardening overcome these barriers to meet the food security need. (Furness &
Refutation 1:
2. As past studies have observed, simply willing community buy-in and creating spaces for
urban agriculture to happen does not necessarily lead to sustainable, successful local food
Counter Argument 2:
1. There are many advantages confederated with technologies in every sphere of life.
2. We can enhance the use of technology for predicting weather and concluding the best
climate of the year for agriculture. This would, in turn, enhance the land productivity.
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Refutation 2:
1. Technology can be useful for predicting weather and enhancing land productivity;
however, this requires huge investment for research and electronic devices.
2. Many agricultural lands are in remote areas and do not have adequate connectivity and
Conclusion #1:
Restate Thesis:
Food distribution and Climate changes are the major contributors to food insecurity, with
the Agricultural requirement being the prime cause of food security across the globe.
(implications/Significance):
1. Food insecurity – often rooted in poverty – decreases the ability of countries to develop
2. Expensive practices like Community Gardening and use of Advanced Technology can
enhance land productivity and easy access to food. But, this cannot be a long-term and
Conclusion #2:
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Recommendations:
Traditional farming activities should be focused on and more government policies should
be introduced to enhance the farmer’s knowledge and tax policies to encourage export activity.
References
Pandey, A. (2015). Food Security in India and States: key challenges and policy option. Journal
Archana, MS. Nandish MS, Savalagi VP, Alagawadi AR (2013) Characterization of potassium
Schmidhuber, J., & Tubiello, F. N. (2007). Global food security under climate
Furness, W., & Gallaher, C. (2018). Food access, food security and community gardens in
doi: 10.1177/1474474008094315
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Fischer, G., Shah, M., & van Velthuizen, H. (2002). Climate Change and Agricultural
Laxenburg, Austria
http://www.fao.org/economics/est/publications/en/