Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you to request a route change with the 11B bus. As we all know there is an ongoing

construction of the new flyover in the [Thiyagarajanagar railway gate] area. Commented [p1]: Avoid brackets
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The construction work would last for another 6 months I suppose. Today the bus service is stopped Commented [p3]: six
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before the railway gate, and this causes a lot of trouble for the general public and the school students.
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The people have to cross the construction area to reach other side, which is also dangerous in terms of Commented [p6]: They
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safety.

Instead I request your bus service to take the cross cut road and reach the bus stand. This would be Commented [p8]: ,

helpful for all the people living there, and for the school students who commute to this area. A slight

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paying a lot for them. I request you to take immediate actions required, for bus to reach until the bus Commented [p10]: action
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stand.

Thank you for your attention to this matter. Commented [p12]: Always write a closing paragraph

Regards, Commented [p13]: Yours faithfully,

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better, I prefer restaurant food for its versatility and scale-up need. Let’s discuss in detail about how
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Cities nowadays are becoming more multicultural because of the varied job allocation. This adds up
flavor to our life, opens up new opportunities to taste different variety of foods. To name a few types of
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During small family function or a party hosted in home, I usually order food in restaurant rather than
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the job to him and stay cool.

So I reinforce saying that restaurant food is better for its variety and scale-up needs, so I can never Commented [p24]: ,
confine myself to homemade foods. Nowadays there are restaurants coming up with a concept of see Commented [p25]: as
through kitchen, no longer one have to doubt on the cleanliness. Enjoy variety food and thrill your taste Commented [p26]: ,
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