Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for

children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members
such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views
and give your opinion.

Below there are two essays. One of them received a very high band score and
one of them did not. Read them and think about which one is good, which one
needs to improve and why.

I will post tomorrow with the answers and provide some feedback on both
examples.

Essay 1

Some argue that when parents are at work, close relations provide the best
care to young children, while others believe day care centres offer a better
service. It is agreed that while some relatives take care of youngsters
extremely well, childcare professionals offer a better overall service. This
essay will first discuss the merits of family members looking after ‘pre-
schoolers’, secondly an analysis of childcare centres’ services, followed by a
reasoned conclusion.

Many parents in full-time employment prefer to leave their young ones with
grandparents and siblings when they are at work. This is often a trust issue, as
the parents feel their child will be safer with someone from within the family
nucleus. For example, a recent study showed that 62% of working mothers
prefer a member of the immediate family to provide care when they are work.
However, most kin are not trained childcare professionals and may not have
the skills required to fully nurture a child.

Daycare centres may be a better option due to the fact that most of their staff
are highly skilled professionals. Many of their staff are highly trained and have
diplomas in child development. For instance, if you want a job in a Montessori
school, they will insist that you are fully qualified, with many of their staff
having degrees in early years development. In spite of this, there have been
recent high profile cases of abuse within these establishments which makes
some parents wary.

In summary, although there are some issues involving trust, as long as

parents vet each school properly, the high level of service provided by daycare
professionals trumps that of unqualified family members.

Essay 2

Nowadays, childcare centres are a very hot topic and many parents are talking
about their controversial issue. It is without precedence that so many mums
and dads are now in the global working marker, caused in part by the
remarkable phenomena of globalization that creeps in to society with ever
more vigilance day by day.

I think that it is a crying shame that so many loving mothers and fathers have
to leave their baby with a childcare centre. The baby will pine and crave for the
affections of its mother and this may lead to the baby have developmental
issues, such as learning and behavioral difficulties further down the line in
later life. Moreover, these centres have been shown to be shoddy operators
with many incidences of malpractices, such as neglect and physical and
mental abuse damaging forever the true spirit of the infant.

So what about the grandparents? Many grandparents look forward to the day
they can relax and put their feet up without the distraction of unruly children.
However, many grandparents are totally committed to the welfare of their
grandchildren and love to see their loved ones, lighting up their sense of
personality in an unambiguous fashion.

In conclusion, it is no wonder how many parents have to leave their children at

home while they try to pay off mortgages and credit card bills brought about
by the current geo-political set up and burgeoning financial system of
developing countries. I for one will stay at home with my kids and will
therefore not require the service of professionals or next of kin.