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Persuasive Essay Final Draft
Persuasive Essay Final Draft
Savannah Wead
Prof. Stalbird
English 1201-507
22 April 2020
It’s test day! Number two pencils sharp and ready to go. Erasers are brand new.
Calculator is all charged up. For four whole hours focus cannot be broken, not even for a second.
There is not enough time. Try not to fall asleep while test proctors read directions like they are
robots. Approximately 3,330,496 students will sit down and take either the SAT or the ACT
every year. These students do their best at an exam that is designed for them to fail. The average
ACT score in 2019 was a 20.7. On regular tests taken in the classroom, that score would equate
to 49 percent. That is considered failing. When it comes to figuring out how much students are
learning in high school and how they will do in college, the SAT and ACT are not good
indicators, we should gauge students’ readiness for college with things like grades and
extracurricular activities.
Tests like the SAT and ACT have been around for a very long time. The first time the
SAT was administered was in 1926, and the first time the ACT was used was in 1959. They are
used to determine how well students will do in college. One number on one test decides whether
a student can get into their dream school or not. Students everywhere spend countless hours
studying for a make-or-break test that is not even based on things they have been learning all
year. Often though, the only way to really prepare is to purchase expensive test prep tools. The
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evaluations are timed multiple-choice tests that cover math, reading, language, science, and
When it comes to calculating how much information students are learning in high school
SAT and ACT should not be the first choice. These tests were not made based on the curriculum
different students attending different high schools are learning. Catherine Gewertz in, “Study:
Don’t Use ACT, SAT to Gauge School Achievement: States Urges to Keep Standards Tests”
says, schools should not use the SAT and ACT because it does not match the curriculum in
schools. This could confuse students. The reason for this is because these tests were not made to
test students' knowledge; they were designed to see how well they will perform in college (1).
Gewertz also states in, “Study: Don’t Use ACT, SAT to Gauge School Achievement: States
Urges to Keep Standards Tests”, “Less than half of the questions in English/language arts, and
less than half of the items in math, were judged to be aligned to the high school expectations in
the common core” (1). Every school in every state has different curriculum and different
resources being used to teach this curriculum, therefore students from different schools taking
the same test is not a fair or accurate way to evaluate their knowledge. Not everyone everywhere
has access to the same resources. Unfortunately, some high schools are better than others.
Students should not be punished for that. Where a student goes to school and how well the
College admissions tests have a racist background. Historically, the SAT, and other tests
like it, were one more hurdle keeping minorities from advanced education and, therefore,
economic advancement. Molly Wilde in, “The Racist History of the SAT” says that when
segregation in schools was ruled unconstitutional in 1954 some colleges used pricey college
admissions tests to keep their schools mostly white. This issue remains today. Hartocoolis in,
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“University of California is Sued Over use of SAT and ACT in Admissions” talks about in 2019,
“California has struggled to maintain diversity at the top level of its university system since
voters adopted a ban on affirmative action in 1996. The freshman class systemwide this year is
American” (1). Many colleges and universities still struggle with increasing diversity on
campuses. Tests like SAT and ACT are part of the issue. Test scores for minorities are lower.
Many students coming from socioeconomic backgrounds cannot afford expensive prep classes.
Kim Essler in, “Lawsuit Claims SAT And ACT Are Biased-Here's What Research Says.”
Stereotype plays a role in test scores. Stereotypes allow people to go into these tests already
believing they are going to fail (1). Doing well on a test that you already think you are going to
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fail becomes very difficult. Not only is it difficult, but it is not fair.
Fig. 1. Shows composite ACT scores organized by race in 2017 (Jaschik 1).
Not only does race affect your test scores. Gender is also a factor in how well students score.
Kim Essler in, “Lawsuit Claims SAT and ACT Are Biased-Here's What Research Says.” says,
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female students are performing better in the classroom. Their grades tend to be higher than the
males. However, males are getting higher scores on college admissions tests (1). Why is this? A
lot of it again, comes from stereotypes. An example of a negative stereotype a female would face
going into a college entrance exam would be that boys are smarter than girls. It has also been
said that the passages being read during the test appeal more to males. Essler states in “Lawsuit
Claims SAT and ACT Are Biased-Here's What Research Says.”, “Others have suggested that a
positive attitude regarding competition favors male students taking the test” (1). Performing well
The most obvious issue with college admission tests is the expensive test prep that goes
along with the test. The easiest and most effective way to ace your test is to be tutored by the test
makers themselves. Many people and businesses have profited off making students pay for test
prep. This becomes very expensive, and some families cannot afford it. Students’ test scores
should not be punished based on family income. Hartocollis tells a story of Kawita Smith. He
went to school in Los Angeles and dreamed of attending U.C.L.A. or Berkley. Because of his
SAT score, he had to change plans and only apply to test optional schools. Suddenly it seemed
his 3.56 weighted GPA did not matter. All his hard work went to waste. Smith had overcome
many obstacles in his life. Kawita has overcome being raped, being homeless, and the death of
his brother. All this hard work he had put in all his four years of high school should mean
something. People like Kawita Smith work so hard just to get shut down when an irrelevant test
There have even been lawsuits filed against colleges because of the biased nature of these
college admission tests. In 2019 the University of California was sued because they used SAT
and ACT scores in admissions. A school in California that’s population is mainly black, and
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Hispanic sued The University of California in order to get them to stop using standardized tests
in admissions. The group was arguing that the test is biased towards minorities. Changing the
school’s application system to “test optional” was not enough for this group. They fought to get
The lawsuit accusing the SAT and ACT of being biased is not the only suspicious thing
that has been brought to the public’s attention. In March of 2019 there were issues with students
cheating on their college admissions test. Valerie Strauss in, “Is it Finally Time to Get Rid of the
SAT and ACT College Admissions Tests?” says, “As part of an investigation they called
Operation Varsity Blues, federal prosecutors last week charges some of 50 people, including
famous Hollywood actresses and wealthy financiers. The alleged schemes included hiring
imposters to take SAT and ACT exams or rigging the test by asking for additional time to take it
even when that wasn’t necessary” (1). Once again people with money can rig the system, while
those without are kept outside of the system looking in. This is not the only time people have
been caught cheating on the exams. Strauss says in “Is it Finally Time to Get Rid of the SAT and
ACT College Admissions Tests?”, “As high-profile as Varsity Blues is, it is just the latest issue
facing the College Board, which owns the SAT, and ACT Inc.- including repeated cheating
scandals and fundamental questions about the value of the scores. Now, the testing giants find
themselves again defending the integrity of their exams” (1). These instances are just more
examples of how wealth can get you ahead when it comes to taking the SAT and ACT. In
Valerie Strauss’s article, “Is it Finally Time to Get Rid of the SAT and ACT College Admissions
Tests?”, she tells how the people involved in Varsity Blues were able to cheat, “Some of those
charged in Varsity Blues were alleged to have engaged in at least four different test-cheating
techniques. Those alleged schemes included hiring impersonators to take the exams; making
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phony “disability” claims to gain test-taking time; paying to change wrong answers or fill in
missing responses’ and bribing proctors and test-site supervisors to ignore these illegal acts” (1).
These accusations are serious and make the organizations look very unreliable.
Even with all these clear issues with tests like the SAT and ACT some still believe
getting rid of them all together is a mistake. The Editorial Board in, “Getting Rid of SAT and
ACT Testing is a Mistake” says, “Critics of testing claim that high school curricular performance
is the best predictor of later success” (1). They agree that high school grades should play a part in
college admissions, but test scores are important too. This is one benefit of standardized testing;
it is the same everywhere. A spokesman from the SAT speaks in Hartocollis’s, “University of
California Is Sued Over Use of SAT and ACT in Admissions” and says, “It had made a
concerted effort to remove bias from the test that the test had evolved form an aptitude test
nearly a century ago to a test of “skills and concepts” necessary for college work” (1). The
makers of college admissions tests claim they have fixed the kinks and now, tests are fair. They
claim that the issue is not in the test. The problem we need to focus on is the school systems.
People who believe in standardized testing think that instead of getting rid of tests we should
change how schools across the world run. They want to change the fact that some schools are
better than others. If all schools provided the same curriculum and resources, giving the same
test everywhere would not be an issue. Therefore, big companies like the SAT and ACT would
continue making money off students paying for test prep and paying to take the tests.
Yes, the SAT and ACT do a good job at being standardized. However, it is not fair to test
all students the same. Valerie Strauss in, “Is it Finally Time to Get Rid of the SAT and ACT
College Admissions Tests?” says, “In 2017, the International Association for College
Admissions Counseling, which represents nearly 3,000 school counselors in 100 countries,
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issued a statement saying it had lost confidence in the College Board and ACT” (1). That is a
serious accusation coming from a large organization. If they cannot trust the ACT, how should
the public? Standardized tests test every child from every different background in the same way.
Instead of taking wealth, race, gender, lifestyle, and quality of education into consideration, they
just pass the same test out to everyone who walks in. Just because one child comes from a
different background does not mean they should be punished when it comes to applying to
colleges and universities. When all school systems are the same in quality, is when the SAT and
ACT could be used to evaluate the knowledge of children. Until then, the tests should not be
allowed in any high school, college, or university. Now that these tests have been a normality for
so long, we have allowed them to expose all the issues in our school systems. Now that all the
issues have been exposed, we no longer need the tests. Getting rid of biased test scores could
So, what can be done to change how the higher education system works? First, we could
simply get rid of tests all together. There are plenty of other ways to predict how a student will
perform in college. One being their grades. Even though the curriculum is different at every
school, grade point average is still beneficial. Grades help to tell us about a student work ethic.
You cannot have good grades without putting in at least a little bit of work. Another thing that
would tell a lot about a student is how much they participate in extracurricular activities or
volunteer. If a student can juggle grades, sports, clubs, and volunteer work, college is the perfect
place for them. Finally, a student’s ability to overcome hardships in their life could tell a lot
about them. Instead of using test scores to judge a person’s work ethic, colleges could use all
three of these things to help gauge whether a student is right for their college. ABC states in
“Could SAT and ACT Scored Become a Thing of the Past?”, that extracurricular activities,
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leadership roles, and overcoming obstacles show how you will perform in a college setting (1).
Using these tools rather than an unfair test would be optimum. Claudio Sanchez in, “Colleges
That Ditch the SAT and ACT Can Enhance Diversity” says, “Scores on those tests are of little
value in predicting students’ performance in college.” And, “Our experience is actually that
students’ high school performance predicts college performance extremely well” (1). We do not
Another way we could help eliminate the unfairness of college admissions tests is by
making all colleges and universities test optional. This would make it so, when applying for
colleges, people would not have to include an SAT or ACT score on their application, but they
could if they wanted to. So, if a student feels that their test score will benefit them, they can add
it to their application. This is not a perfect solution, but it would make it, so kids are not ruled out
because of their test score. This also makes it so more students would apply to higher education
programs. If they are not discouraged by test scores, they will apply. Test-optional schools have
more applications and more diversity! Test-optional could become the new normal. Already,
more than 1,000 colleges and universities have changed their ways. This includes the University
Over Use of SAT and ACT in Admissions”, “This fall it (Chicago) reported that as a result of the
new policy, along with more financial aid, outreach and mentoring, the entering class of 2019-
2020 had 24 percent more first-generation and low-income students and 56 percent more rural
students that the previous year. About 10 percent of the applicants did not submit test scores, a
spokesman said” (1). This proves that when getting rid of test scores and instead giving students
Getting rid of college admissions tests completely would be ideal. Not only are they not
testing students on the curriculum that teachers have been teaching them for years, but they are
causing issues with a lack of diversity in colleges. Diversity in colleges is a serious issue, and it
is about time it is fixed. Everyone deserves a chance to get into their dream school. A biased test
should not be what gets in the way of that. Many colleges and universities are starting to change
their ways. It is time the SAT and ACT become a thing of the past.
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